My Practice Narration is Weird

From this novel, I hate the way ** stands in the archway even more Abandoned this book. There is no need to read this book after I started making copies of it with more than 100 chapters. Briefly mention a few shortcomings People talk more than the narrator If you can't beat me, just be reasonable. Every dungeon and every weirdness comes with three views, but the writing is not good, and it makes sense every time, so the dungeon looks good. Novels tell stories and are written in writing style. They are not much better than compositions. They cannot tell stories, have poor expressive skills, and have no cultural heritage. There is a single chapter in the article that says it borrowed some plot points. I suggest you read the original article.

Did the author get tired of writing and didn't want to write anymore, so he asked the AI ​​to continue writing? The beginning of Chapter 32 is very stiff, and the previous and subsequent chapters are basically not connected, which greatly affects the perception. It is obviously enough to write honestly, but I have to make mistakes. If I were not sure that the two chapters were the same book, I would have directly reported it. Go and see for yourself how stiff it is from Chapter 30 onward, so as not to know how the book died.

So why is Bai Lu not considered the heroine? Eat them all and wipe them clean😩

Let me start with the conclusion: overall it's okay. ------------ (I have read about 120 chapters as of now) 1. The first chapter of Chapter 70 was pretty good. After Chapter 70, I wrote 50 chapters on the way to Beijing. These 50 chapters were all in the first half of the journey. There was only a small dungeon on the way. After entering the dungeon, I wrote more than 20 chapters. I wrote about how powerful the boss setting was. After procrastinating and procrastinating, I finally thought that the protagonist was going to show off his power and ended wonderfully. The result was anticlimactic - the master came over and stopped it with a little weird sentence, ah this... 2. According to the existing text settings, it is speculated that the protagonist should have broken countless avenues in his previous life, but this copy is a replica of the same level of debris (mirror) as the protagonist's body, and the fake body of the protagonist (similar to the fake Monkey King) can actually perfectly copy the protagonist's skills and have all the memories (although there is only the first layer, but Lu Qingshan can't see through it in front) It can be said that the hidden background of the protagonist and the high level of the system established earlier turned into stone in an instant. Forget it, this mirror has so many false bodies, and the protagonist's false body is only part of the power, but the protagonist can't kill him no matter how hard he hits, and he doesn't hit him without turning on the second level of state, and he has to pretend while fighting. You can just turn on the second level of non-phase and kill him, and there is a master outside. It would be fine if I didn't kill the fake body as soon as possible. In the end, I just watched the fake body escape to the outside world... ------- But fortunately, at the end of this chapter, the mess is cut quickly and the problem is solved. The protagonist's master settled the problem with a few sentences of description. However, this section has too much foreshadowing and a hasty ending, which inevitably makes it look anticlimactic and continuation of the story. This section really doesn't work well.

Is there any chapter after Chapter 32 that doesn't connect well with the text?

It's well written, like the ravings of a madman who drank urine.

Quick update! Otherwise I'll put you in a dark room!

First, I clearly knew that the fifth-level bear demon was going to cause trouble, and I even reminded my guide. However, I didn't ask for leave during this period, and still went in. How far have you cultivated? You are messing around. Secondly, Lu Caiwei prepares to disfigure himself in order to stay awake. In order to preserve his appearance, the protagonist adopts the method of closing off the five senses as mentioned by the narrator. He is really a guy who is attracted by sex. Then Wuzu is looking for Lu Caiwei's feet in a weird way. He agrees with the narrator and is ready to fight for Yuzu. I abandoned the book when I saw this

I couldn't stand the first three chapters. The exercises given by the narrator in the second chapter seemed to be forced on me. It's very blunt and doesn't seem to have done much research on the narration. Without explaining the purpose of the narration, he was suddenly given a technique, and the protagonist accepted it with peace of mind? There is no idea of ​​​​research, not even excitement. Generally speaking, what is this written about? It feels like it was forced together. Not to mention the back, the front is almost unbearable. Abandoned

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