Time and Space Coffin

I am also a person who has been reading books for many years, and today I was invited to take a look at this new book. The book as a whole is actually very large. From the content, it is easy to see that this is a Western-oriented fantasy novel, which Mu Yong questioned. But after reading a few chapters, I understood the basic tone of the book. First of all, the first chapter is about the so-called ferryman and the angel of heaven, and then the world restarts, which is a very common Western style. The author also continues to throw out many characters and world frameworks in subsequent chapters. However, there is too little detailed content, so little that when reading this book, you are simply confused as you watch the characters in it go here and there. What spells and creatures, hey, they all have names, but there is not much description at all. I don't know the basis of these spells, the characteristics of the creatures, and the basic main line. I can understand the author's desire to write a big book, but if he continues writing like this, it will definitely be difficult for this book to achieve success because it will be too unfriendly to new readers. Not everyone is willing to complete the world system while reading the plot. This kind of brain-burning book usually only has two endings. One is extremely popular, and the other is completely cool. The above are my feelings after reading the book. I hope it can help you. I also hope that the author will seriously consider rebuilding the world. Otherwise, it would be really difficult to control it with the current tone.

Personally, I prefer works with this feel. This book is of the Western fantasy genre, constructing a relatively complete framework, and the conflicts in various aspects of the plot are also relatively attractive. The characters' language feels very Western-style, and it also uses a lot of slang, which is very special. . It would be better if it could be more focused on the plot. I heard that the author is a new writer, so I should encourage him even more. I hope that the subsequent chapters will be better. Come on, author! ! !