No One Can Try to End My Losing Streak!

Not bad, very pretty

I looked at it and found it to be in line with my taste, which is why I'm following it. Many people don't like your style and don't want you to write about more detailed aspects. They just want to see where he ended his losing streak. But what I want to say is that every style of ears folding audience, I am one of them. So no matter what, just keep writing and write your own heart. Don't go looking for those people to swipe. Those who keep mentioning the protagonist's name will look like they are looking for someone to swipe. This will make more people have no desire to see it once they enter.

There are no big twists and turns in the plot, it's just a plan to defeat Taichu Taigu in the end and collect a harem (it would be outrageous to forget to include Bian Mengying and Qin Shi). There are no emotional scenes at all, only a little bit of Xiaorou's characterization. Looking like this, I only feel a little fond of Xiaorou. You wrote Lan Tingxue to death and the readers didn't even notice it. I even like Elder Coffin and Sword Slave better. I can't remember Qin's name completely, but Bian Mengying is even more important. I don't like harems, but it would be fine if the heroines were well-written. I would vomit blood on the spot if I cast three supporting roles (just for the pleasure of having four beautiful women as my wives). Even junior sister Xiaorou doesn't have much plot, but her plot alone is greater than the three of them. And it stands to reason that Lan Tingxue is most like the heroine, more of a bit player than a bit player. Even Hu Qingqiu was more impressed than her. It started to run out of life in the middle period, and the plot developed at a ridiculous pace. But I finally finished watching it, and I regretted a little bit, spending money to watch the entire movie.

Many people in the audience were mocking Ji Chen for not being able to beat him and having to go on stage to fight every year. Many people in the audience mentioned Luo Chen, who is an idol in the world of immortality.

Luo Chen is back. He had been pretending to die before because he wanted to return to the Zidao Immortal Sect. He really had a bad taste. His current senior brother is very annoying to him.

The idea is okay, but the pattern is too small and the world view is not big enough.

What are you doing? You can't understand it at first glance. Just write that you won the battle. Who cares about the details of that crap in the demon world?

Tell me which chapter won and I will watch it

Luo Chen is deliberately losing in a row now. I think he must be tired of being respected by others before he fakes his death. Now the audience knows that Luo Chen has lost in a row and bet on him.

The plot and writing are very good, but do we need to study the description of the fighting scene? When building a foundation, you can use the Five Elements spells randomly when fighting with golden elixirs. In the Mahayana stage, it is still not good to use ice spikes and fireballs.