Kowloon Swallowing Pearls

I deceived myself for a whole chapter just for you.

Come on, come on, I'll come first +1

Those who were recommended by Brother Dong raised their paws.

Many readers reported that there were some historical misalignments and typos, and I have reviewed them again. I have been writing new content recently, so the old chapters have not been revised. Starting from today, I will read it several times before uploading it to try to avoid this kind of problem from happening again. Thank you everyone for raising questions and catching bugs to make Jiulong Swallowing Pearl more perfect!

I read Chapter 14. The language is average and the story is told clearly. I am very curious about the plot behind it. If it is another Xiaobai text template, I will come back and change it. I will give you my recommendation vote.

Let's take a look first. I don't know if it looks good or not.

I came here on the recommendation of Wangfa. Author, can you imagine that when readers were looking forward to the second update of Wangpang today, they got a very bad chapter. How big of a gap was there? And at this time, Wangpang is still advertising? ? The resentment caused by the sense of gap is instantly transferred to you.

The story line is okay at the beginning, but then it jumps to the city. Author, don't you think the jump is too fast? And the protagonist's ability to adapt is too strong, let's not talk about the changes in language for now. I didn't pay attention to details like clothes. I hope the author can improve it in the future. The above is my personal suggestion, accept refutation but not criticism.

The author's background should be quite big (･ิϖ･ิ)っ

Give me a thumbs up and I can fly directly to the great gods for an appointment! ! Haha, just kidding, the boss is really awesome, so many platinum masters recommend him, but why are the data so bleak? It shouldn't be! ! ! !