When a Salty Fish Cultivator Meets Online Games
About This Novel
A cross-generational virtual reality online game created by elites from all over the world, "Shen Yao", known as Second Life, has begun public beta testing, and Ling Yun, who is burdened with (what he thinks) is the protection of his proud sister and his scheming sister, has also followed them into this,,, extremely unfriendly game.
What Readers Think
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Official(10)Scraped 4d ago
I go
There is a lot of nonsense. Please write carefully...
Come on, boy.
The author of Poujie is waiting for you in front, hahahahaha
Don't interrupt, don't interrupt, don't interrupt I'm still waiting to gain weight before watching.
Haha, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack.
Natsume passes by
Natsume passes by passes by passes by
Come on💪💪💪💪💪 boy
I'm coming
So white! I'm driving here! Beep beep beep
True white? The veteran driver came to leave a message
Yes, I personally feel pretty good. I recommend reading and give it a five-star rating (o^^o)
My personal feelings after watching it so far
1. The title is: When a Salted Fish Cultivator Meets an Online Game The embodiment of cultivation! At present, online games occupy too much space, and I think that since the protagonist has memories of the world of cultivation for several years, his behavior should be consistent with that of a cultivator. It seems that there is currently no such thing. But I believe it's only chapter 29 and will be introduced slowly later! 2. There is a little mentality of having a lot of parentheses in more than 20 chapters. You don't need to do this. After all, it is not an anime or anything like that. Otherwise, I personally feel that readers will not be able to integrate into it. 3. Some paragraphs are relatively complex, and the psychological language is placed in a natural paragraph, and only. Come and separate, what you see is not pleasing to the eye. 4. In terms of language, try to use as few online terms as possible, and make sure this is a novel rather than a joke. I don't think two-dimensional novels can avoid the problem of unclear readers' positioning. Finally, I hope the author can continue to work hard!
Rating
Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 4d ago
I go
There is a lot of nonsense. Please write carefully...
Come on, boy.
The author of Poujie is waiting for you in front, hahahahaha
Don't interrupt, don't interrupt, don't interrupt I'm still waiting to gain weight before watching.
Haha, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, quack.
Natsume passes by
Natsume passes by passes by passes by
Come on💪💪💪💪💪 boy
I'm coming
So white! I'm driving here! Beep beep beep
True white? The veteran driver came to leave a message
Yes, I personally feel pretty good. I recommend reading and give it a five-star rating (o^^o)
My personal feelings after watching it so far
1. The title is: When a Salted Fish Cultivator Meets an Online Game The embodiment of cultivation! At present, online games occupy too much space, and I think that since the protagonist has memories of the world of cultivation for several years, his behavior should be consistent with that of a cultivator. It seems that there is currently no such thing. But I believe it's only chapter 29 and will be introduced slowly later! 2. There is a little mentality of having a lot of parentheses in more than 20 chapters. You don't need to do this. After all, it is not an anime or anything like that. Otherwise, I personally feel that readers will not be able to integrate into it. 3. Some paragraphs are relatively complex, and the psychological language is placed in a natural paragraph, and only. Come and separate, what you see is not pleasing to the eye. 4. In terms of language, try to use as few online terms as possible, and make sure this is a novel rather than a joke. I don't think two-dimensional novels can avoid the problem of unclear readers' positioning. Finally, I hope the author can continue to work hard!
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