Cultivation in Elf Continent

Elf, is it like the one below? Love it, love it!

It would be better to write about the elf lord in the introduction, and I am confused about the werewolf. This is too poisonous. How good is political and military suppression. Are you a lord, or a rich and powerful second generation? If someone wants to kidnap you, he will not use troops to kill you, but will turn into a werewolf and assassinate you?

In the process of saving the little girl, if you can mix in some of the little girl's memories and experiences. It will feel more immersive. When the little girl prayed, "Save me" made me feel more distressed than "Buy me"! A little more protective, and then the little girl doesn't know the protagonist at the beginning. How can she be sure that the protagonist is a good person and promotes her own laundry and cooking? I don't know if it's due to the influence of the environment, but I never believe in other people's promises, and I care more about that person's actions. The protagonist needs to first help the little girl, and then the little girl uses actions to prove that the protagonist did not save the wrong person. When we help others who are in trouble, why don't we hope that others can warm us? The author greatly wishes that he could slow down and write more delicately. The plot was just brushed off, and I didn't even have a picture! Although I know that writing too slowly is a boring thing, and it will even kill the interest and confidence that I have. But only by calming down and slowly polishing a story is the most exciting story. I once wished I could write a novel, but I gave up because I really didn't have the energy to write anything after working 12 hours a day. So I always hope to read wonderful novels, and I will even read some novels four or five times. From the novel, I seem to see a living story of a living person, with their joys, sorrows and joys.

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I finally found a book about elves, and I really hope it can be written better. The first point: I have read dozens of chapters and found that the author really understands the aristocratic system? The protagonist's father is an earl, and he gives the protagonist territory and elves. What kind of clan meeting is needed? There are also objections from the protagonist's fourth uncle and so on, and we still need to discuss it? Come on, the protagonist's father is an earl, and he is the king in the territory. To put it bluntly, it is just a matter of words. If you hold a clan meeting, you are really confusing people. Second point: Since you are writing about the background of elves and nobles, can you write less Chinese things? You have written too many Chinese-style elements and it looks so awkward. The third point: Before the protagonist went to the territory, the previous lord actually dared to collect a large amount of taxes and left a mess for the protagonist? Are you just a showman when you are an earl, cleaning up the mess for the earl's son in the earl's territory? This is equivalent to scolding his son in front of the chairman. . . . So speechless Fourth: In this context, the nobility is heaven. Please don't write about conspiracies and calculations in such a bad way. Even if you want to write, you have to go to someone else's territory to write. In the territory of the protagonist's father, the earl, the protagonist is the second heaven, okay? The aristocrat you wrote has no energy at all. It's simply worse than the previous landlords' families in China. Only landlords' families were involved in fighting for family property, and the nobility had always been inherited by the eldest son. It is completely impossible for the protagonist's eldest brother to run away from home and wander around. Then the protagonist's father asked the protagonist to be the heir, but found that the protagonist was too useless and gave birth to a son who planned to be the heir. What did you think of the aristocratic inheritance system? . . . . Also, regarding the protagonist's cousins, uncles and the like, they can only be lords, which means that it is impossible to hold a clan meeting, and his relatives are not qualified. Moreover, the protagonist's eldest brother is the heir, and the protagonist and his younger brother can only be made barons. As a result, the eldest brother runs away from home, the protagonist is useless, and the third brother is the heir. What a joke. . .

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It seems that there is also a setting about elf bugs, small elves and big elves in some book.

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I like the plot type of this novel, but it's too bland. There is no sense of substitution. I don't feel the charm of the novel that attracts you and keeps you reading. It lacks the description of the characters' psychology from their actions. It lacks the motivation to be curious about the subsequent development of the story and does not feel the main line of the story. It feels like the protagonist has no desires and desires and just goes with the flow. Take the part in the novel where the protagonist buys a slave girl, for example. If the protagonist sees the empty look in the little girl's eyes after being whipped, and feels the urge to save the little girl, then I will feel curious about what the protagonist will do next, and I will have a sense of involvement and curiosity. So the protagonist follows the slave caravan to the auction house. In the process, the environment of the little girl and the surrounding slaves can be described in detail. For example, whether it is fear or numbness, or the humiliation of being treated as cargo for inspection, you can describe it to stimulate the joyful feeling that each of us hopes to heroically save a beautiful woman and gain recognition and gratitude from others. Then you can create some difficulties. For example, a fat and greasy noble also took a fancy to the little girl, inspected the little girl like a commodity, and made the little girl perform humiliating actions. The little girl was unwilling, and then the businessman threatened. At this time, the little girl was in confusion and despair, praying to the sky, and then at this moment. The protagonist turns out to be handsome. The protagonist's identity is more noble than that nobleman. The slave merchant also salutes the protagonist. Then under the surprised eyes of countless people, the protagonist picked up the thin and helpless little girl. This moment deeply reflected in the little girl's heart, making her think that God heard her prayer and sent this noble angel! The next day, the little girl will become nervous and excited when she sees the protagonist... In this way, I feel more involved! I accidentally said so much. In fact, I still like novels very much, and I also understand that writing novels is not easy, so I hope the author can write more immersive novels that will make us curious and want to stop. Come on!

The beginning was okay, but when the werewolf came out, it wasn't so good. Let's take the main character's mother's birthday. The main character wanted to give her a surprise, but she didn't mention it later and just gave it to her.