Lingka World Adventure

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that the author's writing style is probably a novice. It's just a daily game. It's okay for newbies, but old bookworms probably won't be able to read it.

The novels I read will not be too bad. They will become popular after about 500 chapters. It is not possible now just because you are not well-known. Don't write short, don't make it bad, and it will become popular. Others say your writing is not good, but when I read it, it is really a detailed novel. At first glance, it looks like it has been revised repeatedly. The writing style is really good. Okay, the style is unique. The shortcomings are that the cool text is too cool and the hang-up is a bit transcendent. The Lord of Data is too weak and the card is too buff. It is a bit difficult to write later. It is recommended that the effect of the card should not be emphasized in the later stage, and the understanding and control of the book of spiritual cards. I don't know if the three chapters of spiritual tea in front of you are foreshadowing.

The author's choice of subject matter is really bad. Unfortunately, the plot is a bit weak, and the protagonist's performance in the front is a bit useless (compared to others), which makes people feel like they don't know who the pig's feet are. Moreover, the protagonist's character is a bit weird, and he feels a bit like a little bit of a licker. So that's it, any advice is welcome

The author wants to slap it on my face, it's impossible😪

Since the protagonist can get it, it is the protagonist's opportunity. How can the location be yours just because you predicted it? So what if you predicted it? Isn't it still the protagonist's opportunity? Even compensation, the protagonist is too weak, he does whatever he says, he is a man.

Very good, it's my type, I hope to keep working hard However, the positioning of the protagonist is too confusing. In the early stage, it was said that it would develop distant combat and it would be no problem to summon beasts. However, later on, it would be too confusing to have sword skills and calligraphy attacks.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

The material is good, but the writing needs to be improved. I just saw Chapter 8 and couldn't stand it anymore. Why did Kaling hand it over to the company when he beat himself? I think it's unreasonable that you have to hand over the things you drop while playing games and defeating monsters to the union. I can understand it if it's a company mission. If that's the case, wouldn't it be better to go it alone? And what is the meaning of Kaling's existence. Why does Kaling exist in this world? The world view of the main storyline is also unclear.

Now that Octopus has gone to the spirit world and is married, what should we do with Manman? Is it possible that if we take both of them, the protagonist will not get the same treatment?

I have read more than 30 chapters and I feel that this material is very good. But it should be better. Keep up the good work, the author😶😶😶