Douluo: I Am Not Yu Xiaogang's Second Best
About This Novel
He traveled through time and became the fourth prince of the Star Luo Empire, De Gaulle, Dai Mubai's concubine brother. As a book traveler, he thought he was the only one who was different, but he didn't know that the Douluo Continent was already different. But so what? Xing Luo's strength is supreme, and the same is true in this world. If you have strength, you won't be afraid of deviations! Tang San: "I treat you as my eldest brother, why are you?" De Gaulle: "Call me uncle!" Flanders: "Didn't you say you don't want to be Yu Xiaogang's second best?" De Gaulle: "Well, hello, eldest brother. Erlong will follow me, and Yu Xiaogang will It doesn't matter." Tang Hao: "De Gaulle, what do you mean?" De Gaulle: "I will raise your wife, don't worry about it." Bibi Dong: "My daughter Qian Renxue is still charming."
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Official(19)Scraped 13d ago
The fanfics are all filled with obscene novels, and they are all the same and have no desire to read them.
The continuity is poor, there is almost no cause and effect, the protagonist's space span is too large, and there is almost no time.
🤮There is no plot coherence at all, and it doesn't make sense to read at all.
It's so watery that it can't be watered down anymore. No wonder there's no rating. What a fool.
I'm speechless😳I didn't even bother to read the introduction.
What the hell are you writing? The preface doesn't match the postscript.
This is a newcomer's first full-length work. Please support me.
I can't even read the broken ones, and they say they are in reverse order, but you haven't added many of them later, and you can't connect them at all.
It's impossible to read. You're not coherent at all. It seems like you've written everything and yet nothing. It's like if you took two bites of food on the first day and then went directly to eat on the second day. Do you think this kind of continuity can be continued?
Flashbacks are really not suitable for writing novels, especially when the writing is not good, and there is no continuity. It will make you tired of watching it. Most of them will stop reading after reading it for a while. In this case, don't expect to have good results, unless you write well, but people who write well will not write fan fiction.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(19)Scraped 13d ago
The fanfics are all filled with obscene novels, and they are all the same and have no desire to read them.
The continuity is poor, there is almost no cause and effect, the protagonist's space span is too large, and there is almost no time.
🤮There is no plot coherence at all, and it doesn't make sense to read at all.
It's so watery that it can't be watered down anymore. No wonder there's no rating. What a fool.
I'm speechless😳I didn't even bother to read the introduction.
What the hell are you writing? The preface doesn't match the postscript.
This is a newcomer's first full-length work. Please support me.
I can't even read the broken ones, and they say they are in reverse order, but you haven't added many of them later, and you can't connect them at all.
It's impossible to read. You're not coherent at all. It seems like you've written everything and yet nothing. It's like if you took two bites of food on the first day and then went directly to eat on the second day. Do you think this kind of continuity can be continued?
Flashbacks are really not suitable for writing novels, especially when the writing is not good, and there is no continuity. It will make you tired of watching it. Most of them will stop reading after reading it for a while. In this case, don't expect to have good results, unless you write well, but people who write well will not write fan fiction.
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