The First Immortal of Swordsmanship

I have read the author's book before, and I was more interested in it when I saw the title. I don't have much else to say, I just hope it won't be a dog-licking plot. It doesn't matter if the protagonist lives a miserable life. I just hope he won't be a bitch. If he is rejected by a woman, he still sticks to his butt. That would be very disappointing.

After reading Chapter 833, I feel that this book is pretty good. Although I saw many people complaining about the plot in the comment area, it's okay, but I feel that there are fewer and fewer people reading the book patiently. Some people feel dissatisfied after reading a few chapters, so they just find other books to read, why don't they just give low scores? Please respect the author's hard work🙃

The age of dark mythology, suddenly, isn't it? Good, yes, right or wrong, trump card , a group of big shots couldn't even think of it, as if they were struck by lightning. I break my head every day and use this kind of vocabulary all the time. My cultural background is so poor that my vocabulary accumulation is not as good as that of a primary school student. The most taboo thing in fairy tales and fantasy novels is the use of modern vocabulary. Words like gun calf and grass mud horse have come out, and they come from figures like the Emperor of Heaven. Villains have no style. First of all, a villain with style will not curse, let alone Emotions, anger, sorrows and joys are expressed on his face, and his anger and embarrassment also lead to the swearing of modern people. Every chapter is full of this kind of vocabulary (if it doesn't pass the test, change the homonym) vocabulary, what a talent The whole article is full of meaningless dialogue, which does not promote the plot in any way, has no new ideas, and only uses dialogue to fill the word count. None of the characterizations are deep, the villain's name is forgettable at a glance, no matter he is the protagonist or the supporting character, the characterization is nothing special. The point is, the villains all have no IQ. No matter how high they are in cultivation, they are all gathered together. The word count of chatting together is low. There are too many parallel sentences and too many repeated paragraphs. Those gods I wrote about before Every time he appears, he writes or rides a phoenix, or holds a Buddhist staff, or... I remember that I have written no less than 10 chapters like this, describing those few The appearance of the God Lord. Really speechless. The writing was okay before chapter 200, but not so good after chapter 200. Routine: Awakening past life memories → Fighting enemies in previous lives → Awakening → Fighting enemies in previous lives → Awakening → Fighting enemies in previous lives →......→......

The protagonist died in the previous life, and everyone betrayed him? If it is a few people, it is normal. If it is the vast majority of people, it can be said that the exotic treasure skills left behind are too tempting. But if everyone is like this, it's obviously the protagonist's own problem. The first is that he doesn't know people well, the second is that he doesn't know how to teach people or how to be a good person, the third is that he doesn't understand other people or the land at all, etc. The protagonist may have a too high position, and maybe he takes it for granted no matter what he does. He thinks that others have great blessings when he gives a little help to others, etc. Many places may have a great effect on others and even change their fate, but how does he ask for it, what impact does it have on him, etc... Chapter 2 also seems to have something wrong with it. The protagonist traveled through time in a trash body, but he married the most beautiful and talented woman. There is also the possibility of developing a relationship with the heroine's sister. It feels toxic. The reason is because the heroine doesn't want to be disturbed by others... Dog🐶

If your fiancée doesn't like you and looks down on you, and everyone in the family does this, then why do you have to stay there? You can just break off the engagement. She is so unpopular, and you have to be insulted all the time, and it would be better to leave yourself, so why not leave. If you want to keep it, I just want to say, that is cheap! You still awaken your past life memories and don't care at all. What do you think? You don't care at all when others insult and abuse you. Is this the mentality of a big shot? Returning to the First Immortal, what is your mentality?

I've read more than 10 chapters. Reincarnation and rebuilding. A son-in-law comes to the house. The wife doesn't like him. The villain comes to the house and slaps him in the face. He meets an old man when he goes out. He treats the old man's illness. The old man is very powerful in the local area. It will come in handy in the next chapter. Family birthday. The slap in the face. Except for having a sister-in-law, there is no difference from the urban novice's pretentious writing. It is not easy to give 3 stars.

What kind of bad character would make everyone betray? Don't talk about other people's bad character. The fact that so many people betray you shows that there is something wrong with your character at all. I really can't stand it if you want to be the protagonist with such a bad character! !

There are a lot of people here bragging about it, my God, the writing is very beautiful. Golden Chapter 3 contains a bunch of poison points, and they are poisoned as soon as they come up

Your author actually changed it to anime and played it on Tencent Video

No matter how much the top leader of a big force pulls his hips, there are probably some die-hard loyalists! Does this protagonist have no loyal fans?