Two Generations Follow Each Other

Recommendation index: 3 stars Category: Seedling Support Cultivation of immortality through science and technology, with system. The actual style is closer to game writing. The author intends to combine elements from multiple themes, which is very thoughtful and worthy of praise! However, even if you have a very grand idea, it is still recommended to use a gradual expansion method to present it. If you present all the elements too hastily, it will easily give readers a confusing feeling, which is not conducive to retaining people. After all, the mainstream of online articles is straightforward and easy to understand, and most readers have already formed this reading habit. What's more, as a system article, there is a need to get straight to the point and get to the topic as soon as possible. Therefore, if you can, skip the setting chapter before the main text. If you really feel it is indispensable, then find a way to incorporate it into the main text. After looking at the back, I can see that it is still well written, but I feel that the first few chapters for foreshadowing should be more concise. It might be better to get to the chapter that enters the game earlier. After all, not all readers are as patient as a single author who needs to write a book review. Tentatively scheduled for January