
Signing in Shushan for Three Thousand Years, Leaving Land Swordsman
About This Novel
Zhao Fan traveled through time and became the young master of Shu Mountain, but he broke into the forbidden area and accidentally injured a disciple with the purple and green swords, so he was imprisoned and thrown into the Demon Locking Tower without being able to stand up. Zhao Fan was not depressed, however. With the sign-in system, he silently signed in in the Demon Locking Tower to become stronger! "Ding, if you successfully sign in in front of the Demon Locking Tower, you will be rewarded with an innate sword body..." "Ding, if you successfully sign in in front of the Demon Locking Tower, you will be rewarded with the Peiyuan Pill..."...
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Official(47)Scraped 4d ago
A very childish novel
I promised to practice quietly, but I always act cute everywhere. Everyone knows that there is a hidden boss in the sect, but various villains jump out and kill them without thinking. It feels like the author treats all readers as children, but he is childish and ignorant and pretends to be cute. From time to time, he even goes up to the sky and stands shoulder to shoulder with the sun...
The author's novel is more than 80% similar to another novel I have read. I don't know whether you plagiarized the other person or the other person plagiarized your work. Anyway, one of you must have plagiarized the content of the other person's novel.
There's a problem, it's poisonous
The protagonist was depleted at the golden elixir stage, and the toxins in his body should have been detoxified a long time ago. Why is it that the protagonist now has detoxification after time travel, and behaves as if it is the first time to detoxify? This can be thought that the more detoxification, the better, but then another person signs in for the best flying sword, and then says that the swordsmanship is finally perfect. Your swordsmanship proficiency is actually related to the quality of the flying sword. This setting...
There's something wrong with your longevity. It takes you decades to reach the next level after practicing. You can only live for 1,000 years, which is too little.
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It's like you, a person who graduated from college, were reborn as a child and went to elementary school with the children. Then all the courses in elementary school can be completed in one year at most. However, you still attend classes with other children, but your grades are better than theirs. This is very abnormal, and it is like a novel that is just trying to make up the number of chapters in a novel.
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But the spiritual energy of the world will recover later. Even so, everyone else will practice step by step, and it is impossible for many powerful high-level monks to appear all at once. However, the master can use the resources signed in by the system to quickly upgrade to a high-level monk. Is this normal? Otherwise, if your protagonist has resources provided by the system and his training speed is the same as others, then what is the use of your system?
I was really speechless. Tmd the protagonist recovered without any problem after being deposed. The plot behind the tm is basically that the junior sister comes to deliver food, and then his relatives come to the protagonist for help because they are not strong enough (these people are often people who are stronger than the sect.). After the protagonist saves, there are always relatives who are killed, and the cycle continues like this. It really made me feel sick when I saw it. The important thing is that every sect that comes to fight Shushantmd has learned its lessons from the past and used them as examples. I am still complacent about how powerful my sect is. It's true that the villains are all imbeciles with no brains. If they can't beat them, they call the ancestors to come. The ancestors will either die or become slaves. (I feel that I cannot speak for readers who love reading novels, so if you don't like it, don't comment)
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But this novel is abnormal. The aura has only been restored for a few months or a few years. The protagonist has a system and aura but does not improve his cultivation. Instead, everyone else has become a high-level monk. As a result, when the protagonist goes out, all he encounters are high-level monks. Author, is the system you equipped the protagonist useful?
I don't even know how the rating reached 8.0. Did you brush it up?
The IQ of the characters in the novel is linked to the author, so there is no way to ask the protagonist to have a higher IQ.
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Official(47)Scraped 4d ago
A very childish novel
I promised to practice quietly, but I always act cute everywhere. Everyone knows that there is a hidden boss in the sect, but various villains jump out and kill them without thinking. It feels like the author treats all readers as children, but he is childish and ignorant and pretends to be cute. From time to time, he even goes up to the sky and stands shoulder to shoulder with the sun...
The author's novel is more than 80% similar to another novel I have read. I don't know whether you plagiarized the other person or the other person plagiarized your work. Anyway, one of you must have plagiarized the content of the other person's novel.
There's a problem, it's poisonous
The protagonist was depleted at the golden elixir stage, and the toxins in his body should have been detoxified a long time ago. Why is it that the protagonist now has detoxification after time travel, and behaves as if it is the first time to detoxify? This can be thought that the more detoxification, the better, but then another person signs in for the best flying sword, and then says that the swordsmanship is finally perfect. Your swordsmanship proficiency is actually related to the quality of the flying sword. This setting...
There's something wrong with your longevity. It takes you decades to reach the next level after practicing. You can only live for 1,000 years, which is too little.
Ⅱ
It's like you, a person who graduated from college, were reborn as a child and went to elementary school with the children. Then all the courses in elementary school can be completed in one year at most. However, you still attend classes with other children, but your grades are better than theirs. This is very abnormal, and it is like a novel that is just trying to make up the number of chapters in a novel.
11
But the spiritual energy of the world will recover later. Even so, everyone else will practice step by step, and it is impossible for many powerful high-level monks to appear all at once. However, the master can use the resources signed in by the system to quickly upgrade to a high-level monk. Is this normal? Otherwise, if your protagonist has resources provided by the system and his training speed is the same as others, then what is the use of your system?
I was really speechless. Tmd the protagonist recovered without any problem after being deposed. The plot behind the tm is basically that the junior sister comes to deliver food, and then his relatives come to the protagonist for help because they are not strong enough (these people are often people who are stronger than the sect.). After the protagonist saves, there are always relatives who are killed, and the cycle continues like this. It really made me feel sick when I saw it. The important thing is that every sect that comes to fight Shushantmd has learned its lessons from the past and used them as examples. I am still complacent about how powerful my sect is. It's true that the villains are all imbeciles with no brains. If they can't beat them, they call the ancestors to come. The ancestors will either die or become slaves. (I feel that I cannot speak for readers who love reading novels, so if you don't like it, don't comment)
11
But this novel is abnormal. The aura has only been restored for a few months or a few years. The protagonist has a system and aura but does not improve his cultivation. Instead, everyone else has become a high-level monk. As a result, when the protagonist goes out, all he encounters are high-level monks. Author, is the system you equipped the protagonist useful?
I don't even know how the rating reached 8.0. Did you brush it up?
The IQ of the characters in the novel is linked to the author, so there is no way to ask the protagonist to have a higher IQ.









