Douluo: Reborn Qin Ming, Joins Wuhun Palace at the Beginning

[About setting issues] The setting of this book is mainly based on the anime of fighting one versus two. Including but not limited to basic settings, battle scenes, etc. Examples of basic settings: 1. Tang Hao said when Tang San absorbed the Blue Silver Emperor's soul bone that there is no soul power level limit for absorbing soul bones. 2. The anime has a separate setting for Ling Yuan Douluo that is not in the original work. 3. Withstood the siege of four titled Level 95 Titled Douluo Yu Yuanzhen... Examples of battle scenes: When Sword Douluo uses his own soul skills, he reads poetry while fighting, and the special effects are gorgeous. If there are serious bugs in the anime, or the settings are not detailed, I will read the original novel and try to make the logic consistent. In addition, there are several serious bugs that I will definitely not write about. 1. I definitely won't use the setting in the original novel where the God-King can be injured by hidden weapons! 2. The rules in the Killing City have been modified to allow each battle to start with only ten people. (The rules of the original book are that each person needs to kill ten people to advance to a game, and the opponents he ranks are in the same situation as him. If we follow this rule, even if everyone in Douluo Continent is killed, there won't be enough people to fight a hundred games) 3. The issue of Emperor Tian's cultivation level. The setting mentioned in Dou San that Emperor Tian's cultivation level will increase by hundreds of thousands in 10,000 years, I will definitely not use this here. (This is in serious conflict with the situation of the Snow Emperor in Dou Er. When Huo Gua went to the Far North for the second time, the Ice Emperor said that the Snow Emperor and I had lived here for hundreds of thousands of years. According to Dou San's settings, it doesn't make sense here at all) I also suffered this loss in my last book. After clearly writing out the cultivation levels of Emperor Tian according to the setting of Dou San, I lost half of my reading that day... 4. It's still a numerical problem. Wuhun City's 60-meter-high and 30-meter-wide city wall, and the entire Star Dou Forest are less than 5,000 square kilometers. The fastest Contra can travel the entire Douluo Continent in just two days... This kind of numerical value that seems problematic at first glance should definitely not be used... ------------------------ [I read basically every book review] [About the controversial points in the plot of this book] As long as the poisonous points and typos raised by the adoptive fathers do not affect the subsequent plot and I feel that there are problems, then I will basically complete the modifications on the same day. Either revise the text, or simply delete that section of the story. There are two main points of controversy in this book so far, and I will reply to them here. (The first is the problem of the storage soul guide, and the second is the problem of Flanders' cultivation.) Regarding the storage soul guide. There are only two storage soul guides explicitly mentioned in the original work, the Twenty-Four Bridges on the Moonlit Night and the Ruyi Hundred Treasure Bag. I can only find four relevant plots so far. 1. When Yu Xiaogang presented it to Tang San, he mentioned that his belt soul guide was found in the ruins. The method of making and storing soul guides on the mainland has been lost. 2. Dugu Bo presented Tang San with a wishful treasure bag and told him that the wishful treasure bag was very precious and could store living things. After giving it to Tang San, he himself was gone, so the Nine Section Jade was also given to Tang San. 3. When Shrek went to Wuhun City to participate in the Soul Master Competition, Tang San said something. There is actually a place to buy and sell storage soul tools here. 4. Bo Saixi of Poseidon Island flipped his wrist, took out the god-given soul ring and gave it to Ning Rongrong... It can be seen from this that the storage soul guide in Dou Yi is very precious, not everyone has it, and it is impossible to even sell it in any city. That kind of plot is basically a second guess from other fan fiction, so I won't use it here. ------------------------ Another issue is about the soul power cultivation of Flanders and his team. There are bugs in both the anime and the original work, and there is no way to fix them. The plot in the anime is that Zhao Wuji offended the Wuhun Palace, and was later hunted down by sixteen bishops with at least level 60 cultivation. After successfully breaking through, he and Flender established Shrek Academy. There's no way it's going to work here. Zao Wou-Ki had such strength 20 years ago. He was a genius no matter what. As a result, such a person will only have level 72 soul power 20 years later? Then it took seven or eight years to go directly to Contra? Then there is the issue of Flanders' cultivation. In the original work, Flanders was level 78 when he appeared, and then reached level 83 at a rate of one level per year after completing the Shrek Seven Monsters experience. In the final battle, he reached level 88... Therefore, I really can't determine their cultivation level as Soul Emperor here. After all, there are still 20 years until the original plot begins. It's impossible for them to upgrade slower than in the original book. It's unreasonable to upgrade to a level in two years... ------------------------ Then there is the secret method of indestructibility that I mentioned in Chapters 17 and 18. This secret method is not found in the original work and is a setting in the anime. I made another creation here to complete the setting of this secret method again. (I originally thought there would be some controversy here, but no one mentioned it at all)

A very good Douluo fanfic, the latest chapter is Chapter 35. Overall, I didn't find any poisonous points, and the plot design is also very reasonable. It's one of the few high-quality Douluo fandoms. I hope the subsequent selection of the heroine will not involve any disgusting manipulations. There is no female character in this book. Overall, I feel very good. I hope the author will keep up the good work! However, I feel that Wuhundian has invested too much in the protagonist, and it feels unreal. It feels like the resources have come too easily, but it can still be done. It depends on how the author writes in the future! I also hope that the author can mention more about the bishop who helped the protagonist hunt the 3500-year-old soul beast in the future. Many Douluo fans talk about how kind and righteous the protagonist is, but when they mention the people who helped him in the first place, they all mention it in one sentence. I hope that the protagonist Qin Ming can give some practical help to the people who helped him in the first place, and spend a little space to talk about the protagonist's repayment to those who helped him!

So far, I have finished deleting all the plots in Chapter 15, Chapter 16, Chapter 20, and Chapter 21 about Bibi Dong obtaining the Killing God Domain today. Officially changed to the city of killing that Bibi Dong went to after giving birth to Qian Renxue. The specific timeline of the original work is. 25 Was raped for the first time, 26 gave birth to a child, 27 went to the city of killing, 29 left the city of killing, and 36 became a titled Douluo. For specific reference, please refer to the original chapter: Chapter 121, Pope Bibi Dong (Part 1) Quote: She looks like she is only about 30, but in fact, she is one year older than the master and is already in her fifties. Chapter 336: Finale, the last condition Quote: This is my daughter, the daughter I gave birth to, shortly after that time, when I found out I was pregnant. If you still see any omissions, you are welcome to correct them. I will make corrections after reading the original work and confirming that it is correct.

[The need for a fire-attribute soul saint to melt ten thousand-year-old whale glue is a secondary assumption in other fans, and it is not explicitly mentioned in the book] The chapter where whale glue appears in the original work is Chapter 58: Speed of Life and Death (Part 1). In this chapter, Huo Yuhao obtains ten thousand years of whale glue. This chapter does not mention melting requirements. Then comes Chapter 60, it's okay, you are still a virgin (Part 1) The original text was that Ma Xiaotao felt that this piece of whale glue was much harder than she had ever seen before. It took continuous stimulation of the Phoenix Flame to show signs of melting. The melting effect did not occur immediately. There is actually no clear requirement for melting here. Of course, the second fan creation is also based on this point. [Here is a popular science on the relationship between flame temperature and color] When the material in the flame is burned at high temperature, it will reflect electromagnetic waves of various wavelengths. Visible light of different wavelengths appears to be different colors to our naked eyes. The higher the temperature of the flame, the shorter the wavelength of visible light and the bluer it becomes. The temperature of red flame is generally between 800~1000℃. [I am referring to the settings in the anime] Ma Xiaotao's flame is just ordinary red. By default, its temperature is similar to that of other flames, all between 800~1000℃. It's just that compared to ordinary flames, Ma Xiaotao's flames may have some other characteristics, such as erosion attributes, explosion attributes, etc., But the temperature of the flames should be about the same... It can be seen that the melting point of whale glue is within 1000 degrees, and it can also be melted by ordinary flames.

The author's white-eyed wolf is really disgusting. If the protagonist has the strength, he must be destroyed. This crazy woman's mind is to destroy the world, and then run away with his Bai Yueguang. Hurry and update!

Too 6, you can win by marrying Dugu directly. Three hundred thousand year soul bones, plus a hundred thousand year soul ring. My own soul and bones are still tens of thousands of years old, but giving someone else a hundred thousand years is poor and generous. The pressure levels are not that high either.

Didn't that crazy woman destroy the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect just for that Bai Yueguang? Because the Landian Tyrannosaurus family drove Yu Xiaogang out of the sect and hurt his Bai Yueguang. Otherwise, why would the Immortal Haotian Sect destroy two Tyrannosaurus rexes? The most important thing is that the crazy woman wants to destroy the Soul Palace and the world.

To be honest, the overall outline is good. Everything I wrote above feels well-founded and very consistent with the plot. I feel that the author looks at how Wuhun Temple treats him and then considers the fairy grass. It's not good to say this. Otherwise, Bibi Dong betrays him and stabs him in the back. That would be bad. Then it feels very good to slowly follow this rhythm!

The plot of Bibi Dong was not very well written, but after the comments were raised, the author immediately cut off all Bibi Dong's scenes, which is still very good.

Are you ready to clear up that white-eyed wolf? To be honest, as far as the women in Love are concerned, none of them are good. Although I haven't read it, the chapters are too few and boring. If there are three women from the Shit Guest and the three brainless ones from Wuhun Palace, it will be the end of the book.