Outside the Courtyard, Restart Life

There are a few things that are hard to bear 1. The words He Yuzhu appear too frequently. They can appear dozens of times in one chapter. They are not friendly to listening to books. You can only hear He Yuzhu and He Yuzhu, but nothing else. 2. There is a conflict in behavioral logic. For example, after the protagonist is reborn, he neither loves nor hates his father, but has a little respect for Yi Zhonghai😋. What kind of brain circuit is this? For example, in the previous drama, it was said that staying with a good young man would improve his ideological level. Then Guo was going to join the army to fight against the United States and aid Korea. He did not dare to go because of his girl. He admired the hero and so on. Then he was asked to take care of the family. He estimated that the other party would not come back, but he did not dare to agree. People saw what he was thinking, and just asked him to take care of him so that he wouldn't be bullied. The protagonist agreed with all his heart, and people praised him for his righteousness and awesomeness. The emotional logic before and after this is not coherent at all, it's just nonsense.

Check in, currently 49 chapters. At present, it seems to be the most logical fanfic I have read, and it is also the most logical fanfic to write about silly pillars. Silly Zhu experienced deception and returned to the past. His mentality was that the whole world was acting, his life was unreal, he could not distinguish between truth and illusion, and he was suspicious of everyone. The author described this very well. There are also errors and omissions, but they are minor issues. Jia Zhang said that the nickname Silly Zhu was given to him when he was about twelve or thirteen years old. The nickname of Silly Zhu was 35 years old, which is the period when Beij was solving F in 1948-49. It was not the period when he was young. You also wrote that He Daqing saw some of the tricks of these people, but when he came back, he wrote He Daqing too badly. Some of the views are consistent with the author's. Yi Zhonghai's wife is also an old silver coin, Deaf is a complete villain, and Jia Zhang's methods are also clever. Contempt him for having an affair with Qin, Qin agreed, Jia Zhang stood aside, and later Mao said that Jia Zhang was not easy to get along with before), it is certain that Jia Dongxu is a small silver coin, can mother and son live in a middle courtyard or a quite big house without any means? And he also married Jia Dongxu, and Qin also had some tricks. In fact, in the play, as long as Jia and Zhang's old age care is not involved, Qin is in charge of the family. In the original drama, it is not written that Jia Dongxu and Qin are Yi's apprentices, but the fans and the devilish adaptations basically agree. In fact, it is almost the same. I used to have children when I was sixteen or eighteen, and Yi, who is thirty or forty, is already considered an old man, and he must be thinking about his future retirement. When writing a chronicle of the Siheyuan, I can only leave the Siheyuan partially, but not completely. It is really good to arrange for Shazhu to go to the steel rolling mill but find another way to defend it. I feel that in the mid-term, I can take the path of earning foreign exchange. It is really boring to just stay in the courtyard and it is easy to lose intelligence. In a word, I am optimistic about you and will update quickly. 😷

This was when Aunt Thirteen was relatively thin.

It is better to write about Sha Zhu's rebirth than to write about modern young people traveling through Sha Zhu. Think about Sha Zhu's 70s or 80's old man's rebirth as a young man. There was too little sense of substitution. Sha Zhu's character may not be able to be changed.

It feels like it is written like a time traveler, rather than the rebirth of Sha Zhu. With Sha Zhu's urine, he will rob Qin Huairu at the beginning and take better care of her to prevent her from starving. After all, this woman died of stomach cancer. The reason why the children of the Jia family treat him badly is because Qin Huairu burped under Sha Zhu's care. Why do the children of the Jia family resent Sha Zhu? Because in the middle and old age, Sha Zhu was old-fashioned to Qin Huairu because of his own son. At this time Silly Zhu will think this way when he travels back in time. If he had nothing to do with the Lou family, he would have a happy life with his Sister Qin. Therefore, the first thing he should do in time travel is to kill Jia Dongxu, and the last thing he should do is kick him as an eunuch. Moreover, when he sees his chubby sister in time travel, Silly Zhu will think, eh, my sister is okay, then it will be okay. Sister Qin hasn't passed the door yet, and Sister Qin is the most important, so he will go crazy to mess with the Jia family. 2⃣️ Of course, it is also possible that she has already had sex anyway, and doesn't want to be together anymore, and plans to stay far away and love her as she pleases. This kind of thinking is also described in the article, but decades of caring habits cannot fool people. Normally speaking, she will definitely be used to being nice to Qin Huairu. The reason why she didn't have this idea at this time may be because she has finished having sex with Yu Li and has a new wife. Later, when I read dozens of subsequent chapters, I found out Now the author has come full circle, and it looks like the thoughts of a reborn person. It feels okay and can be read. However, I have read too many courtyard novels of this kind. I have basically read all the novels with a rating of 7.5 Or above. As a result, as long as there are no big differences in the subsequent plots, there are basically no emotional ups and downs. The storyline is pretty much the same. I hope the author can write it well and update it more. After all, this is a 500-word essay for readers.

This is fan fiction, so of course the original drama should prevail! Anyone who has watched the TV series will never look for Lou Xiao'e! This woman completely behaves like a modern person! A few days after divorcing Damao, she slept with Shazhu, and then the play clearly stated that she got married after going to Hong Kong! Only later they got divorced. Not to mention the looks of the actors, except for the female liar who later joined Damao, no one in this TV series is much better than Lou Xiao'e! Not to mention her family background, the drama is completely forced to explain. In reality, if the Lou family did not run away, then it would be okay for you to draw a clear line with them! I can't even tell who ran away! The best result is to allocate them to support the construction of the third line! Is it a shame to leave so many beautiful, capable and loyal women without looking for them? How much do you like environmental protection? !

There is a shortage of books, so I wanted to see if this book is to my liking! I bought 30 chapters starting from 415, and listened to half of them (at least 15 of the 30 chapters) were all about Jia Dongxu's bullshit! Before I saw 145 pictures, I remember that Jia Dongxu wrote many chapters because of gambling, and finally because of Lou Xiao'e's bullshit story! It really made me sick, and I stopped buying the latest chapters! Now I am still writing about Jia Dongxu's gambling! Jia Dongxu is gone, which can be regarded as echoing the story of Qin Huairu being a widow at the beginning of the TV series. Or maybe it's because I didn't have much favorable impressions of your book at the beginning. But it's still enough for nm water!

Just average, not that great. There are too many words for water

Does Qin Huairu look like this, everyone? What do you think? Can Miss Zhaotong compete with Qin Huairu? Except for her stupid brain, this woman has everything else that appeals to me about her aesthetics.

This book looks comfortable, but the word "workplace" that was often used in that era was really ridiculous.