The Incompetent Hero

🛡🔥Serial works️️ Recommendation index☆☆☆☆☆ ▪🏹The works advertised in the comment area, 👻The poison test is completed... -------------------------------------------------- ▪🏹In the first chapter, I just described the name of the game, and then jumped to the task rewards, which was "very blunt". ▪🏹The setting is to control the character with thoughts, and the in-game beta account can be transferred. It is not specified what gaming device to use. ▪🏹The background, world, perspective, and description are not clear enough, making it difficult to find a point of entry. (Very confused) ▪🏹It feels like a PC game, because the description uses clicks, and clicks have nothing to do with mind control. (Very helpless) ▪🏹After reading the author's remarks, I realized that the world has no background, and it's a hodgepodge! (Ambition) ▪🏹The author sincerely has a don't tell me story structure, foreshadowing, tension, foreshadowing, story readability... ▪🏹My trick is to write blindly, open vord and just do it! The rush. Յ(¯ㅂ¯Յ) ▪🏹The only bright spot of this book is that the author has his own persistence. Although the fight is very real, he just doesn't give up. ▪🏹In this way, don't say whether you are sorry or not to the readers, at least you can be worthy of yourself. Read more about what others write, it should be helpful to you... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ✎ℳ๓ั♡ wet little ₯㎕ζั͡