Night Blessed

It's good to watch, but there are too few chapters. If the author doesn't hurry up and update it, the donkeys in the production team will not dare to rest like you.

Although I have not fully subscribed, I have always paid to read the book. The author will come back and write the book soon, otherwise👹👹👹👹👹👹! ! !

The writing style is okay, mainly because the type and content of the book suit my taste.

I really like the book "Demon Realm". Although the ending is too rushed, I saw everything I wanted to read🤡. I just read this book and it is quite to my liking (because I don't like the fourth natural disaster type), but it is too short. I hope it can be speeded up.

It's almost on the shelves. Let's enjoy it with a few more chapters.

In fact, I prefer novels that involve players and have more fun. I have read a few novels about this kind of game that does not involve players. But as long as it is for games, I will still recommend it and I will not read the book.

I will never read your book again! Very well written! Not so with eunuchs.

Well, it seems from the article that the author is probably a squid fan, and there are more or less mysterious shadows in the novel. For example, the sacrifice disaster in Gangdian City is somewhat similar to the Backlund disaster. This is not to say that this is bad, but to refute the author's book review. On the contrary, as far as some of the chapters from the previous chapter are concerned, the writing style has indeed been greatly optimized in many aspects. And the immersion is slightly better The portrayal of the character. The most memorable part is the part where the guy from the Steam Church called himself a coward (forgive me for forgetting his name again... A moment of silence. Jpg) The visual quality immediately improved. It was immediately raised to another level, although it was just a short period of high-level performance. In other aspects, the overall sense of the overall situation is just a macro sense, and it is still not specially created. For example, it is like a single-layer drama or a composite drama. Although it can feel like being there, the pain, sadness and urgency of facing a disaster are not fully heightened. Moreover, the author's desire to improve his writing style can also be seen in the text. For example, Sullman's decision in the face of disaster can be felt. The author wants to dig out the emotional portrayal at the end of the mysterious clown chapter to enhance the sense of immersion. But I was still a little anxious. Of course, there is a process for improving one's writing skills. Don't achieve it overnight, don't rush for quick success. The road to literature begins with a single step. Tall buildings rise from the ground. In terms of subject matter, I think it's great to choose this kind of pseudo-systematic text as a trial work. Because of this style, the character's combat power value is improved, and there is no need to rely on the plot rhythm or control. The fault tolerance rate is much higher than that of systemless files. Whether it is a sudden increase in combat power or rhythm control, the system can be used to control it. As for the plot, I think sometimes it can be more daily, with a slightly more detailed description, such as special foods and so on. Moreover, one of the selling points of this type of writing is the bizarre and colorful journey to another world. You don't have to always pursue the main plot, you can also engage in branch plots, relax and have a certain degree of relaxation, and finally come to a climax and wrap up, which is beautiful. Like a mystery? (Funny. Jpg) But compared to the mystery, it's good to have a female protagonist in this book. The SP soul is burning and hissing. From time to time, use the heroine's perspective and give more characterization. Their little tome? Get it you!

Not bad Not bad. The sense of immersion is pretty good. Since it is a new book, protect it well and support it with monthly tickets. Here are two monthly passes, take them, no thanks~😋

The original article is very good. You have read The Extraordinary Mechanic, and the writing is almost the same, but can you stop talking so much nonsense? This is a fluent word. It may be the first time to write a book. Long live understanding, come on!