About This Novel
"Xuanzi, after dinner, hurry up and play games. What books should you read?" The hot-blooded and young mother said to Yuzixuan. In the new era of science and technology, scientists and game developers jointly developed a super-large space-time virtual online game called "Source". Ultra-realistic game environment, interesting game plot... All this has made players all over the world crazy and obsessed. The combination of virtuality and reality, the starry sky and the universe, the most authentic and practical online games, are waiting for you here! Welcome to the new fantasy book "The Chronicles of Heaven and Earth"!
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Official(44)Scraped 17d ago
good book
Lao Yan, let me give you a small suggestion. Since this is an online game novel, I think the fighting scenes should be richly described. I found that you like to go over many of the monster-spawn fighting scenes to give people the feeling that the game is very simple. It's not much of a problem to farm some monsters and kill them in one go, but when you encounter some powerful bosses, you still wish you had more descriptions. It would be better to write thrilling fights. Finally, don't let the protagonist's luck be too good. Everything happens to the protagonist the first time. The so-called protagonist's aura is not to describe the protagonist as too invincible. In the early stage, the protagonist should be put under some pressure. It should not be too smooth and unstoppable. In this case, the readers will be able to guess the content behind you. Of course, this refers to the content of the game, not the life of the protagonist. Of course, I don't mean to torture the protagonist. I just need to put a little pressure on the protagonist in the early stage. Either the mindless and invincible kind of writing, or the cool writing. This kind of writing is often found boring by people. What I think is a cool story is when the protagonist slowly becomes stronger after being oppressed and humiliated by others, and in turn, tramples on the people who once laughed at him and humiliated him. This is cool! Of course, I don't know much about online game novels. This is just my personal opinion on novels. I hope it can be a little bit helpful to you in writing novels. 最后说一下 各位绝世无双的书友朋友们别揍我哇 我不是来拆台的 只是提个建议 The second long review. The first one is for Jueshi Wushuang. As the old saying goes, come on, become a god soon!
Great, I'm very happy to see you achieve such an achievement, come on
Come on, author, please update
Come on, go faster! Looking forward to the heroine!
Come on, old saying
Write well. I'm waiting for more updates.
I have watched a lot of online games, and there is one called Vulcan, which is very similar to this one, but I couldn't stand it anymore. It felt uninteresting. I am really looking forward to the combination of this game with reality and the military. I will support it! Big, take my knees off!
Seize the day and night, and become a god with one book
Come on, I wish you to become a god soon.
This work is excellent
The book is good, with connotations and thoughts.
passing by
Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you
What, a book review? Pocket Ya, is this right? You are great, come on? By the way, where are the little stars⭐(?-Ω-`)
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Community(0)
Official(44)Scraped 17d ago
good book
Lao Yan, let me give you a small suggestion. Since this is an online game novel, I think the fighting scenes should be richly described. I found that you like to go over many of the monster-spawn fighting scenes to give people the feeling that the game is very simple. It's not much of a problem to farm some monsters and kill them in one go, but when you encounter some powerful bosses, you still wish you had more descriptions. It would be better to write thrilling fights. Finally, don't let the protagonist's luck be too good. Everything happens to the protagonist the first time. The so-called protagonist's aura is not to describe the protagonist as too invincible. In the early stage, the protagonist should be put under some pressure. It should not be too smooth and unstoppable. In this case, the readers will be able to guess the content behind you. Of course, this refers to the content of the game, not the life of the protagonist. Of course, I don't mean to torture the protagonist. I just need to put a little pressure on the protagonist in the early stage. Either the mindless and invincible kind of writing, or the cool writing. This kind of writing is often found boring by people. What I think is a cool story is when the protagonist slowly becomes stronger after being oppressed and humiliated by others, and in turn, tramples on the people who once laughed at him and humiliated him. This is cool! Of course, I don't know much about online game novels. This is just my personal opinion on novels. I hope it can be a little bit helpful to you in writing novels. 最后说一下 各位绝世无双的书友朋友们别揍我哇 我不是来拆台的 只是提个建议 The second long review. The first one is for Jueshi Wushuang. As the old saying goes, come on, become a god soon!
Great, I'm very happy to see you achieve such an achievement, come on
Come on, author, please update
Come on, go faster! Looking forward to the heroine!
Come on, old saying
Write well. I'm waiting for more updates.
I have watched a lot of online games, and there is one called Vulcan, which is very similar to this one, but I couldn't stand it anymore. It felt uninteresting. I am really looking forward to the combination of this game with reality and the military. I will support it! Big, take my knees off!
Seize the day and night, and become a god with one book
Come on, I wish you to become a god soon.
This work is excellent
The book is good, with connotations and thoughts.
passing by
Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you
What, a book review? Pocket Ya, is this right? You are great, come on? By the way, where are the little stars⭐(?-Ω-`)
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