Green Hills

After it was put on the shelves, I started writing the same thing as Tuo💩, with water and poison spots everywhere. I feel like I came just to disgust readers. I read 300 pictures and didn't even understand what I wanted to write. It's a hodgepodge of everything and I can't write anything well. It's just disgusting.

Could it be that bad money drives out good money, junk novels are rampant, and good novels are pushed to the bottom of the queue?

You can look at the pictures. I have fully ordered this book. I should be more or less qualified to speak. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I saw chapter 220, but I really can't stand it anymore. The early writing was very good, tense and exciting. But starting from chapter 150, it changed a bit, and the poisonous points increased, such as developing cement and making explosives. Then the plot becomes a daily novel, which is very different from the previous tone. It also plays the old plot of deliberately suppressing the protagonist and pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. It's understandable that I want to change my mind to make TV series, but this one is a bit too ugly to watch, the plot is sparse, and it's depressing to read. There's no passion, no tension, and no fun at all. There are also some garbage plots about Wenzhaogong and some plots that are deliberately pretentious. I really can't stand it anymore. I've also ordered all of The Art of Night's Naming by Elbow. To be honest, it's not even one-tenth as good as The Art of Naming Night. At least the first 700 chapters of The Art of Night's Naming can still stand out among the others. However, I can only read 220 chapters of this book because of Elbow's sake. I really can't stand it anymore. In a word, not recommended.

What are the first three chapters about? Relatives are trash The doctor is rubbish The hospital is a dump The court is a dump What kind of garbage law are you writing? Legislation, law enforcement, judiciary and law-abiding are all rubbish. The underworld that hurts people at will has a sense of loyalty. A bunch of witty plots.

I have read a lot of novels, but I have never seen such a work that is so close to my heart. Every novel has an unexpected turn, and every step reveals the character's own life. Every detail is so real, but without losing the heartiness of the plot. It is very vivid and full, but also very smooth, like a precise mechanical structure. Every picture is truly reflected in my mind, and every line and ending of every poem makes people feel soul-stirring. I hope this novel will get better and better, and that more readers can appreciate the charm of this world.

First of all, the character design collapsed. What was established at the beginning is that Sofa is decisive, will avenge his enemies, is calm and careful, and he really frowns after watching Later, when someone stabbed you in the back, he said lightly, "I forgive you, you owe me a life." He didn't mention it later, and just let it go. Faced with the person who almost killed you, you were indifferent, right? Isn't it mean to become indecisive? He almost killed himself, and there was no price to pay for it. Where was his fierceness in the beginning in order to retaliate against others? The author set a flag in front of him, saying that he wanted to write a new book with his own thinking, but the result was that he was resting on his laurels like the previous books. The first ones were logical and tight, but the later ones were just brainless. The main reason is that the gap is too big. Knife for the sake of the knife, torture for the sake of torture, and pretense for the sake of pretense. As for the princess and the prince, I am really convinced by the descriptions of these two characters. If you don't have that ratio, don't set up flags blindly. Are these two people really that stupid? In this context, Prince Jing's children don't even have this kind of education. They should know something about it. They are just like that idiot. They give you money and treat you as their best friend. It's so funny. In the end, it turns into the best friendship. I don't know where this friendship came from. Take the issue as an example, what does the protagonist say? How about not being a chess piece or a chess player, jumping out of the chess game, and then being led by others from beginning to end, and taking the wrong side of the sword? There are so many information gaps, and you don't take the initiative, just waiting for others to make the first move, just like a big boss. As a big boss, you take the initiative to get to the front and risk your life with others. You have so many information gaps, and the protagonist's character is very smart. You have to face others face to face, and you have to fight with a knife and a gun. Take the relief to the victims as an example. In that general context, handing over your life to the victims and letting them decide, it seems really disgusting to me. Why don't you just stand on the city wall and delay? If you have to jump down and hand your life to them, it's like eating shit. Can't civil servants go down? Is it none of your business? You live first and then talk about it, but in the end you gave up your life for someone else's favor, and your name is gone, so what's the point of talking about it later? Is this the halo of the protagonist? My teeth hurt when I read it, and it turned into a kind of wisdom again. Author, can you read it yourself? Do you think it's smooth? The first part was so good, but the second part fell apart. The more you look at it, the more it feels wrong, and the more you look at it, the more disgusting it becomes.

Poisonous points, 1. The crown prince pretends to be stupid and sweet. How can there be a child of such aristocratic family in the general background? 2 Pig's Knuckle's character changes constantly. His IQ is obviously not online before and after rebirth, and his decisiveness in killing turns into indecisiveness. 3. Before Chapter 85, he jumped left and right in order to improve his strength. Then, and then, and then, after 85, the training system is gone. How many chapters of Xuanyuan World will not be published once, and the sword practice will no longer be available? At the beginning, Xuanyuan also said that he should be able to master all the weapons of the 18th class when necessary, and he would know how to change his moves when facing the enemy. No more, no more, no more. It's such a weird setting that more than 100 of them have not appeared yet. 4. As for Black Cat and Dark Cloud, after more than 100 years, there are dozens of chapters that haven't improved their strength, and neither sword species nor swallowing dragon have been written. . . Then the whole book changed its style, and the case began to be solved, the case was solved, the case was solved. Shredded. This book definitely sucks.

The goal of saving the white carp is the carrot, the protagonist is the donkey, and the audience is the donkey cart; the carrots swing one after another, leading the donkey to drag the donkey cart forward, but don't try to get it easily. Other donkeys run in a straight line toward the goal, but our donkey makes a circular motion around the center point. Towards the end of each big chapter, the protagonist is prepared for a big fight, but in the end, he becomes a dog to this one and a son to that one. He is cheating one chapter after another, and he has completed one dungeon after another. Along the way, the plot is driven by unreasonable love and unreasonable hatred. The plot distribution of the entire plot is just like this paragraph of mine, messy, fragmented and disordered. After being disappointed so many times, I didn't want to eat carrots anymore and I jumped out of the car😔😔😔

After seeing Chapter 194, I regretted ordering all of it. I have always liked Elbow's books, from "League of Legends" and "Big Player" to "The First Sequence" and "The Naming Technique of the Night". When I was in the army, I would watch "The King" on MP3 in the middle of the night in bed, and I would even laugh out loud, and cry because of Chen Wudi's story. Even though "The Naming of the Night" was greatly revised, I turned around and watched it again, for fear of missing a complete story. I have been looking forward to a new book for the past two years, but I have been disappointed. The story at the beginning of "Qingshan" is really good, and the characterization is also very vivid. Each link is intertwined, making people want to keep reading. However, in the middle of the story, the things that each volume wants to express conflict with each other, and it feels very fragmented. Maybe it's because my education is too low and I can't read Jiuzi's books. After struggling for a long time, I decided to bear the pain and give up the book. It seemed like yesterday when I remembered the time I laughed out loud while hiding in bed watching "The King". "Green Mountain", it's okay if you don't read it

First of all, I would like to say that I really like all the previous books. Every copy is fully ordered. So this ninja didn't start killing until now. Before writing the review, let me introduce myself: As an old bookworm who has been under the banyan tree, with more than 40 years of life experience, and was a contracted writer for a certain point a few years ago, I consider myself not a young reader. Unless I can't help it, I basically won't rant! Starting from the second half of the third chapter (around chapter 1,780), the writing is really disgusting! It's not that the writing is bad, the writing style is okay, but the writing is disgusting. Everyone recognizes your writing style and talent, this is not your reason to disgust everyone! It's okay if you want to reward yourself. You open a trumpet account. You should know how valuable the name Zhuzi is! It's so high that I won't doubt the quality at all. I'll just buy a hundred chapters. It's not that I can't afford the money, but I spent the money and I recognize you, but you don't treat me as a human being at all! I can accept tragedy and abuse, and I also like novels that are both exciting and tearful. But I don't accept this kind of disgusting torture purely for the sake of torture! Life is very hard. If I want to read serious literature, I can go to Yu Hua. I spent money and time. I just hope that my ordinary and somewhat depressing life can feel a little happy in your book. What did you give me as a result? What's wrong, you are Lu Xiaoshu, do you need negative emotions? I feel that many of today's leading writers, as soon as they gain fame and fortune, begin to blindly pursue the things they pursue in books, regardless of the readers' feelings. And no matter what these big guys write, there are always some readers who want to show that they are different, such as leaving if they don't like it, younger readers, etc. It seems that as long as everyone does not accept it, it means that they are being arrogant and the truth is in the hands of a few people. But have these people with high IQs ever thought about the fact that this is an internet article? ! ! Everyone is here to have fun, not to study the good, evil, beauty and ugliness of human nature! ! ! I will continue to read the following chapters, and I will order them all as usual, because I am a bit pretentious and like to have a beginning and an end as much as possible. But if the follow-up continues as usual, then my trust in Elbow will only end with this book. It was all due to the little tree and millet that I had fallen in love with at the beginning.