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[Mortal flow] [No system] [Spiritual world and fairyland] A treasure-hunting golden toad became a legend in the world of immortality. Han Qing came across the border with the treasure-hunting golden toad, vowing to ask the nine heavens and be proud of the three realms.
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Official(3)Scraped 3d ago
I feel like the name is not good. When I see the name, I don't want to come in to see it. Everything else is good.
I thought you were attracted to that young woman? It turns out that you want both mother and daughter to take advantage of each other? What are you writing about? While talking about longing for the path to immortality? On the other hand, he is entangled with the widow? Even though you have become an immortal, you still eat every day? Do you go into retreat for several days each time? Will you die if you don't eat? Is one day enough? Immortal cultivators don't have enough time to practice? Do you have time to eat, drink and have diarrhea? Who doesn't take bigu pills and practice cultivation quickly?
Update faster, it's too slow
The writing is still good, with no major mistakes or loopholes. Just update it faster, it's too slow
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 3d ago
I feel like the name is not good. When I see the name, I don't want to come in to see it. Everything else is good.
I thought you were attracted to that young woman? It turns out that you want both mother and daughter to take advantage of each other? What are you writing about? While talking about longing for the path to immortality? On the other hand, he is entangled with the widow? Even though you have become an immortal, you still eat every day? Do you go into retreat for several days each time? Will you die if you don't eat? Is one day enough? Immortal cultivators don't have enough time to practice? Do you have time to eat, drink and have diarrhea? Who doesn't take bigu pills and practice cultivation quickly?
Update faster, it's too slow
The writing is still good, with no major mistakes or loopholes. Just update it faster, it's too slow
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