About This Novel
[Sweet article, single female protagonist! Don't enter if you don't like it] A few years ago, the virtual online game "Destiny" promotional video came out, and its authenticity is as high as 99%. And a person from three years later was reborn and returned to before the server opened. This time he must leave no regrets and reach the top of the gods. "I have crossed the threshold of the gods, entered the indescribable realm, and reached the pinnacle of eternal life!" Many of the settings are based on the author's reference to some online games and mythology settings. The author is a newbie, so I hope you can bear with me!
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Official(2)Scraped 3d ago
There are so few comments, here you go, to support the scene
I have some comments, The first is that the protagonist's strength can grow a little slower. The protagonist should not act too strong. You can make the protagonist look like a king in the later stage. This will be awkward in the early stage. Also, don't make the dragons too strong. This novel is suitable for slow writing. If it is too strong, it will end quickly. It's too awkward for the male and female protagonists to meet. You can make the female protagonist more interesting instead of expressionless and boring. This is a good point of the novel. (The writing is good but needs to be improved. Don't start like other novels invincible and then pretend to be awesome. Write a plot with your own characteristics. Come on!)
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 3d ago
There are so few comments, here you go, to support the scene
I have some comments, The first is that the protagonist's strength can grow a little slower. The protagonist should not act too strong. You can make the protagonist look like a king in the later stage. This will be awkward in the early stage. Also, don't make the dragons too strong. This novel is suitable for slow writing. If it is too strong, it will end quickly. It's too awkward for the male and female protagonists to meet. You can make the female protagonist more interesting instead of expressionless and boring. This is a good point of the novel. (The writing is good but needs to be improved. Don't start like other novels invincible and then pretend to be awesome. Write a plot with your own characteristics. Come on!)
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