Douluo: the Sword Ancestor of the Qian Family Helps Qian Renxue Ascend to the Throne
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Qian Daobai traveled through time and became Qian Daoliu's brother. Accidentally awakened to the Immortal System, but due to the mission issued by the system, he retreated away from the human world for a hundred years. He lost his trace and was misunderstood by the Wuhun Palace that he had died long ago. Qian Daobai can get rewards by completing system tasks. The first task is to draw the sword for a hundred years. "Reward the Sword Immortal inheritance." The second task is to recruit disciples at the top of the mountain. "Reward the supreme swordsmanship." ... The century-old sword intent on the top of the mountain erupted, attracting the attention of several people. Qian Renxue was obsessed with the way of swordsmanship, and went to the top of the mountain to become a disciple in search of the sword's will. When we first met, "May I ask where your master is?" Qian Daobai defeated the snake spear and agouti with one move, and Qian Renxue became excited to become his disciple. When the road is rough, Qian Daobai punishes with one sword. Ma Hongjun: I will definitely make you regret it. Later, Qian Daobai returned to Wuhun Hall with Qian Renxue. Qian Daoliu: Brother, you are finally back! Bibi Dong: Young people, do not overestimate your abilities. Qian Daobai: I will personally avenge the Qian family! As Qian Daobai showed his evil-killing sword, the sword energy shocked everyone, and everyone knew that Qianjia Sword Immortal was invincible in the world.
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Official(31)Scraped 3d ago
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Level 76 can be upgraded twice, maybe the author himself didn't read it.
Although torture of three persons and anus is the norm in Douluo fanfiction, it is also a proof of good fanfic. But you, the uncle and princess, take your granddaughter as your disciple. It's best to be a true disciple. Don't be so shady and shameless about the incest between mother-in-law and son-in-law, but you are engaging in incest between master and disciple. This is much more disgusting than accepting Bibi Dong Qian Renxue's mother and daughter into the harem. Secondly, it's already 10 rings. Anzi moved into the Wuhun Palace and was raised fat by her mistress. Can't she find it with her spiritual consciousness? If this is really the case, I can only say that Douluo is indeed a fantasy sewer, even the protagonist is a god who can be thrown to death😆 Finally, it's not that I don't know what kind of white-eyed wolf Bibi Dong is. She has been in and out of Wuhun Hall so many times. Why is she so repulsive to the protagonist that she can't be caught and tortured?
Pure🗑️, writing about grandparents and granddaughters in such a romantic way, the plot is slow to advance, and boring descriptions are written on QQ just to complain about you🦅Written😐😐😐
Shi Yiyi has not won the Fairy Grass Competition yet. At this time, Tang San and the others are only around the third ring.
There are many other places that are unreasonable. If you write the same article, at least read the original work. At least the timeline is reasonable! Treating people as fools, Qian Renxue has never seen Ultimate Douluo? She watched her grandfather being beaten like a dog, and she didn't know that her master had been through many hardships. Could it be that Bibi Dong was better than Qian Daoliu? Even if she doesn't know the age of a golden soul ring, ten soul rings are a god-level powerhouse. I don't believe that she, a descendant of an angel god, doesn't know. A god who tortures a level 98 person is shocking to your sister! This kind of writing treats people as fools. It is clear that the protagonist is invincible and strong and does not pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger, but other people are just blind, acting like they don't know how strong the protagonist is and are provocative like crazy! No, who can become a strong man like a fool? In the original novel, when Bibi Dong grabbed Xiao Wu in front of Ning Fengzhi, he didn't even dare to let out a fart. Now he is so brave? Do you think you and two others are stupid for helping Tang San break into the Spirit Hall? The timeline is also wrong. Brother Qianren was only over level 60 when he was exposed. Now he is at level 69 with more than a year before the competition? Tang San and the others were only around the third level before they got the fairy grass. How could they have become over sixty? The writing was like a history, no wonder it was so pornographic!
The ocean is a desert compared to this book.
It's said to be the only one at the beginning, but what's next? The story about grandparents and grandchildren is so explicit. Have you never seen a woman?
The character design is broken, especially Qian Renxue and the people in Wuhun Palace. Compared with the dozens of Douluo fan novels I have read, it is also quite bad. Sixty or seventy percent of the word count is given to environmental description and character psychological description (just like my writing in junior high school). The plot is too slow. I suggest the author to eliminate unnecessary plots.
Not finished yet, can't comment! Wait until you return to Wuhun City! Qian Daoliu called brother, Qian Renxue's wonderful expression
The first martial soul, the Sword of Gods and Demons (Chaos, Swallowing, Universe, Creation, Destruction, Time and Space, Yin and Yang, Five Elements Law) can transform any origin. The second martial spirit, the God of Chaos, controls all laws and owns the humanoid martial spirit. Exclusive skills: Hunyuan Wuji Sutra, Three Cultivations of Essence, Qi and Shen, Infinite Fusion of Skills Advantages System, Chaos God and Demon Body, Can Devour and Fuse Other Systems Zhen Clan Kung Fu: Sun and Moon Promise Sutra, Universe Creation Sutra, Universe Steps, Creation Fist, Sun and Moon Divine Eyes, Promise Sword Technique, God-killing Halberd Technique, Universe Arrow Technique and Knife Technique, Zhoutian Star Jue Power Technique Pure Yang Wuji Sutra Pure Yin Wuji Sutra Xiaoyao Jue Hunyuan Jue Nine Yang Zhen Jing Nine Yin Zhen Sutra Beiming Divine Skill Xiao Wuxiang Changchun Palace Star Jue The exclusive magic weapon Hunyuan Pearl contains the world of spiritual springs. Drinking the spiritual spring water will help you live longer, cure diseases and nourish your skin. Key natural and earthly treasures God-killing Sword or Hunyuan Wuji Sword, Hunyuan Wuji Cauldron can refine elixirs and refine weapons, can absorb suppressive energy, and can increase the level with the male protagonist's strength. Chaos Suit The realm is clearly divided and there are 7-10 female protagonists.
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Mark mark mark, Junno Ju, let's not talk about the setting (here refers to the character setting) that is different from the original work (don't shout, if you have that strength, you might as well open it alone, why write a fan?), The whole movie is basically a common plot of pretending to be slap in the face, but it is a little more advanced.
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Official(31)Scraped 3d ago
666
Level 76 can be upgraded twice, maybe the author himself didn't read it.
Although torture of three persons and anus is the norm in Douluo fanfiction, it is also a proof of good fanfic. But you, the uncle and princess, take your granddaughter as your disciple. It's best to be a true disciple. Don't be so shady and shameless about the incest between mother-in-law and son-in-law, but you are engaging in incest between master and disciple. This is much more disgusting than accepting Bibi Dong Qian Renxue's mother and daughter into the harem. Secondly, it's already 10 rings. Anzi moved into the Wuhun Palace and was raised fat by her mistress. Can't she find it with her spiritual consciousness? If this is really the case, I can only say that Douluo is indeed a fantasy sewer, even the protagonist is a god who can be thrown to death😆 Finally, it's not that I don't know what kind of white-eyed wolf Bibi Dong is. She has been in and out of Wuhun Hall so many times. Why is she so repulsive to the protagonist that she can't be caught and tortured?
Pure🗑️, writing about grandparents and granddaughters in such a romantic way, the plot is slow to advance, and boring descriptions are written on QQ just to complain about you🦅Written😐😐😐
Shi Yiyi has not won the Fairy Grass Competition yet. At this time, Tang San and the others are only around the third ring.
There are many other places that are unreasonable. If you write the same article, at least read the original work. At least the timeline is reasonable! Treating people as fools, Qian Renxue has never seen Ultimate Douluo? She watched her grandfather being beaten like a dog, and she didn't know that her master had been through many hardships. Could it be that Bibi Dong was better than Qian Daoliu? Even if she doesn't know the age of a golden soul ring, ten soul rings are a god-level powerhouse. I don't believe that she, a descendant of an angel god, doesn't know. A god who tortures a level 98 person is shocking to your sister! This kind of writing treats people as fools. It is clear that the protagonist is invincible and strong and does not pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger, but other people are just blind, acting like they don't know how strong the protagonist is and are provocative like crazy! No, who can become a strong man like a fool? In the original novel, when Bibi Dong grabbed Xiao Wu in front of Ning Fengzhi, he didn't even dare to let out a fart. Now he is so brave? Do you think you and two others are stupid for helping Tang San break into the Spirit Hall? The timeline is also wrong. Brother Qianren was only over level 60 when he was exposed. Now he is at level 69 with more than a year before the competition? Tang San and the others were only around the third level before they got the fairy grass. How could they have become over sixty? The writing was like a history, no wonder it was so pornographic!
The ocean is a desert compared to this book.
It's said to be the only one at the beginning, but what's next? The story about grandparents and grandchildren is so explicit. Have you never seen a woman?
The character design is broken, especially Qian Renxue and the people in Wuhun Palace. Compared with the dozens of Douluo fan novels I have read, it is also quite bad. Sixty or seventy percent of the word count is given to environmental description and character psychological description (just like my writing in junior high school). The plot is too slow. I suggest the author to eliminate unnecessary plots.
Not finished yet, can't comment! Wait until you return to Wuhun City! Qian Daoliu called brother, Qian Renxue's wonderful expression
The first martial soul, the Sword of Gods and Demons (Chaos, Swallowing, Universe, Creation, Destruction, Time and Space, Yin and Yang, Five Elements Law) can transform any origin. The second martial spirit, the God of Chaos, controls all laws and owns the humanoid martial spirit. Exclusive skills: Hunyuan Wuji Sutra, Three Cultivations of Essence, Qi and Shen, Infinite Fusion of Skills Advantages System, Chaos God and Demon Body, Can Devour and Fuse Other Systems Zhen Clan Kung Fu: Sun and Moon Promise Sutra, Universe Creation Sutra, Universe Steps, Creation Fist, Sun and Moon Divine Eyes, Promise Sword Technique, God-killing Halberd Technique, Universe Arrow Technique and Knife Technique, Zhoutian Star Jue Power Technique Pure Yang Wuji Sutra Pure Yin Wuji Sutra Xiaoyao Jue Hunyuan Jue Nine Yang Zhen Jing Nine Yin Zhen Sutra Beiming Divine Skill Xiao Wuxiang Changchun Palace Star Jue The exclusive magic weapon Hunyuan Pearl contains the world of spiritual springs. Drinking the spiritual spring water will help you live longer, cure diseases and nourish your skin. Key natural and earthly treasures God-killing Sword or Hunyuan Wuji Sword, Hunyuan Wuji Cauldron can refine elixirs and refine weapons, can absorb suppressive energy, and can increase the level with the male protagonist's strength. Chaos Suit The realm is clearly divided and there are 7-10 female protagonists.
l🐔
Mark mark mark, Junno Ju, let's not talk about the setting (here refers to the character setting) that is different from the original work (don't shout, if you have that strength, you might as well open it alone, why write a fan?), The whole movie is basically a common plot of pretending to be slap in the face, but it is a little more advanced.
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