I Took Away the Jade Emperor
About This Novel
The family was wiped out, and Lin Feng's head was crushed by the terrifying man who claimed to be possessed by the system. In the blink of an eye, he was sitting in the Lingxiao Palace. "Congratulations to Your Majesty, you have survived one hundred and three thousand kalpas safely, with immeasurable merit and merit, and entered the Avenue of Chaos." Under the hall, the immortals worshiped! Lin Feng was stunned: "I took away the Jade Emperor?" No matter, from today on, I am the Lord of the Three Realms. Those scum of the system, scum of reincarnation, scum of the Immortal Emperor, scum of the King of Soldiers, and scum of the miracle doctor who are trying to show off will be chopped up and fed to my dogs!
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Official(110)Scraped 5d ago
The main character is really annoying
Just a mortal who suddenly gained status and instantly became swollen. He randomly changed the book of life and death, and his displeasure just hit Platinum Star's neck. Is this a gangster brother? In the myth of Yao Ji, it was his sister who gave birth to Yang Jian and is now his wife, and people who died unnecessarily can be returned to the sun, etc. In short, virtue is not matched and they behave randomly. This is what happened in the first few pictures. I can't imagine it in the future.
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The ratings of this book are really going to turn into dogs... Stop it now. What stuff is written about, what is not easy to write about, and it has to be about the Jade Emperor. Do you think that you can do whatever you want when you become the Jade Emperor? The Jade Emperor is written so arrogantly. That day, the Taoist saint was playing with planets in the universe and taking a galactic bath before he was okay. By the way, he overplayed and sneezed and killed the Jade Emperor.
I can't complain anymore, a mortal can seize the Jade Emperor.
The male protagonist is so childish
The character of the protagonist is so childish. You would say that you are the master of the three realms and take the lead in disrupting the order of heaven. How can such a person take charge of the three realms and make the people miserable and miserable?
Let me give you a suggestion.
You can write about the prehistoric universe, but not the earth. After all, anyone who comes down from the sky is the strongest on earth. The most rubbish things in the sky are the most awesome people on the earth, so the earth should not get involved. You can write it as crossing several galaxies, fighting for territory or something, and launching a war in heaven. After all, the prehistoric world is so big. There cannot be one universe. There are also living creatures in other universes. Your view of the world needs to be bigger. Aim farther, the limited earth is useless.
Comprehensive discussion building
The comment area has been too chaotic these two days. Now there is a separate discussion level. You can discuss as you like, but there is one thing you can't bear. Don't curse people or even attack the author himself. There is no need. There is no need to come up and muddy those unleveled alts, there is no point. If you open the discussion area, I will clean up the comment area. If you post any abusive posts in the comment area in the future, I will ban you from sending plane tickets.
The Jade Emperor came down to earth and asked the gods to investigate a small organization in the mortal world. I laughed. You should ask Yang Jian to come down and show the door to the protagonist's parents.
I would like to ask the author, since you are writing about Honghuangliu. Then you should know that there are saints, so if you make the protagonist so arrogant, is it really good?
Without going into too much detail, let's just talk about the second one. The book of life and death is so easy to get. Then Houtu transformed into reincarnation. He is still a boss no matter what. You go to other people's territory to get their book of life and death. You are so awesome!
On failure
1. Modify the rules at will 2. Denying the cause and effect of reincarnation makes it difficult for Western bliss to be born. 3. Express his feelings of revenge in front of Nezha. Even if Nezha is stupid, he can infer that the Jade Emperor has been taken away from him through the Jade Emperor's abnormal behavior after the tribulation and his words when taking revenge. (This is the biggest failure) 4. The tribulations that the Jade Emperor endured were much less than the one hundred and three thousand tribulations (it can be seen that the number of tribulations was made up by the author). According to Journey to the West, the tribulations that the Jade Emperor endured should have been 1,750 kalpas, and each tribulation should have been 129,600 years. To add to the first point, modifying the rules of heaven will definitely lead to great changes in the three realms, because the laws of heaven and earth will be different. 5. Similar to the second point, combined with the fourth point, the Jade Emperor has lived for such a long time. Even if he is not too forgetful, the emotions he expresses should be very small. However, if the mood in the opening chapter changes to the point of changing the rules of heaven, people in the heaven will definitely notice that something is wrong, but the reaction of Taibai and others is not consistent. Suggestion: Read more introductions about the Jade Emperor, and combine the rational thinking that the Jade Emperor should have when considering the plot (for details, see the Bone King). The definition of a character like the Jade Emperor is not easy to be extreme. Advantages: novel, good starting point, overall large framework is good
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Official(110)Scraped 5d ago
The main character is really annoying
Just a mortal who suddenly gained status and instantly became swollen. He randomly changed the book of life and death, and his displeasure just hit Platinum Star's neck. Is this a gangster brother? In the myth of Yao Ji, it was his sister who gave birth to Yang Jian and is now his wife, and people who died unnecessarily can be returned to the sun, etc. In short, virtue is not matched and they behave randomly. This is what happened in the first few pictures. I can't imagine it in the future.
...
The ratings of this book are really going to turn into dogs... Stop it now. What stuff is written about, what is not easy to write about, and it has to be about the Jade Emperor. Do you think that you can do whatever you want when you become the Jade Emperor? The Jade Emperor is written so arrogantly. That day, the Taoist saint was playing with planets in the universe and taking a galactic bath before he was okay. By the way, he overplayed and sneezed and killed the Jade Emperor.
I can't complain anymore, a mortal can seize the Jade Emperor.
The male protagonist is so childish
The character of the protagonist is so childish. You would say that you are the master of the three realms and take the lead in disrupting the order of heaven. How can such a person take charge of the three realms and make the people miserable and miserable?
Let me give you a suggestion.
You can write about the prehistoric universe, but not the earth. After all, anyone who comes down from the sky is the strongest on earth. The most rubbish things in the sky are the most awesome people on the earth, so the earth should not get involved. You can write it as crossing several galaxies, fighting for territory or something, and launching a war in heaven. After all, the prehistoric world is so big. There cannot be one universe. There are also living creatures in other universes. Your view of the world needs to be bigger. Aim farther, the limited earth is useless.
Comprehensive discussion building
The comment area has been too chaotic these two days. Now there is a separate discussion level. You can discuss as you like, but there is one thing you can't bear. Don't curse people or even attack the author himself. There is no need. There is no need to come up and muddy those unleveled alts, there is no point. If you open the discussion area, I will clean up the comment area. If you post any abusive posts in the comment area in the future, I will ban you from sending plane tickets.
The Jade Emperor came down to earth and asked the gods to investigate a small organization in the mortal world. I laughed. You should ask Yang Jian to come down and show the door to the protagonist's parents.
I would like to ask the author, since you are writing about Honghuangliu. Then you should know that there are saints, so if you make the protagonist so arrogant, is it really good?
Without going into too much detail, let's just talk about the second one. The book of life and death is so easy to get. Then Houtu transformed into reincarnation. He is still a boss no matter what. You go to other people's territory to get their book of life and death. You are so awesome!
On failure
1. Modify the rules at will 2. Denying the cause and effect of reincarnation makes it difficult for Western bliss to be born. 3. Express his feelings of revenge in front of Nezha. Even if Nezha is stupid, he can infer that the Jade Emperor has been taken away from him through the Jade Emperor's abnormal behavior after the tribulation and his words when taking revenge. (This is the biggest failure) 4. The tribulations that the Jade Emperor endured were much less than the one hundred and three thousand tribulations (it can be seen that the number of tribulations was made up by the author). According to Journey to the West, the tribulations that the Jade Emperor endured should have been 1,750 kalpas, and each tribulation should have been 129,600 years. To add to the first point, modifying the rules of heaven will definitely lead to great changes in the three realms, because the laws of heaven and earth will be different. 5. Similar to the second point, combined with the fourth point, the Jade Emperor has lived for such a long time. Even if he is not too forgetful, the emotions he expresses should be very small. However, if the mood in the opening chapter changes to the point of changing the rules of heaven, people in the heaven will definitely notice that something is wrong, but the reaction of Taibai and others is not consistent. Suggestion: Read more introductions about the Jade Emperor, and combine the rational thinking that the Jade Emperor should have when considering the plot (for details, see the Bone King). The definition of a character like the Jade Emperor is not easy to be extreme. Advantages: novel, good starting point, overall large framework is good
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