I, Ding Xiu, Am the Number One Killer of Gu Long Martial Arts!

It's very frustrating. You, the author, can either directly write about Ding Xiu's time traveling through the ancient dragon, focusing on describing Ding Xiu's lawless character, or you can write about a time traveler, who has the advantage of foresight. As a result, you gave the time traveler Ding Xiu's name, but you still don't know the plot, and you don't have Ding Xiu's lovable character. The fighting scenes are too weird, and they are completely different.

I learned a lot of martial arts, and my inner strength was first to the ninth level of the wedding dress and then to the next level. It was the same as what I had learned in Bai.

Killing men one by one, and then traveling around the world to follow beautiful women. What the hell are you doing to your mother-in-law? You can't control your private parts if you go to the vagina, right? The protagonist should quickly change his skills! The Sunflower Book is more suitable for the protagonist

The description of the fights is terrible, and everyone seems to be fighting 50-50. In other words, every time I fight with someone, there are always various reasons why I can't use my full strength. I don't even consider how much stronger the protagonist is than others. Anyway, in the end, it's 50-50. I can't see the suppressive nature of the protagonist's martial arts. That's fine. Just like when fighting with others, you can only fight palm to palm, foot to foot, and the speed of shooting is incredible, not to mention the martial arts. The protagonist does not show any high martial arts, but hits the air every time he exerts his full strength. The writing is very impressive, but when compared with others, it is very strange...

You can abandon the book after reading the first chapter. The author wanted to learn from Gu Long, but unfortunately he didn't learn the good stuff. The first chapter introduces the content of Qingyi Tower, which is contradictory. The fighting plot is completely different. After cutting his throat with a knife, the opponent's sword stops suddenly, but he still has a lot of nonsense. Did you write Gu Long like this?

Is this point earned? The beginning is messy. The person who travels later knows the magical skill of wedding dress but doesn't know how to practice it? Just forcibly add scenes, a bunch of introductions and narrations, an action and a bunch of introductions, a walk and a bunch of introductions, one chapter is 3000 words, 100 words of plot, 2900 introductions and narrations

Are you just such a eunuch? Update quickly or I'll break your legs

This book may have been written randomly. It was okay at first, but the plot started to not make sense in the middle. In the previous chapter, I was talking about pig's feet and I didn't even know what to write after that. This book shouldn't have come out,

When I saw Xiao Li's Flying Knife, I felt quite disappointed. After a good time travel, I originally knew that the plot would be messed up by him in the future, but forget it. He taught a woman (probably Bai Feifei) martial arts, and in the end he was hunted down by that woman's apprentice. It was quite uncomfortable to watch.

Times have changed, and today's readers don't like meaningless nonsense! The protagonist talks more nonsense than the villain, which leaves readers speechless. Why do you think each villain has to communicate in a few lengthy sentences? It's not impossible to use nonsense to delay the progress of the plot, but it's just that the writing style is very particular. If it is well written, it is like "Sometime to Come", which can capture the readers' attention, and it can be read three times or four times. Come on, I suggest you improve your writing skills before doing this.