Turn on Sharingan, I Play Ninjutsu in Douluo

I feel that the author was very conflicted when writing. He wanted to hug Tang San's thigh and become a god, but he didn't want to praise Tang San. When he encountered some annoying things about Shrek, he acted very aloof and acted like I am not on your side. Isn't this sick? Finally, the protagonist loves to express himself. He uses whatever tricks he has. He doesn't show weakness or hide his clumsiness. I just can't figure out where the protagonist's confidence lies! There is no background at all. He is like this in a semi-slave society where the weak eat the strong. Is there anything wrong with his brain?

It was so cool to cuckold Tang San, hahaha, I really recommend it. Followed from 🍅

Many people criticized this book in the comment area, and I don't understand. Who is the heroine, and what is there to worry about whether to join the Wuhun Palace or not. In addition to joining the protagonist group, Douluo fan fiction is about joining the Wuhun Palace. That book is not on these two routes. It is said to be similar to another book. I don't think there is a big difference between the two. Just from the perspective of writing, it seems much more mature. Another point is that I came here from Tomato. I wouldn't download this software just to read this book. There are not many fanfics that I can read.

The author is the most disgusting, right? The protagonist was systematically tortured like this, and he was the protagonist who had read the original work. Is the author's IQ online? He knew the future direction of Douluo Continent, but he didn't practice well to save Xiao Wu. He wanted to take Ning Rongrong to travel to the mainland for 5 years, but he was beaten to death when he came back to save Xiao Wu? It's so outrageous that his mother opened the door to outrageous things. It's so outrageous. Also, what happened to the ending? I've been waiting for you for half a year and you gave me this kind of eye drops? Disgusting people? If you are so perfunctory, you might as well just stop updating and abandon the book.

It's a bit frustrating to watch, plus it's a little over the top. It's just... What you said makes sense, but I just can't agree with it. First, there is a cheat. It looks really cool at first glance. I followed the plot and realized something was wrong. I flirted with Ning Rongrong and then told Oscar to quit! Although I don't really like this character, you flirted with it! It's also interesting that you can give it away, even though it's not guaranteed. Second, the master slaps his nose in his face and targets him everywhere. If you don't mess with him, if you endure it, he will be slapped in the face from behind. Flanders also deflects, but if you endure it, you still go to work! Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles? Third, based on the second point, your purpose of forbearance is to join the protagonist's gang to gain benefits? You must be lonely! With the modern style, how come the CPU doesn't know how to do it? You also wrote that Sharingan has genjutsu. Is it difficult to add some spiritual suggestion? Just to highlight the protagonist's desperate efforts? Abuse the protagonist (abuse the reader, the protagonist does not feel he has any grievances) When I saw the fight with Huang Dou, when the protagonist had a quarrel with the master, I thought the author would be happy, even if it was a little counterattack, Flanders came out and said: Xiao Du, will you wait? Just endure it! At this time you have already fallen out with Tang San! Ah, what did you write...! Then when the plot got boring, I actually already guessed that the protagonist would cut off his beard... Which was disgusting. I don't deny that this is really cool, but... It won't bring harm to the family, nor will it bring harm to the wife and daughter! If you retaliate, do it head-on! Xiao Wu is very silly, so everyone says she has double standards! She is a love brain! Isn't it normal to just help relatives but not take care of children? The author Xingdou also described that people only have Tang San in their eyes. Don't they worry about their sweetheart caring about you, a passerby? Aren't men and women in love irrational? Co-writing itself is a plan designed by you. If you don't succeed in gaining other people's attention, you will push them into the abyss? If the matter itself was not of your own design, then there is nothing wrong with doing so. It is acceptable for people to retaliate and come back for revenge. I also understand that the author wants to describe a Douluo more realistically, which is tnnd. Let me read the cool article! It's still a cool piece of fan fiction! I'm not here to be pissed off! Not here to see what you do.

It looks okay, but there are some places that affect the perception. First, the protagonist puts the cart before the horse too much. His strength comes entirely from signing in. There is no need to practice at all, but to get more points, so just sign in everywhere in the world. However, the protagonist has been thinking about developing ninjutsu on his own. Points are everything. A few key ninjutsus are enough. Why do you need so many ninjutsu? The protagonist even changed to Water Escape for no reason. This kind of ninjutsu costs mana in the early stage, but can't beat the master in the later stage. Moreover, you are against Tang San, who has a title called Poseidon. Are you sure that the 20,000 or 20,000 points you spent on Water Escape are a good deal? Kaleidoscope only has 60,000 points! Secondly, when the protagonist is a weakling, there is really no need to provoke Tang San. Tang San himself is fine, but there is Tang Hao following him. With Tang Hao's character, the protagonist uses the Wind Release Shuriken to kill Tang San. Regardless of whether he is beaten to death, the protagonist should at least be maimed by Tang Hao, or even directly killed. It is completely possible, but this book does not mention it at all. This is purely a bug. Just forget it if you say you have divine power. If you don't even have divine power, how can you compete with Tang Sanyu Xiaogang every day? Although Tang Sanyu Xiaogang is indeed not a good person, in the beginning there was really no life-or-death conflict with the protagonist, it was just a battle of words. You have your own broad road, but if you don't walk on it, you have to squeeze into a single-plank bridge with the villain. You, a person with no background in Douluo Continent, want to become stronger and protect Xiao Wu. The way you protect him is to participate in the soul master competition, expose various abilities to attract covetousness, and then provoke the original protagonist with a strong background? Isn't it nice to see Kaguya's ability by signing in behind his back? In this Soul Master Competition, if you sit in the audience and sign autographs, isn't that enough for you to become stronger? Thirdly, the protagonist doesn't know how to spend points at all. He has too few mana, and his physical skills are half-baked, and the points he adds are very unbalanced. However, he keeps adding blood chakra eyes and learns various ninjutsu. It wouldn't be much better if you saved up points early to hold back the immortal body. Now you can use thunder escape, fire escape, water escape, wind escape, and a bunch of fancy skills. However, the endurance is not as strong as that of Tang Sanqiang, the original protagonist of Xuan Tian Gong. He started panting after using two small ultimate moves and said he was Sasuke. The result is that the mana is comparable to Kakashi, which is simply a shame for Douluo fan protagonists.

After reading dozens of chapters, this fanfic gave me the impression that I have never seen such a mean protagonist Other fanfics either directly oppose Tang San and don't follow the group! Either choose Tang San's camp! The third type is the worst, and the group appears to be peaceful, but secretly plots against Tang San! And this protagonist, while following the Shrek Seven Monsters, provokes and refutes Yu Xiaogang and Tang San every day! If you don't express your feelings and show off, will you die if you deepen your hatred? You provoke people again and again, and they are so angry that they want to kill you! Why are you still in the academy? [Emot=default,23/]Since you look down on Yu Xiaogang as a waste, why do you still care about him? Does the dragon soaring in the sky care what the ants on the ground think? Are you still talking nonsense with others and exercising according to their instructions? [Emot=default,23/]Isn't it better to just leave? Going back and forth on the edge of death! [Emot=default,23/] Tang Hao, come out and beat this idiot protagonist to death

You should not write about the system in this book. The system is so slow to upgrade, and you don't have a few levels of soul power that you have cultivated by yourself. You have eaten grass and ice and fire to practice your body, and you still show that you have poor qualifications. I don't know what you are thinking. You can't practice a single martial soul faster in the early stage, and you can't slow down after level 70. There are also system soul rings whose years can't be increased. Why keep getting a white first-level soul ring? There are also Shan Magatama and Blue Silver Emperor Martial Spirit who signed up for Tang San, and Bibi Dong Qian Renxue signed up for TM. Why don't you give 10,000 points to someone if you don't have any good stuff? Don't you have a hundred thousand year soul bone? If that doesn't work, then an 80,000-year-old head soul bone will do, right? Tang Hao can also take away the soul bones from the Soul Master Competition. I don't understand what you are thinking. There is no big gift package for system upgrades. The cheating system is really awesome. Also, during the Thunder Tempering Body Tempering, a system's healing ability was opened. For 5,000 points in one hour, you can heal your TM injury and leave. You won't maximize your profits in an hour and just risk your life to temper the body, right? In the early stage, you were like a weakling and you still showed such powerful soul skills. If others don't care about you, who should they care about? Since you hate him, Yu Xiaogang, why don't you beat him when he goes to the Spirit Hall to find Bibi Dong? I still miss the old friendship, and I didn't take the Eight Spider Soul Bones when I got the third soul ring. What does that mean? Do you still use respect when describing Tang San? Also, giving the fairy grass to Ning Rongrong during the Soul Master Competition directly caused the protagonist's trump cards to leak out, and he was hunted down in the end. Who was to blame? What can you do when the Soul Master Competition is over? It's only a few months later,

The protagonist's combat power gradually increases, step by step. To put it bluntly, I like to read this kind of growth. Unlike other novels where he is invincible at the beginning and is bored to death. He challenges Zhao Wuji at level 20 or 30. There are also titled Douluo at the beginning, innate soul power at level 50 at the beginning, etc. It's really boring. It's still good-looking.

Good-looking, but short and weak