Douluo: Modify the Narration and the Plot Begins to Collapse

Douluo: Modify the Narration and the Plot Begins to Collapse

by Coke I Just Bought

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470Kwords212chapters
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About This Novel

[Abstract] + [Funny] + [Crazy] + [Abuse Tang San] + [Master Abuse] + [Martial Soul Emperor Banner (Ten Thousand Souls Banner)] Bai Yu travels through Douluo and awakens the narration system, which can modify the narration to affect the plot. [Plot: Tang San awakens Bluesilver Grass and Clear Sky Hammer] Bai Yu chuckled and changed "grass" to "fart" and "hammer" to "dog". The master fell in love at first sight, this boy Tang San is the disciple given to me by God! [Plot: Yu Xiaogang is going to use the ten core competitive theories of Wuhun to trick you into becoming a disciple] Bai Yu waved his hand and changed "ten" into "ten thousand". After that, everyone at Notting College didn't see the master for three months. It was said that the master had gone bald in order to compile the remaining 9990 theories. [Plot: Tang San is preparing to recognize Xiao Wu as the boss in Qishe] Bai Yu was so heartbroken that he changed "big" to "mom". Tang San suddenly knelt down and cried bitterly, shouting: "Mom, Tang San, the unfilial son, must fulfill his filial piety for you!" (The introduction is weak, the text is waiting for you)

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Book Friend 2024082297400516mo ago

It was written before that if the strength of the soul pet does not exceed the soul power given by oneself, it will be half the result with twice the result. If it exceeds the level, it will be given more. At level 29 in six years, the protagonist Fei Wu or the author is stupid and keeps upgrading the soul pet, but I have not seen any of you upgrade the soul pet to a thousand years. Not to mention that the summary of the thirty-five chapters of the thousand years does not even last five hundred years. The absorption of a hundred thousand year soul bone is the same as if it has not been absorbed, and the soul power does not increase at all. , Chapter 35: Someone said that they had reached a lower level and they forcefully explained that they wanted to raise a soul pet. You have raised a dan, and the soul pet has not eaten enough for you for a day. It doesn't matter if it is a thousand years, you can go to eight or nine hundred years. Your writing is really good. I'll give you seven stars. I'm afraid six stars won't count.

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Baldhead Eats Bear's Paw18mo ago

In this book, Tang San's first spirit ring was 4 years later, and something amazing happened. He still cultivated to level 29. Anyone who has read Douluo knows that the worse the spirit ring is, the slower the cultivation speed is. What's more, after 4 years, can this be the same as the original work? The second poison point, the protagonist Human Emperor Banner, has the effect of accelerating cultivation. The protagonist carries the system. The protagonist absorbs a hundred thousand year soul bone. Finally, it is level 29. You can taste it carefully. The third poison point, Tang San's 4-year soul ring, directly kills Dai Mubai in seconds. The large-scale fart attack directly poisons Dai Mubai and prevents him from releasing his soul skills. Do you have a hundred thousand year soul skill? The protagonist brags about how awesome the human emperor banner of the system is. The first soul skill is as powerful as Oscar's first soul skill. The second soul skill is a super-year-old martial soul that adds a little courage. What attribute does not add conceptual courage? Then list a separate chapter to brag about it. This soul skill is really awesome. It is better than Yu Xiaogang's. The soul skills are still not good, at least Yu Xiaogang can disgust people, the Human Emperor Banner has a heaven-defying ability that can speed up the upgrade, but the system adds a super-year-old soul ring, a Blue Silver Emperor soul bone, and a Blue Silver Emperor assistance equal to level 29. You all know it, think about it. Can you really watch this kind of level-smashing master who has no brain to upgrade Tang San? I won't talk about it if there is no logic. The most important thing is that I don't have any brains. Also, I should have read Yu Xiaogang's top ten martial soul theories. They are either nonsense, common sense or wrong, so he can actually compile 500 theories. I have seen Douluo and know that Douluo has a simple world view, and it only absorbs soul rings. There is no other. How could he compile it? Please take a closer look at this book😄

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Mc. Dl16mo ago

In general, I feel like the protagonist has this kind of heaven-defying skill and it doesn't matter. He just wants to torture Tang San and steal women. Although there is nothing wrong with Douluo Wen, Tang San is indeed garbage, but this protagonist feels even worse than Tang San.

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Wind_eb19mo ago

Why are there so many of these series recently? Couldn't they be written by AI?

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Book Friends 20231003211_ac9mo ago

Since you want to accept Xiao Wu, why do you still want to trick Xiao Wu?

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Yanmu_ce6mo ago

He has a lot of fun, a lot of poison, he accepts all kinds of things, he has no temper with women, and his small head controls the big head.

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Xicheng Jue, Turn Around and Be Glazed White18mo ago

I see, it's really uncomfortable to watch sometimes. There are 7 people in the team, but as I write, it becomes 8. You guys are cheating. You said you were missing one person before, but in the end, there was no missing one in the one-on-one match.

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Boss Sesse16mo ago

Hee hee, it was fun just reading the introduction. I wonder if it will be more interesting in the future.

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Star Morning💞3mo ago

This protagonist is a scumbag and a pervert. He actually made people take off their clothes in public, controlled others' habit of cutting off their sleeves, and controlled that fat man to rape him in public.

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Assassin in Skirt17mo ago

as follows

A chapter on governing the country is a magical thing...

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