
Zhu Xian Immortal Story
by Morin Ruohan
About This Novel
The new book "The Changxin Marquis of the Great Qin Dynasty" Tianjiu + Qin Shi + Mythical Fellowship is alone in Hongmeng, who is the lover? The infatuated Baguio, the beautiful fairy Lu Xueqi, the charming Xiaobai, the cute and smart Tian Linger, the pure and kind Xiaohuan, and the unrivaled Linglong. Flowers bloom and must be folded; QQ group for book friends exchange: 1128409013
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Official(78)Scraped 11d ago
Rubbish, a waste of such a good subject as Zhu Xian
The author is so embarrassed that he likes Zhu Xian, who endured reading a hundred and ten chapters, and finally gave up the book. It hurt Zhu Xian, and he was blinded in vain.
It also travels back in time to the male protagonist of the original work, and the male protagonist has no special features, so why should we read your book? Isn't it good to read the original version of Zhu Xian?
Not good-looking
A stallion, after identification, he is still a scumbag
When writing a Zhu Xian fanfic, it's best not to use the protagonist of the original work as the protagonist. Your writing is not as good as Xiao Ding's, so you'd better jump on the street as soon as possible.
Emotional drama is in vain
1. How can I say that it is really difficult to have a sense of immersion in the important characters of the protagonist of Soul Transmitter (the plot is similar to the original work, why do readers read you? It is better to read the original work! The plot is very different from the original work, it feels like watching a new one, with a different name, and it looks nondescript) 2. I'm really blind, I didn't look at the back, I really let down Tian Linger in the front🤐, I knew that people in that era took the defense between men and women so seriously, and still had all kinds of ambiguities, and then Tian Linger fell in love with him, and her whole heart was in his heart, but he was not moved🤐 (While saying that Lin Feng was dead in the past, and now Zhang Xiaofan, at the same time, he was thinking about the world before the training meeting, and all kinds of contradictions) 3. The emotion towards Tian Linger really makes the reader feel sick, making her fall in love with him, but she doesn't avoid or respond in any way. After reading what I said earlier, I felt like I was going back to my previous world through cultivation. However, after going down the mountain for an experience, when I faced Tian Ling, I said (I liked it), but now I like Baguio😐, don't you think it's disgusting?
I originally wanted to see a Zhu Xian that wasn't a tragedy, but it's a pity!
Senior sister Tian Ling'er has had enough fun. If you encounter Baguio, please get out of here! Later, Baguio and Lu Xueqi were taken in, and there was another story about Senior Sister Please Get Out. I don't know what the author was thinking. You either have to mess with the other heroines, or you accept them all. After you have had enough fun, you have to draw a clear line with your ex-girlfriend when you meet someone more beautiful. Then you continue to pull the Senior Sister to the bed and touch her hands. This shows that the author's three views are not correct. Then the author packages himself and says that Zhang Xiaofan in the novel is a free and unrestrained person!
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Official(78)Scraped 11d ago
Rubbish, a waste of such a good subject as Zhu Xian
The author is so embarrassed that he likes Zhu Xian, who endured reading a hundred and ten chapters, and finally gave up the book. It hurt Zhu Xian, and he was blinded in vain.
It also travels back in time to the male protagonist of the original work, and the male protagonist has no special features, so why should we read your book? Isn't it good to read the original version of Zhu Xian?
Not good-looking
A stallion, after identification, he is still a scumbag
When writing a Zhu Xian fanfic, it's best not to use the protagonist of the original work as the protagonist. Your writing is not as good as Xiao Ding's, so you'd better jump on the street as soon as possible.
Emotional drama is in vain
1. How can I say that it is really difficult to have a sense of immersion in the important characters of the protagonist of Soul Transmitter (the plot is similar to the original work, why do readers read you? It is better to read the original work! The plot is very different from the original work, it feels like watching a new one, with a different name, and it looks nondescript) 2. I'm really blind, I didn't look at the back, I really let down Tian Linger in the front🤐, I knew that people in that era took the defense between men and women so seriously, and still had all kinds of ambiguities, and then Tian Linger fell in love with him, and her whole heart was in his heart, but he was not moved🤐 (While saying that Lin Feng was dead in the past, and now Zhang Xiaofan, at the same time, he was thinking about the world before the training meeting, and all kinds of contradictions) 3. The emotion towards Tian Linger really makes the reader feel sick, making her fall in love with him, but she doesn't avoid or respond in any way. After reading what I said earlier, I felt like I was going back to my previous world through cultivation. However, after going down the mountain for an experience, when I faced Tian Ling, I said (I liked it), but now I like Baguio😐, don't you think it's disgusting?
I originally wanted to see a Zhu Xian that wasn't a tragedy, but it's a pity!
Senior sister Tian Ling'er has had enough fun. If you encounter Baguio, please get out of here! Later, Baguio and Lu Xueqi were taken in, and there was another story about Senior Sister Please Get Out. I don't know what the author was thinking. You either have to mess with the other heroines, or you accept them all. After you have had enough fun, you have to draw a clear line with your ex-girlfriend when you meet someone more beautiful. Then you continue to pull the Senior Sister to the bed and touch her hands. This shows that the author's three views are not correct. Then the author packages himself and says that Zhang Xiaofan in the novel is a free and unrestrained person!






















