Earth Demon Ancestor

This book is still okay. The protagonist should transform into a dragon. After all, it is called Longyuan Village, the source of dragons. As for the plot, I hope it can be like a ghost story or a fairy tale. Modern fantasy writing, if it is too obvious, without the hazy feeling, it will become a naked urban immortality. Everyone knows that there are immortals, which will not look good. It is not ancient, this is modern and scientific. After the protagonist reaches a certain level, I hope it will be a story outside the earth, or a story in the deep sea.

In modern society, let's not talk about whether there is spiritual energy practice or not, but also think about it. Even if you change your bones, a one-meter-long snake is still as non-venomous as a spicy strip. If you accumulate strength, it can penetrate the human body? That's outrageous. Are you a bullet? Where does one come from who is confident enough to challenge a hunter with a gun and a knife? Is your body bulletproof or knifeproof? What is the use of bone replacement? In addition to being more powerful, have you changed your skin? Just being scratched a few times by the eagle's talons, the skin and flesh were torn apart. You said, you don't look like a human being, and you don't look like a snake when you are a cold-blooded animal. You still go to save those small animals. Have you forgotten how to eat voles? Aren't people just small animals? True double standards

The subject matter is okay, but there are a lot of flaws in what I saw. Especially in the early stage, I don't know why I insist on getting involved with people. The plot of going to the library is really incomprehensible. I traveled to the snake and turned into a snake. As a result, I ran to the city without any guarantee. The reason is to gain knowledge... Even if your cultivation method is based on some research on historical metaphysics in the past life, it is more reliable than this. Then the White Bone Temple is the protagonist's "inspiration" from the idea of ​​​​contemplation. In addition, the plot of the poacher is a bit strange. If you want to kill, just kill it. There is no need to write too many reasons for harming animals. After all, exotic animals have been exposed, but there are still some patches, that is, the forensic doctor who follows directly confirms that the snake killed the person... Maybe I didn't understand it or the author didn't express it clearly. The forensic doctor should at most identify the cause of death, the murder weapon, etc. Why do you directly say that the snake killed the person? I can't comment. Generally speaking, in the part I saw, there are constant flaws, but the plot can still be connected. It seems that the author likes to write conflicts between the protagonist and humans. It seems that there is a kind of conflict for the sake of conflict, rather than a series of events caused by cultivating immortals. In addition, I thought there would be some people showing off to QAQ, but maybe I didn't watch enough, so I didn't really feel that way.

It should be regarded as one of the best among the mentally retarded novels, with many poisonous points and all kinds of ways to reduce intelligence and brainlessness. Modern society is very tolerant, not to mention novels, even mentally retarded people can write and dare to publish🙃

How should I put it? I have read the latest chapter one after another. It is bland, has no characteristics, and has no climax at all. It is a pity to abandon it and it is tasteless. That is probably it. The title of each chapter is very passionate, but the main text is still so bland, ugh

So far, I can only say that it's not great, and I can't say what I don't like about it. First of all, the rhythm is average. Starting from a little snake, the author spends a lot of pen and ink to write about the sources, reasons and documents of the protagonist's various operations. The depictions of characters and animals tend to be vague and unified, with very few outstanding descriptions, and the supporting cast also lacks characteristics, giving people the feeling of a textbook full of knowledge points. When other people's writing is not good, they will choose to speed up the pace and fill the readers with plot. I suggest you consider it. Secondly, there is the character of the protagonist. This is a matter of opinion. From the beginning to the present, the protagonist basically only does good things passively or does good deeds conveniently. What disgusted me the most was the part about tomb robbing, eating the dividends from archeology, using things from other people's tombs, and backhanding people for archeology and driving them out. I really only have two comments: double standards and lack of structure. In the end, the writing style was bland, and hey, I really felt drowsy while reading it. It's not a serious book. It should be funny when it needs to be funny, and it should be serious when it needs to be serious. It makes the protagonist seem wise. The protagonist of Alien Beasts has a lot to write about. How can he just practice cultivation without thinking about anything after being reincarnated?

There are a lot of sailors, and I have read a lot of alien beasts. This book is not worth 9.0 At all, 5.0 Is too much.

This book allows me to see many holy bitches, poachers who want to kill themselves, and think they shouldn't be killed. Give it 5 stars. I feel happy when I see those people anxious.

It's too poisonous. Go catch snakes in the winter, hunt in the winter, and kill protected animals. If you kill two people, it's bigger. More people will check here, so you can just avoid it. The protagonist insists that he already has a way to die.

The funniest thing about this book is that the whole world is full of fools, who suffer amnesia every time. The global audience just watches a few people perform, and then they lose their memory when they don't need it.