The Strongest Evolution of Heaven

I discovered this novel of yours today. The setting is in line with my taste. I like it better. After reading dozens of chapters you wrote, I was still a bit unsatisfied, so I looked through your other novels... And found that both novels were similar in word count. When your book reaches that word count, will it also become a eunuch? If so, please notify me in advance so that I can leave and avoid wasting time in the end.

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist keeps emphasizing on loli and other things, and still wants to change it. Are you paying attention to the word count or do you think this is funny? You have such a good laugh! !

A person in the lower world is more beautiful than a person in the half-step eternal world, and she is even more beautiful than Chang'e. Since it is written that Dongfang Bai is more beautiful than Chang'e, and she is still more beautiful than the most beautiful woman in the human race, is there any comparison? Moreover, after receiving the inheritance, he washed the marrow and eliminated impurities. Since he was said to be more beautiful than Chang'e when he received the inheritance, and still had impurities in his body, it was really funny 😂 (Chapter 66)

Can it be faster? I've given you all my recommendation votes.

Is the protagonist male or female? Loli?

Reading this book made my head hurt. When I listened, it was all sentence fragments and commas, and I don't know if commas count as word count. Anyway, I felt uncomfortable all over while listening. There are also 80 words out of 100 that are used to form adjectives, and at first glance, the adjectives were copied from a random search on the Internet. If they are wrong, they will not say them and emphasize them two or three times. And after reading more than a dozen of his adjectives in one breath, you suddenly think back and you will find that he said so many balls that you have no idea what he wants to express. There was also a fight scene that took two or three chapters to write about, which is nothing. The main thing is that you can see that his bragging was all about some very awesome words, but in the end, he didn't even know that they were having sex. It was described as devastating but he seemed to have no feeling at all. Also, it is either serious or serious or funny, but what the hell is he writing? Even when it is very serious, he insists on inserting a funny sentence. The result is not only that it is not funny, but also makes people look like Hamabai, and he can laugh for dozens of chapters with one joke. For example: He wrote about how beautiful the protagonist is when she turns into a lolita. He kept writing and kept saying what men thought about women after seeing them. It was enough to say this once or twice. As a result, he had to say it once every time he introduced the protagonist. I just want to ask the author: Do you really miss a man? This is a complete hypocrisy. And when the dragon and the eagle fought, we saw how powerful and incredible it was, but in the end, we knew that it would be a lose-lose situation. Also, when a group of people are thinking about something, they all say mp or mmp. It may seem a bit funny but actually they look like fools.

I finally came out of the prison called "school" ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing I'm coming out of the prison called "school" prisons. ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! So cool! So cool! So cool!

Author! Now there is such a grand scene in the mere innate realm, then he will become an immortal and a god by then. The protagonist just jumped out of the book and turned you, the guy who arranged the plot, into a real loli.

Author, I found a problem that only supporting characters are written, not the protagonist.

Stop using your sword to kill yourself