
Douluo: God of War Fengyao, Xiaotian Xingyun
by Instant Noodles Need To Be Added With Intestines
About This Novel
[The heroine Liu Erlong] [Qian Renxue, Dugu Yan, Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing, Shui Bing'er, Shui Yue'er,] [Let's take a look at Yu Xiaogang's different way of death. Live to fight, fight to the death! Feng Yaoyin recalled his childhood and traveled to the world of Douluo Continent. Awakening his martial soul at the age of six, his martial soul is locked by the White Tiger's superpower. Yu Xiaogang: "Erlong, are you really going to abandon me like that woman?" Liu Erlong: "Abandon you? You think too much. An irresponsible man like you is doomed to be alone in his life!" Bibi Dong: "He still has me..."
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Official(447)Scraped 19d ago
The subject matter is good, please give me some suggestions
It is recommended that the heroine be replaced by Zhu Zhuqing, and then a martial soul fusion skill be used to give the super beast the ability to fly when armed. Finally, I got the Shura God's throne.
Finally, it's rare to see a superpower lock
It would be great if the power lock could be converted into other attributes (ice, fire, thunder). Other power locks could also be switched. Since the protagonist has to use Feng Yao as a template, or inherit his power, at least he must inherit his character and fighting style, as well as his passive: God of War (the more he fights, he gets stronger). The super beast is the God of Tiger Roar. Think about what the tiger's moves are? Advantages: speed, strength, powerful tearing ability, as well as durability and explosive power in combat. You can also refer to the roar of the Jedi Lion. Personally speaking, I still prefer fist-to-flesh fighting. After all, I am the number one person under the Nebula Body. One versus four is easy, and the advantage of one versus five is mine🤡 Durability and explosive power. It's better to name it Fighting Spirit Burning. Feng Yao can actually do the powerful tearing ability and claw attack (you can consider it). Feng Yao's strongest ability is his comprehensive fighting ability. Side kicks are used the most, followed by punches. His main passive is too strong. The more times he fights, the more his own supernatural energy is increased. As a reference for soul skills, the comprehensive ultimate move, Madness (attack power speed, continues to increase, you can set a time limit, but it is greatly improved) plus his own passive, God of War (the more times he fights, the more his soul power increases).
The author mentioned in the comment area that the heroine is Zhu Zhuqing. Why did he write in Chapter 105 that Zhu Zhuqing and Dai Mubai perform martial soul fusion skills? The author doesn't know what their martial soul fusion skills are like. Author, are you deliberately here to disgust readers? ↓The author's own words↓
Personally, I feel that Liu Erlong is not suitable to be the protagonist's teacher. If you want to be the God of War, you should become a disciple of Golden Crocodile Douluo. Now, has Liu Erlong ever been able to fight a 60,000- to 100,000-year-old spirit beast? If you want a good spirit ring, she can't help you. You should find a titled Douluo as your backer. Finally, if you want to have a 100,000-year soul ring in the Enshrinement Hall, you will not let anything happen. You need to be a disciple of a soul saint. She can help you in any way without holding you back. Moreover, Liu Erlong only cares about when Yu Xiaogang appears.
The protagonist has to be a dog
He is born with full soul power and creates his own soul skills. He can obviously get a titled Douluo as his teacher, but he insists on being Liu Erlong's dog and being trained as a dog by others. It is really Shrek's excellent tradition. The protagonist is very proud of training this dog.
I'm disgusted by these soul skills. The first soul skill is a sword, and you throw it out. The second soul skill is to use sound waves instead of tiger roars. Let's make a bat-like sound 666👍
I still have some affection for Douluo, so my standard is that you can be offensive, but you can't be embarrassed. I can imagine the author's main plot. After reading the first fifteen chapters, I can find more than 15 books with similar openings in QReading. The description of Tang San looks like Long Aotian, which makes the protagonist even more so. Painting a tiger cannot be an anti-canine.
The cuckold story is a piece of shit. Let's talk about the heroine Kitten again. As a result, he engaged in fusion skills with that pervert again. What do you think? Are these cuckold plots interesting?
I hope the protagonist will not join Shrek Academy to defeat the hypocritical Tang San and steal his opportunity. Personal reasons do not like Tang San. Jade, Xiaogang, Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, these four people can create their own forces or join the worship hall and marry Qian Renxue. Fight until Bibi Dong becomes the Pope and unify the Douluo Continent to bring peace to the people of the world. Don't imitate Tang Dog. Cholera Continent destroys the unification of the world, destroys the killing capital, and lets the evil soul master fall. The soul master harms the people of the mainland.
The subject matter is good, but the author doesn't know how to waste it.
I don't understand why this book has such high ratings. If it weren't for the fact that Wuhun is a superpower lock, I wouldn't have given you two stars. What he wrote was just a humble, humble, greasy, and wretched man. Why did he write about looking down on Tang San? After all, people are devoted to feelings. But the protagonist written by the author is completely trashier than Tang San. I don't know how the author had the nerve to publish a book like this! A good piece of fan fiction is wasted. So speechless. Also, Feng Yao is the God of War. I didn't see the demeanor of a God of War at all. I only saw the story of a man with a white tiger locked in a licking dog beast and tainting the super beast weapon.
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Official(447)Scraped 19d ago
The subject matter is good, please give me some suggestions
It is recommended that the heroine be replaced by Zhu Zhuqing, and then a martial soul fusion skill be used to give the super beast the ability to fly when armed. Finally, I got the Shura God's throne.
Finally, it's rare to see a superpower lock
It would be great if the power lock could be converted into other attributes (ice, fire, thunder). Other power locks could also be switched. Since the protagonist has to use Feng Yao as a template, or inherit his power, at least he must inherit his character and fighting style, as well as his passive: God of War (the more he fights, he gets stronger). The super beast is the God of Tiger Roar. Think about what the tiger's moves are? Advantages: speed, strength, powerful tearing ability, as well as durability and explosive power in combat. You can also refer to the roar of the Jedi Lion. Personally speaking, I still prefer fist-to-flesh fighting. After all, I am the number one person under the Nebula Body. One versus four is easy, and the advantage of one versus five is mine🤡 Durability and explosive power. It's better to name it Fighting Spirit Burning. Feng Yao can actually do the powerful tearing ability and claw attack (you can consider it). Feng Yao's strongest ability is his comprehensive fighting ability. Side kicks are used the most, followed by punches. His main passive is too strong. The more times he fights, the more his own supernatural energy is increased. As a reference for soul skills, the comprehensive ultimate move, Madness (attack power speed, continues to increase, you can set a time limit, but it is greatly improved) plus his own passive, God of War (the more times he fights, the more his soul power increases).
The author mentioned in the comment area that the heroine is Zhu Zhuqing. Why did he write in Chapter 105 that Zhu Zhuqing and Dai Mubai perform martial soul fusion skills? The author doesn't know what their martial soul fusion skills are like. Author, are you deliberately here to disgust readers? ↓The author's own words↓
Personally, I feel that Liu Erlong is not suitable to be the protagonist's teacher. If you want to be the God of War, you should become a disciple of Golden Crocodile Douluo. Now, has Liu Erlong ever been able to fight a 60,000- to 100,000-year-old spirit beast? If you want a good spirit ring, she can't help you. You should find a titled Douluo as your backer. Finally, if you want to have a 100,000-year soul ring in the Enshrinement Hall, you will not let anything happen. You need to be a disciple of a soul saint. She can help you in any way without holding you back. Moreover, Liu Erlong only cares about when Yu Xiaogang appears.
The protagonist has to be a dog
He is born with full soul power and creates his own soul skills. He can obviously get a titled Douluo as his teacher, but he insists on being Liu Erlong's dog and being trained as a dog by others. It is really Shrek's excellent tradition. The protagonist is very proud of training this dog.
I'm disgusted by these soul skills. The first soul skill is a sword, and you throw it out. The second soul skill is to use sound waves instead of tiger roars. Let's make a bat-like sound 666👍
I still have some affection for Douluo, so my standard is that you can be offensive, but you can't be embarrassed. I can imagine the author's main plot. After reading the first fifteen chapters, I can find more than 15 books with similar openings in QReading. The description of Tang San looks like Long Aotian, which makes the protagonist even more so. Painting a tiger cannot be an anti-canine.
The cuckold story is a piece of shit. Let's talk about the heroine Kitten again. As a result, he engaged in fusion skills with that pervert again. What do you think? Are these cuckold plots interesting?
I hope the protagonist will not join Shrek Academy to defeat the hypocritical Tang San and steal his opportunity. Personal reasons do not like Tang San. Jade, Xiaogang, Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, these four people can create their own forces or join the worship hall and marry Qian Renxue. Fight until Bibi Dong becomes the Pope and unify the Douluo Continent to bring peace to the people of the world. Don't imitate Tang Dog. Cholera Continent destroys the unification of the world, destroys the killing capital, and lets the evil soul master fall. The soul master harms the people of the mainland.
The subject matter is good, but the author doesn't know how to waste it.
I don't understand why this book has such high ratings. If it weren't for the fact that Wuhun is a superpower lock, I wouldn't have given you two stars. What he wrote was just a humble, humble, greasy, and wretched man. Why did he write about looking down on Tang San? After all, people are devoted to feelings. But the protagonist written by the author is completely trashier than Tang San. I don't know how the author had the nerve to publish a book like this! A good piece of fan fiction is wasted. So speechless. Also, Feng Yao is the God of War. I didn't see the demeanor of a God of War at all. I only saw the story of a man with a white tiger locked in a licking dog beast and tainting the super beast weapon.






























