The Legend of the Last Emperor

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Brother, your writing style is suitable for the starting point, not for the creation of the world.

When I first saw this book, I thought it was great

First, the protagonist is not clear, so forget about the flashback at the beginning. The protagonist has not appeared or has no role. It is best to have a clear protagonist in the first three chapters of the online novel and the role must be the most in the entire article. Otherwise, the entire article will be scattered and readers will not be able to get involved. Otherwise, the reader has already brought himself into a character who has appeared a lot in the early stage. Suddenly he discovers that he is not the protagonist, and the reader will feel uncomfortable. It will be a bit difficult to get involved with the protagonist. It's okay to change the perspective, but it can't be like this for forty chapters. It's not clear who the protagonist is (it should be Yang Huan, but many readers probably brought it to An), and the perspective changes wildly, and it makes sense for readers to be confused. Second, the setting is very clear but too little is told, and there are problems with the handling. For example, Ashinalu, you can't tell how powerful she is in Xi Li. She is about to be beheaded casually, but then her remaining power can pull up Lin's structure. This is a bit contradictory. Third, there are problems with character creation. The biggest problem is An. Really, this character once made me think that he was the protagonist. The author should not have given him so many scenes in the early stage before the protagonist was unclear, especially the part where the gold is poured from the mountain and the part where Ashnaru is rescued. This character can appear appropriately, but now that the protagonist is not clear, the role of An definitely fits the image of the protagonist in most readers' minds. When the protagonist is not clear, other characters must be portrayed as supporting roles, such as Chen Lan and Ashina Lu. You can feel that they are just excessive supporting roles. Fourth, there is no clear main line. Why is Dou Qi turning into a horse so popular? A very important reason is that the main plot is clear, and the protagonist wants to become stronger to get slapped in the face. The protagonist of this book is not even clearly told to the readers, and the main plot is even more vague. Is it revenge? Unify the world? Protect humanity? Protect ancient races? I don't know, this is one of the reasons why I said the article is scattered. This book is very good, but the author should be a newbie. So far, the writing is very good, but the rhythm is really messy. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.

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