
About This Novel
Dark Zone Breakout game novel, original story content of the JLJ (Garbage Picking) organization. If you like it, you can collect and comment on it. Good suggestions and opinions will be adopted in a timely manner.
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Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
Give some advice
Brother, you can be considered a pioneer in this dark zone-to-different-world novel. I would like to give you some suggestions: make the language more serious and detailed, and use more braille.
small opinion
That's good, but you're mixing reality with a game. If you say it's a game, it's not dead, but if you say reality, it's a first-person description of the game, which is a bit uncomfortable.
Update quickly. Update quickly. I'll ask my classmates to check it out.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
Give some advice
Brother, you can be considered a pioneer in this dark zone-to-different-world novel. I would like to give you some suggestions: make the language more serious and detailed, and use more braille.
small opinion
That's good, but you're mixing reality with a game. If you say it's a game, it's not dead, but if you say reality, it's a first-person description of the game, which is a bit uncomfortable.
Update quickly. Update quickly. I'll ask my classmates to check it out.
Quick, quick, quick, quick, quick, quick
nice
Nice. . . . . It looks good. Click here to update it quickly.









