I Have a Hunting Knife

It's messy and rambling, and the author tried his best to get rid of the word count. The protagonist can even go to the toilet to have an inner monologue, "This toilet is not a square, isn't it... Secondly... So... Finally...", The two second-generation people spend a lot of money, the author can write a page: "He doesn't know their martial arts... But... So... The level of martial arts is really uncertain. But... So... The only thing that can be determined is that their family is very rich, very rich, spend money like water, and spend money lavishly." The constant inner monologue makes it seem like the main character's mother-in-law is dying. The author spends all his energy studying the word count instead of thinking about the plot, making the novel so confusing that it sounds like the ravings of a psychotic person. Only the first 40 chapters can be read.

Please forgive me for the few books I have read. I think this book is very good and I have not seen anything similar to it. One's own opinion (desire to survive)

I have read more than a hundred chapters. The first few dozen chapters are very interesting, but after I came out of the mountains, I didn't know what I was writing. I just wandered around aimlessly. If you want to upgrade in the jungle, you must at least have a fixed foothold, that is, a home.

Generally speaking, the early stage of the plot progresses slowly, giving people a feeling of being scattered. The plot can be refined appropriately, otherwise it will be too spread out and difficult to understand. Secondly, when the plot progresses to the middle stage, the power system is not very obvious. We can only know the strength of the current ability based on the comparative analysis of the weird things encountered, but it always feels like there is no clue about the development of power. This also has something to do with the plot being too open. In addition, we are in the middle of the plot. I originally thought that there would be an emotional line, but it was unclear and vague. The few stocks I originally thought about (red stocks, Suzhen stocks, etc.) Have no development prospects, and I don't know if I will write about them later. Finally, the plot line is very long. Many people will not have the patience to wait for the plot to develop after reading too many novels, which will lead to the loss of readers. For example, in order to wait for the plot to develop, you may put the book on the bookshelf to gather dust. After leaving it for a long time, you no longer want to read it. Post a weird picture to town a building

Is this still called an upgrade stream? ? The whole thing is mainstream. . After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist was either abused by this or beaten by that. . 😂 It's a close call every time. . . Shouldn't the upgrade stream be invincible? Every time the protagonist encounters wild monsters that are far beyond his capabilities. . . How else to play? The jungle knife said that this is making things difficult for me, Fat Tiger! ! !

I won't talk about the logic of the story. There are "I" and "I" in one sentence. I want to pretend to say that ancient Chinese is incompatible. To describe people who are aliens, it is not "those human beings" but "those people"? Did you pass the Chinese language? Or was it taught by a physical education teacher?

Alas, starting from chapter 350, I lost interest in reading. Let me talk about the fighting and strange news. The author described it very well. The communication between the characters in the early stage was also good. I felt comfortable. Chapter 350 started. Did the author change people? The dialogues are ridiculous. It's bland. It's nonsense in every aspect. It's mechanical. The dialogue between the protagonist and Luoshang is awkward or blunt. There's a high probability that the first 350 chapters might really be a magical book. After seeing chapter 370, these twenty chapters alone, I have no desire to read anymore.

I've read hundreds of chapters and I still don't know how to divide realms. ? ? ? ? ?

This novel is okay, yes, yes, the subject matter is good

The protagonist is so scared. Is it interesting to spend money to see this?