Primitive Man is Advancing

Come on, author, give us a voice for the original article, don't be rude, let's work hard together and persevere! 💪💪💪

I'm about to start reading. I haven't read the previous words and I want to keep them.

The author treats other tribes a bit sabi

Original novel written by the author. First of all, the original novel begins. The first thing is that they lived a life of drinking blood with Mao from the beginning. The days are like wild beasts. The second picture at the beginning should say that you came into this world. Created a flame for everyone. Then the deli-like life begins. Then start creating. High invention. Drill wood to make fire. Find something to exploit. Create better living conditions. Take advantage of all the resources available. For example, if there is a mine, I will use that mine. For example, if there is a river, I must make use of that river. Metaphorically speaking, if there is trouble in the tribe, I must use it for him. If I have the numbers, I will use them. If there are weeds, I will use the weeds. If there are valleys, I will use the valleys. If there are mushrooms, I will use the mushrooms. All the prerequisites must be established first, and then we can talk when our stomach is full. Develop slowly. Don't write so fast or scrawled, but be more careful and more careful. If I am more careful, then Zhang Jie will be more careful, and a good novel will be established. You must rely on more ideas, more thoughts, and more decisions to write each piece for him, and write it perfectly. A completely original novel should be based on survival. The beginning is survival. Including now in the 21st century, no matter how good your life is, you still have to survive. If you want to live a good life, you have to do it and make everything perfect for him. This is reality. Not everything needs to be perfect, but it needs to be done in a good way. There will be a lot of nonsense. If you like to hear it, just listen. If you don't like to hear it, I won't speak. Because my reading was not perfect, this novel did not meet my expectations. I felt a little disappointed with this novel. If I could continue this novel again and revise it again, I should be able to revise it even more perfectly. Nothing is perfect. Including the novels written by Jin Yong, they are all the same, but everyone hopes to do better. I hope the author's writing style can continue and improve. I like to read novels, and I like to read particularly perfect novels.