Rebirth of the Coiling Dragon

For example, when grabbing the Nine Spirit Beads, if you swear an oath to the Supreme God before you get the item, then such an oath should also have a premise that the nine spirit beads should be given to the protagonist first! If there are no prerequisites for this kind of oath, the protagonist's IQ will be pitifully low! He must be a fool! Moreover, no matter how the soul of a time traveler has mutated, how can it be possible that his strength and background are so low? At least three souls need to mutate, right? Especially since the soul has mutated in advance, and the soul is ten times and dozens of times that of the ordinary sanctuary, why is the understanding of the rule of law so low! I am very disappointed. I have read countless Panlong colleagues, but this one is just average! It's obvious that the author really wanted to write it well, but Hagson's original work should have died on the spot! There is no chance of being saved! Read more of the original work, even if you can travel through Linley's younger brother and uncle!

There are several places that violate the settings of the original work. For example, in the original work, splitting the head of a god-level powerhouse with a knife and shattering the soul in the godhead will cause the opponent to die. This is not the case in this book. Once the opponent's head is split, the godhead can still run away with the soul; for example, the main god can use the power of will to form a projection to obliterate everyone below the Great Perfection. This book is not true. The protagonist can resist the attack of the main god by wearing the main material defense artifact, and he is only seriously injured. . . Also the main character's name is nondescript.

In the Panlong setting, divine power can strengthen the body of the weapon! The two kinds of fused divine power are ten times the normal ones, that is, the fused divine power of the middle god is the level of the upper god! So why doesn't the protagonist strengthen his physical body and weapons early? All I can say is that the author worked hard, but his homework was not deep enough, and there were too many unreasonable things in every part! And the traveler's foresight is almost useless! In order to slow down the progress, the protagonist's IQ and strength were excessively lowered!

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I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. The licking was disgusting. Even if I wanted to hug my thigh, it was too low-level and rubbish.

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I don't want to say it, but I really can't bear it. Is the protagonist mentally retarded?

It's pretty good compared to the fanfics.

Um, I've never seen anything like this. . . All the attributes are restrained, but the rules system is restrained by the element system haha

Can you write a book about Dzogchen showing off in the material plane?