I Can't Fulfill Your Request

I Can't Fulfill Your Request

by The Salty Old Cat

Length:
746Kwords348chapters
Latest:
Ch. 348梦醒时分(大结局)
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Updated 5y agoScraped 19d ago
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38Favorites
3Fans
0QD Score

About This Novel

This is a steampunk story about a different world. Is the protagonist invincible, upgrading, and saving the world? Detective? No, he is just a salted fish mercenary.

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Official(4)Scraped 9d ago

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Silver and Snow Shine71mo ago

Well enough

This novel is still good, but after reading about ten chapters, I found some shortcomings. First, when something happened, the description was too into the theme event, and some descriptions in the following chapters were not clearly written. Second, it was not very detailed. Some things and things about the protagonist were not described. The whole story had a skipping feeling, and it was not a good reading experience. However, this novel is out of stock, so you can read it.

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Half the City is Covered in Smoke and Sand55mo ago

New book release

There is a detective agency in Los Angeles

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User 53730038238463mo ago

The writing is a bit too game-like.

I feel like it would be better to have a price list in the system mall. Random drawing is still the same type as the main god flow from many years ago.

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Half the City is Covered in Smoke and Sand71mo ago

I'm working overtime. Let me explain to you.

I just saw someone in the comments asking if this book has a girlfriend. I told him that there will be. In fact, there is such a character in my outline, but I haven't decided to write it yet. For novices, emotional scenes are the most difficult to write. I will also explain why the protagonist is set to be 7 years old. I think this will make the protagonist's start smoother. Any ethnic group will be more tolerant towards cubs, which will also make it easier for the protagonist to integrate into the world. Although this will make the story seem longer, it can't be helped, because I intend to make this story as real as possible and make the world in my book real, even if my writing is not very good. Thank you for your understanding. If you have any opinions, I will accept them selectively. This is Lao Maoer. Good night, everyone.

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