Sword Prison

☞☞Hell Sword Trial reading date: February 2 Category: Science Fiction Channel Word count: 39,000 Work contract signing: less than 50%. The title of the book is unattractive, but the introduction is okay. [Editor-in-Chief Recommended] Recommended position in the work: Fog Completed work: 50% Investment Index: Two Stars Current number of investors: 2 Thoughts after reading: This may be the author's first time writing a web article (Fog). The writing is okay, but throwing the whole chapter away from the world at the beginning would be very discouraging (falling). Personally, I feel that the fun of a different world setting is not to throw out the setting at the beginning, but to use the perspective of the protagonist to show the readers the difference in the world. At what level the protagonist has reached, he will be able to know what level of knowledge the world has. At the same time, in the plot that the protagonist is engaged in, the things the protagonist knows can be shown to the readers one by one. Otherwise, without a sense of immersion, there will be no sense of expectation for the subsequent plot.