Magic Mountain of Ice and Fire

Those who are time travel spoilers should do some difficult operations. Come and see a different magic mountain

Add a comment. The author's writing in this book is very good, but it has a fatal weakness and lack of control over the plot. Now there is a hammer in the east, and now there is a hammer in the west. The pages are constantly distributed to different characters, and then after all the distribution, there is no strong point to close up the different branches. Instead, the different branches are pulled out one by one, which makes it look cluttered, as smelly and long as an old woman's footcloth. So I still feel more convinced about the book you wrote.

Roughly evaluate: I don't think anyone in the same genre writes better than this. It looks okay, so just treat it as a snack.

⚡[Ice and Fire Doujin·Teda Style]⚡ A junior science and technology dog traveled through the world of ice and fire, the most brutal, violent, bloody and terrifying General of the West, Gregor "The Mountain". After a painful drug withdrawal experience (the Mountain was addicted to poppy milk since childhood), he decided to develop his own power from now on and change the fate of "The Mountain" who was killed by Oberon in King's Landing two years later. ............ It can be said to be quite awesome among Ice and Fire fan fiction. The author is a newcomer, but the usual newcomer problems are rare. The logic is rigorous and the settings stand up to scrutiny. The story is very interestingly interpreted while respecting the original work. [Highlights]: 1. The description of the fighting scenes is great. Unlike the pale and feeble descriptions in fantasy novels, the descriptions in this book are very emotional and can easily make people immersed in the situation. It is like Mr. Martin's European fighting style, but with his own unique reasonable development, it looks very interesting. Especially the part where Polliver kills the mercenaries of the Blood Troupe is very classic and I have read it over and over again. The story is very interesting based on the original premise. 2. The author's interpretation of the Magic Mountain and the characters related to the Magic Mountain is mostly accurate. The Magic Mountain is not only about terror and violence. He relies on this to become famous and win the throne, but he cannot survive in the world of ice and fire based on this alone. The author's interpretation of the various princes in the West is also very interesting, especially the characterization of the character Tywin. 3. The outline is reasonable. And the writing style also fits the setting. There is no stupid golden finger, and there is no sand sculpture operation by one person to change the tide of history. At present, the main line is very reasonable. 4. What scares me the most about this kind of time travel is the author's confusing psychological description. (I don't know how many readers will be discouraged by forced psychological interpretation. Even many old authors have failed.) However, the author focuses on the combination of Gregor's own temperament and his original personality, and focuses on eliminating the readers' sense of sluggishness and difference when reading, and does not dwell too much on psychology. The treatment here is quite appropriate. [Controversy]: 1. The salary paid to the soldiers under his command is wrongly designed (too much). Also, some of the actions of the character Julie when she first returned to the Magic Mountain somewhat ruined the character of the Magic Mountain. Fortunately, she only appeared once or twice and never appeared again. This is a small flaw, but overall it outweighs the flaws. 2. The author loves farming, but after a hundred chapters, it has not been connected to the main plot development →_→. The author probably wants to develop the protagonist's power to a certain level before participating in the main plot. But this lacks a sense of urgency in the world of ice and fire. But the things the author writes about before the troubled times are not just farming, there are also many very interesting (self-designed) plots, and the plots are also very tightly arranged. It does not feel boring when reading, but has a refreshing feeling of mudslide hahh. Overall review: [Xiancao-]