Douluo: Banish Immortals to the Dust, Kill Gods with Wine and Sword

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This book is based on Li Bai's "Li Ban Xian". It combines the wild, alcoholic, and sword-loving qualities of the Shixian with the Douluo worldview, and has the charm of its own cultural IP. The setting of twin martial souls in "Qinglian Sword + Wine" is novel, which not only fits Li Bai's status as "Qinglian layman", but also creates a strong dramatic conflict with the contrast of "six years of soul power stagnation" - a genius born with full soul power is mistaken for a "waste", and the twin martial souls awaken and explode in the later period. This "first suppressing and then rising" growth line is very attractive in itself. The story firmly captures the core joy of "counterattack and slap in the face": in the early stage, he was divorced (Ning Rongrong) and was despised, in the later stage, he swept the genius with a sword in the soul master competition, and only said "Let's do something" to his ex-fiancée, and the emotional tension of "torture Rongrong" The independent route of "not following a group" avoids the constraints of the original team, making the protagonist's growth more unrestrained and unrestrained as a "lone hero"; the "abuse of Tang San" setting satisfies some readers' expectations for an "anti-mainstream" character, with a stronger conflict. It does not break away from the basic settings of Douluo (martial arts, soul power, soul master competition, divine realm, etc.), But the rationality of the early "stagnation" is explained through the "particularity of twin martial souls" (the need for alcohol to assist breakthrough), so that the "fall of genius" is not Abrupt; in the later stage, it extends from the human battlefield to the challenge of the divine world, and the pattern gradually expands, which is in line with the upgrade logic of "from soul master to god" in the Douluo series. At the same time, the character's rebellious temperament is strengthened with the arrogance of "you must lower your eyebrows when you see me". At present, the role of the "wine" martial spirit is vague. If it is only used as an "auxiliary breakthrough", it will easily appear weak. It can be given more specific capabilities, such as: - The wine soul can absorb the "spiritual energy of heaven and earth" to make wine, and the quality of the wine corresponds to the age of the soul ring (for example, "Centennial Peach Blossom Brew" can condense a century-old soul ring); - In the drunken sword state, the soul power increases exponentially, but at the cost of temporarily losing control; - Alcohol can disintegrate spiritual soul skills (restraining Tang San's Purple Demon Eyes and Ning Rongrong's Seven Treasures Glazed Tower's amplification), making "defeating the enemy" more targeted If "the most beautiful woman" is only used as a "symbol of appearance", it will weaken the appeal of the emotional line. It is recommended that each heroine's encounter with the protagonist is related to the plot development: for example, when meeting a woman from Wuhun Palace, she will be involved in the dispute between Wuhun Palace and the two empires; when meeting a descendant of the Haotian Sect, the historical origin of the Clear Sky Hammer and the Green Lotus Sword will be revealed; the heroines' personalities should also complement the protagonist (such as a sassy female swordsman, a smart auxiliary soul master, a mysterious healing soul master), rather than a stereotyped "admirer". If the "abuse" of Ning Rongrong was limited to "regret for being ignored", it might seem deliberate. It can increase her struggles in the later period: for example, she realizes that Li Banxian's stagnation is due to the misjudgment of the Qibao Glazed Sect (such as the sect's lack of resources and the failure to discover the secret of the twin martial arts), which makes her regret not only "mistaking" but also being biased towards the sect. The "abuse" of Tang San also needs to avoid simple "combat power crushing", and can be designed into a conflict of ideas (for example, Tang San insists on "inheriting the divine throne", while Li Banxian believes that "my fate is determined by me and not by gods"), making the confrontation more in-depth. This story framework takes the innovative setting of "Li Bai + Douluo" as the core, with clear points of counterattack and outstanding character charm, and has the potential to become a hit novel. If the details of the martial arts abilities, the layering of emotional lines, and the depth of conflicts can be further polished to avoid falling into the "just for the sake of fun" routine, it is expected to become a fan work that is both interesting and memorable.

This novel is super poisonous. With such ratings and rankings, I really can't handle it. Looking at the first few chapters, there are several flaws. The first is that there has been no progress in 6 years. Is this to blame Ning Rongrong? Blame the Qibao Glazed Sect? Later, the hunting soul licked Zhu Zhuqing again, and she was obviously younger than the protagonist and called her sister. 1 Minute of hunting plus absorption of the second thousand-year soul ring, two thousand-year soul rings upgraded by 1 level, etc.

To be clear, I was attracted by the writing style and characters of this work. The author's writing style is really ranked in the top 0 among all the novels I have read in recent years. The image of the sword fairy with a clean and refined character also has a sense of returning to nature. All the chapters so far have the elements of a refreshing article, and some of the new soul beasts and new fairy terms given by the author are also very interesting to read. It can be called a new book with less than 100 chapters, but I directly chose to become a member to read the whole book. Next, let's talk about some minor inconsistencies in personal feelings. The first point is that the protagonist, as a time traveler, has memories of the second life and there is a slight sense of separation from the character image shown. The author paid attention to maintaining the image of a swordsman who is not stained by the mortal world, so that the protagonist has the arrogance of the ten thousand households in the past, and has experience beyond his peers. However, it is inconsistent with the cynical image when in close contact. For example, when meeting all members of the opposite sex, he is x Calling Sister The second point is that there is a stallion story in this work. Zhu Zhuqing and Ning Rongrong are young people who are understandably surprised when they first meet. Xue Qinghe is the lifestyle they yearn for. I prefer Ye Lingling written by the author, who brings dawn to those in need. But setting Dugu Yan as an M... Well, it's quite an interesting setting, but she seems to have a lover in the original work and Yu Tianheng didn't make any mistakes in it. So after reading Douluo, reading this book feels like a dissolute impression, which will greatly affect the perception. Moreover, the current social circles are almost all for the opposite sex, which seems a bit monotonous. The last point is the design of the plot. The author does write everything around the protagonist, but the plot connection is very monotonous. It is all a routine of fighting and killing - upgrading - adventure - upgrading. Maybe I hope to see more interesting descriptions of life? I think the author can use the plot development of the original work as a map and arrange the protagonist's trajectory like a thread, so that the protagonist can have many opportunities to interact with the original characters. Overall, I hope this novel can become a book that matches the excellent writing style. Also, I hope that this novel will not stop updating, but update more often! I wish the author good luck in literature! If the author finds my comments interesting, please contact me. I am your super fan!

Don't spend money on trolls. After spending so much money and inviting so many people to give random ratings, you still can't cover up the mess of answers and keep dominating the rankings. I originally read Dou Er Tongwen and saw that your ratings were quite high. I thought it was so good, but it turned out that it almost made me sick to death

Here is another person who seems to be plagiarizing. The content is exactly the same and the update time is very new. It was released all at once in the evening of 6.9. Is it the same person?

It's already 40 chapters, and it's still level 29. You can't write it if you don't level it up? Are you just level 49 after writing so many things and delaying catching up on other things? It doesn't matter what you want to say. Is it okay to raise the level first? If you don't have the strength, just pretend. What can you do on Guolibo? Embarrassing, what kind of physique and what kind of sword is written as a thief nb? When I saw that the soul power was more than 20, the previous two thousand-year soul rings were upgraded to one level. I felt something was wrong. I felt that I could still watch it, so I ignored it. I didn't expect to feed Shi directly after seeing it. I knew that Ma Hongjun was in trouble and still wasted the opportunity to assassinate others. Oh, I'm tired of talking too much.

Dear author, can you update it two or three times a day? One update a day is too little. Now with dozens of chapters, the update speed is too slow

The protagonist is born with full soul power but cannot make any progress in 6 years. It is a standard genius counterattack template. A time traveler cannot make any progress for 6 years. If you still lick your vagina and don't cancel your engagement with Rongrong, you still have to have someone come to break up with you? The first soul beast that has only exceeded a thousand years to hit a sonic boom? It took a stick of incense to absorb the first soul ring beyond a level? The second thousand-year soul ring is even more extreme. It only takes 1 minute to kill, absorb, and rush to save people? Will it be less than level 22 after two thousand-year soul rings? By now, the protagonist knows the first soul skill. Were you in trouble during the 6 years when he was trained as the heir of Sword Douluo? Looking back on getting the first soul ring, you, a level 10 soul warrior who knows nothing, can you stealthily attack and kill a thousand-year-old soul beast by yourself? Or the good quality one?

I just want to ask where the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Sect, whose home base is in Tiandou, has gone, and where has the attention of a sword-wielding Sword Douluo gone. The big force in Tiandou, coming so close to the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Sect, is as if it has been wiped out. How can the author fill in such a big bug...