Warhammer: Gold's Dream

Author, have you rewritten it again? Four months later, there are still no more than 200 tickets.

I can't understand it. The author's writing is too profound and troublesome.

How often does the author update this book? It's been two years and there are less than 200 pieces.

Are you finally on this platform? Last time the author of Ashes recommended a book, I wanted to read it, but there was no such book.

Maybe it's because I have a low IQ. I'm a little confused now when I see it. I don't dare to give it a low score, for fear that someone will ridicule me for not being able to understand.

Ah? Started updating. . . . I have almost forgotten the plot.

It's very good-looking, but it's a pity that it's not suitable for this era. This kind of writing is completely outdated. This is also the reason why AI writing is so popular. Even a pieced-together novel is better than this kind of carefully written novel.

The novel is indeed written with great care, but it has big problems. The biggest problem is that the author is self-indulgent, with too many metaphors, too many riddles, unclear pronouns, and no connection between plot transitions. The author should think about it carefully. Is it normal for you to write a metaphor yourself and then explain your metaphor in the metaphor comment? If you really like to write metaphors, you can write a metaphor every few hundred words, so that readers can understand the metaphor in context. Is it really okay for you to make the entire novel your own metaphor? I tried to figure out your various metaphors, and after three days of reading more than a hundred chapters, I was exhausted. The personal pronouns are also unclear. When you write "him", I can still tell that you are talking about either the Four Gods or the Emperor. If you write "him", I can guess, is he the protagonist? I can't read it when I bring it in. Is that the imperial guard ABCD? I brought them in one by one, but none of them matched. After pondering for a long time, oh, there is a transition here. This "he" is a new character who has just appeared. Who is a good guy who doesn't transition and connect? If that doesn't work, why don't you draw a dividing line to separate the two sections? Secondly, this is probably the most depressing and abusive Warhammer novel I have ever read. Although the author has been saying that he has a lot of expectations for the protagonist and that the protagonist will be very enjoyable, I felt very depressed while reading it. Let's not talk about the four gods for now. The empire treats the protagonist through brainwashing, precise control of memory overlay, and mental stamps (if he knows anything that the emperor is not allowed to know, he will be electrocuted). He is possessed by the spirit of the dead corn spirit. When he meets the protagonist, he is insulted, stabbed with knives, anesthetized, and imprisoned in a dark cell. The protagonist, during this period, the protagonist has not resisted, because the protagonist is set as a mirror whose wishes come true but he has no ideas. He will regard other people's ideas as his own (similar to Angron? But Angron has his own ideas after all. Is it possible that the protagonist's many wishes will come true?). When I saw the protagonist rescue Guard A and asked the Emperor if he could save A, the Emperor asked the protagonist to do something and said whether he could save A would depend on the protagonist's performance. I really couldn't stand it after seeing this. I slowly introduced each person one by one, and slowly guessed one metaphor after another. After three days of chewing, I harvested the red warmth. I really think that such a protagonist should die quickly or be captured by the four gods. Anyway, it will not be worse than in the palace.

I can't understand it, I just got used to the style of the first volume and ended up restarting it. I didn't want to look at it for a moment. It's obviously pretty nice in front.

The writing is good. It has the feeling of suspense that an old author would have known a long time ago. But now, if the audience of today's online articles looks at it, Charming may not be able to go far.