Supreme Taixu

The delicate description of the appearance satisfies all my imagination of the heroine. The heroines I like very much: Yue Mingzhu, Concubine Yunxia, Xia Chaoge, Liuli, Gu Xiner; I suggest you change your idea of ​​main palace management and stop trying to manage other celebrities. Yan Zhiji, don't target Yue Mingzhu, I'm really worried when I read it😊; to be honest, I have read so many novels, but few novels have such tight logic and rigorous thinking. The protagonist is T0, and there are a bunch of T0.5 Enemies. It's not brainless. The article is not boring after reading it, and I also like alchemy and the treasure hunting ability of Xiao Qilin. The only drawback is that there are no seniors who can provide popular science and explain the unknown treasures (the Master of Six Paths in the Ancient Mirror of Zhaoxin is gone) ), and it's really sweet😶😯 It's so sweet that it's so sweet that it's so sweet that I can't stand it anymore. I like the heroine very much and there's a lot of sweets in it😶😣🤥; after reading the latest chapter, I switched to a novel that didn't describe her appearance, and I couldn't finish reading it for five minutes. The biggest drawback is that the updates are a bit slow😝😝👿. Five-star praise! 😶😶

In order to support Yuewenkan, I bought all the chapters at once😘😘😘

From God's perspective, it seems that it can only be spiritual sound. First of all, make it clear that Yunhuang must be a female character who has appeared in the article (the portrait of Yunhuang painted by Emperor Shura is more and more familiar to Jiang Fan as he looks at it, which proves this point), and not a new character that suddenly pops up later. So among the many female characters, which one has a friendship with Jiang Fan, is willing to protect Jiang Fan, and has unfathomable strength (never showing true cultivation)? There seems to be only spiritual sound. Let's list a few more details. 1. Lingyin picked the leaves of the Taixu ancient tree and put them in the wine to form law wine. This corresponds to the scene where the ancient giant descended later and Yunhuang gave Jiang Fan a bottle of law wine. 2. Old Man Tianji inquired whether Yunhuang was still alive and was informed by Lingyin. Lingyin asked Jiang Fan to give the letter to Old Man Tianji (divination + punishment for streaking). There are still some details that I can't remember clearly, so everyone is welcome to discuss them. To argue from the opposite side, if Yunhuang is not Lingyin, who can he be? Who else among the female characters who have appeared in the book can play the role of the Ancient Sage of Yunhuang? Hard to find

The work is very good. I never get tired of watching it. I like it very much👍 I just feel that the plot progress is too slow, and the introduction of the spiritual weapons is not very comprehensive. Jiang Fan also had many opportunities and did not pick up the alchemy furnace. For example, the alchemy furnace in Yuanying Cave has been given to the five-star soul master. If you can't go back to pick it up, the protagonist's strength will definitely improve by leaps and bounds. There are also many flaws😜 Everything else feels very good. I hope the author can speed up the update. The few chapters updated every day are not satisfying. The ten chapters updated today were gone in a while. I feel itchy when I see it🤔😝😝

Author: I feel like you don't even have basic writing character. It's my fault that I still support you. You are not in good condition every day and you can't eat this food. You don't need to eat this food. Let's see how many chapters you have updated in the past month? You have always deceived us, the readers, of our basic trust in you. Your behavior is quite extremely bad, do you know that? The same goes for the platform. Updating a chapter also allows you to update. Don't let down so many of our readers.

As a reader who loves this work very much, my most affectionate comments Before the tribulation 1) The characters are vividly drawn, and it feels like an animation even though it is a novel. It reminds me of when Xu Qingyang looked at the sadness of his friend's blue flame and silver needle having no successor! Or was it because of Jiang Fan's talent that Yue Mingzhu changed from repaying a favor to a proud and willful person who could not be forced to be included? Even the second elder of the Giant Sect, Brahma Xingkong, who had only appeared a few times, took out the formation flag and asked for help in the Holy Land of the Giant Sect. The reaction descriptions of each character were impressive, and even the characters' expressions and faces appeared naturally in their minds. 2) The rhythm is tight and the time is coherent. From the characters who went through the disciple selection process of Qingyun Sect and the selection of disciples, the story line of Gong Caiyi is interspersed with the outbreak of the beast tide, the human-monster war, etc. With the advancement of the main story and the development of branch plots, the overall tight rhythm not only improves the reader's enjoyment but also enriches the world view. 3) The overall logic is clear. From the sudden voice of the Taixu Ancient Clan to the first encounter with the Iron-Blooded Scripture and the Infinite Ring, to the interactions between the characters and Jiang Fan, the motivations behind them, and even the inheritance of spiritual treasures, it surprises the readers and adds side stories and world views. 4) The fighting scenes are full of action. I still remember when Jiang Fan kicked the Supreme Emperor Tianjiao, he shouted: Phoenix Blood Treasure Body, open! His whole body turned fiery red and he rushed forward at a faster speed. When the leader of Black Lotus took out a black knife, Jiang Fan lowered his head to get out of the way and stabbed his armpit with the sword. He opened his legs and was caught by Black Lotus, but Jiang Fan came up with a trick and pinched off his legs. Finally, he retracted the knife and unfolded his palm skills, but Jiang Fan broke his chest and back. Is it the process of relief before death? The response to the enemy is well arranged throughout the whole process, the various skills are clearly set, and the punches during the fight are extremely exciting. After overcoming the tribulation 1) The character portrayal is weak. From the master of Tianji Pavilion to the various harems, to the first meeting with the White Horse Temple Master or the Dharma Seal when traveling to Taicang Continent, to the branch line of the Temple of All Calamities, or the Zoroastrian Cult, even the newly included Zhenyan Master has become an expressionless and soulless character behind the text. 2) The rhythm is confusing and the time is unclear. This can be seen from the fact that it has been three months since the ancient giants were about to come to Middle-earth. It took more than a week to write from Taicang Dazhou to the escape to the mainland, but it actually took only half a day. The plot arrangement has chaotic rhythm and blank content, which makes people feel like they are chewing meat. 3) Various settings have been abandoned or even overthrown. From the inheritance of the early Immortal Doctor to abandonment, various fingering techniques, palm techniques, leg techniques, sounds and exercises, etc. Have all been replaced by Tianji Kung Fu. Even the settings of spiritual weapons have been changed. For example, if the transfer lock transferer cannot be completed Withstanding a blow, the refiner will also perish. His body and golden body are stronger than those of Fa Xiu Yuanying, but there is no description at all on Taicang Continent. All he knows is that he was attacked from behind by the leader of the Dayin Sect and injured, with his internal organs exposed. Various ridiculous overturns make the reader unable to see the way he came, let alone where he is going. 4) The fighting scenes are boring, but compared to the punches to the flesh and the lightning-like reaction to the enemy before crossing the tribulation, it is still a lifelike fighting style! The Empress Nascent Soul only knew that every character who appeared was capable of destroying the world, but Jiang Fan only used a few moves against him, such as the Soul Prison Lock, the Soul Thorn, and the Brahma Saint's True Spirit Palace. It turned into simply throwing away skills and leaving the opponent shocked. No matter how many chapters he described, he still left the reader with boring text. Summary: Yuanyingqian is a masterpiece that exceeds full marks and deserves the 5-star praise! The only thing Nascent Soul Empress can say that is unpleasant is the readers who were addicted to Qing Le in the early stage. They ruined this work, which is not even as good as a free novel! Not worthy of rating. If I had to rate it, I would rate it as a negative! So the overall rating is 5-1=2.5, So I retract the previous 5-star book review and repost it! Also a reminder for readers who haven't jumped into the trap yet! If the author happened to see it, it would also be the most affectionate suggestion from the readers.

1. The author, Heaven Overlord, is dishonest. It was agreed to update three or more times, but when the time comes, the update is not given or the update is owed, citing reasons such as "poor condition, extremely poor condition, poor mental state". Up to now, hundreds of updates are owed, and no reason is given, and no update is made. It caused dissatisfaction among many readers, including me, and they cursed in the comment area. 2. Now Heaven Overlord is updated in the middle of the night for many days in a row, and there is only one update. It is purely to mess with readers. When it comes to character issues, my judgment is that the character is extremely poor. 3. The author of Cangtian Overlord seems to have never finished his previous works, and lacks basic respect for readers.

After reading the review of the latest chapter, I can see that the author has worked very hard. The previous book, Wuchen God King, was also well written, but it seemed that it was finished before it was finished (the author said that the writing was very boring and boring). However, the author of this book stated that he was very excited to write and could continue writing and complete the book. This is enough. He is very responsible to the readers and also guarantees quality. Another point is not to eat books (forgot settings and so on). The literary drama mentioned by the author, the Lingshu section, has moved many readers. Come on, author, keep writing according to your own ideas and finish the book. I like this book. There are still a group of old readers who will call you an old thief. I am also an old reader. I will update soon.

To give a general review, I have read Chapter 1,200 from the first chapter. Generally speaking, it is still very good. The appearance, language, and personality of the characters are all relatively good. But after all, it is a refreshing novel. This is actually very good. It may be a bit boring in the early stage. After reaching Okura, the plot slowly unfolds. Many people have secrets. For now, I am most looking forward to Xia Chaoge's life experience. Then let me talk about the protagonist Jiang Fan. In fact, I am very curious about what kind of parents the protagonist is. In the first few chapters of the article, it is only mentioned that his father is only a two-star soul master, but his mother is never mentioned? Where did the ancient tree seeds come from? So this foreshadowing was buried very early, and maybe some people have forgotten it, but I personally feel that my father is a clone, and my mother is more of an ancient sage, so it depends on how the author writes in the follow-up. I am looking forward to this part. Then, at present, I feel very good about the characterization of the protagonist Jiang Fan. He has clear rewards and punishments, is brave and resourceful, knows right from wrong, and knows how to repay kindness. These images give me a new impression of this Shuangwen novel. Compared with some Shuangwen novels, this This is a breath of fresh air. Finally, I want to ask the author, when will the main wife be allowed to eat meat? It has been more than a thousand chapters and she has not yet eaten it. Two of the concubines have eaten it. The other concubines have more kisses than the main wife. I am impatient to wait (the above is just my personal opinion, please do not comment)

So far, the plot seems to be very good. The protagonist is surrounded by dangers all the way, collecting a harem, and filling pitfalls. If you tell me not to update, I will update it. If you tell me, I will update it. I hope the author will try his best. I didn't enjoy it very much. Please give me more updates.