
Doraemon's Daily Check-in System
by Guan Xianyu
About This Novel
Travel through the world of Doraemon, become Nobita Nobita's younger brother Nobita Chi, and get the daily check-in system. "Successfully clocked in today and received one thousand yen!" "Successfully clocked in today and gained control of gravity!" "Successfully checked in today and obtained the Emperor's Armor!" "I checked in successfully today and got..." Please read what readers need to know before reading!!!
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Official(60)Scraped 1mo ago
After traveling through time and becoming Nobita's younger brother Dazhi, it can only be said that you two brothers are not simple at all. One has Doraemon, and the other has the check-in system. Good guys, this whole world belongs to you, right? Very lucky
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Many readers' comments have been deleted. It was not deleted by me, but by the administrator. So the question is, where did the administrator come from? Who is the administrator? 😰
Let's briefly talk about what's wrong with this book.
First of all, after I read a few pictures, I knew that this book would not go far. Why? First of all, the problem of world view is that the Doraemon world is a daily science fiction world, and the value of force is not high, which makes it difficult for the protagonist to improve his abilities. Secondly, Doraemon cannot really be described as a main world, at most it is a sub-world. After all, there are so many rules. Props, I hope the author can choose a new world as the main world as soon as possible. I recommend a few, Super God, Dragon Ball, Naruto, One Piece, Marvel, Prehistoric and so on. I dedicate this to the author. I hope the author can take a good look at it. By the way, I want to say one more thing. Since I want to write a daily episode about gravity meditation, don't put it in. It's really difficult to explain when the protagonist is discovered.
If you write poorly, you will scold others. If others criticize you, you will scold you. If others scold you, you will directly delete the comments. If you write poorly, you will have to change it. If you don't listen to advice and don't change it, you will become obscene sooner or later. I wish you to enter the harem as soon as possible and enjoy the three thousand beauties in the harem.
The protagonist is that he is too weak. He is extremely weak. He has a weak personality, weak consciousness, weak body, and his fighting ability is not good enough.
The protagonist is that he is too weak. He is extremely weak. He has a weak personality, weak consciousness, weak body, and his fighting ability is not good enough.
I can only say that he is worthy of being the protagonist, Nobita's younger brother, Dazhi. Your brother has Doraemon, and you have a sign-in and clock-in system. You two brothers are also quite powerful. This really means that all the good things are in your home.
You are writing a novel, not an animation.
There is no need to wear it back and forth, it will bore you as much as it bores the readers. You could have just brushed it off, but in the end you ended up having to go through so much trouble. And it keeps weakening the protagonist. As a reader, what I hate most is the torture of the story. Also, the plot is dragged out because the main character is originally invincible. You are making various excuses to make the protagonist look like a loser. Why!
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Official(60)Scraped 1mo ago
After traveling through time and becoming Nobita's younger brother Dazhi, it can only be said that you two brothers are not simple at all. One has Doraemon, and the other has the check-in system. Good guys, this whole world belongs to you, right? Very lucky
Say something
Many readers' comments have been deleted. It was not deleted by me, but by the administrator. So the question is, where did the administrator come from? Who is the administrator? 😰
Let's briefly talk about what's wrong with this book.
First of all, after I read a few pictures, I knew that this book would not go far. Why? First of all, the problem of world view is that the Doraemon world is a daily science fiction world, and the value of force is not high, which makes it difficult for the protagonist to improve his abilities. Secondly, Doraemon cannot really be described as a main world, at most it is a sub-world. After all, there are so many rules. Props, I hope the author can choose a new world as the main world as soon as possible. I recommend a few, Super God, Dragon Ball, Naruto, One Piece, Marvel, Prehistoric and so on. I dedicate this to the author. I hope the author can take a good look at it. By the way, I want to say one more thing. Since I want to write a daily episode about gravity meditation, don't put it in. It's really difficult to explain when the protagonist is discovered.
If you write poorly, you will scold others. If others criticize you, you will scold you. If others scold you, you will directly delete the comments. If you write poorly, you will have to change it. If you don't listen to advice and don't change it, you will become obscene sooner or later. I wish you to enter the harem as soon as possible and enjoy the three thousand beauties in the harem.
The protagonist is that he is too weak. He is extremely weak. He has a weak personality, weak consciousness, weak body, and his fighting ability is not good enough.
The protagonist is that he is too weak. He is extremely weak. He has a weak personality, weak consciousness, weak body, and his fighting ability is not good enough.
I can only say that he is worthy of being the protagonist, Nobita's younger brother, Dazhi. Your brother has Doraemon, and you have a sign-in and clock-in system. You two brothers are also quite powerful. This really means that all the good things are in your home.
You are writing a novel, not an animation.
There is no need to wear it back and forth, it will bore you as much as it bores the readers. You could have just brushed it off, but in the end you ended up having to go through so much trouble. And it keeps weakening the protagonist. As a reader, what I hate most is the torture of the story. Also, the plot is dragged out because the main character is originally invincible. You are making various excuses to make the protagonist look like a loser. Why!






















