
Six Paths of Payne's Self-cultivation
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Nagato chose to become a young man from the cheating system, and at the same time received a cheating ultimate mission. No matter what this ultimate mission is, let's correct all the things that Naruto can't stand. Peace in the ninja world will be accomplished by me, Nagato. As for which world we will be thrown into by the system in the future, let's talk about it then.
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Official(19)Scraped 11d ago
Personally considered poisonous point
From the fact that the author has been constantly trolling Boruto, it can be seen that the author is a Naruto fan. Also, if you are not a Naruto fan, you cannot write a Naruto fanfic, but could you please give the author some tips? 1. The author said that there are more than a dozen ninja villages in the richest land of Earth. Although this seems unrealistic to most people, Kishimoto did not describe the country's system in detail, but it just seems a bit laughable. During the Warring States Period, when the Earth Kingdom was the richest, Uchiha, Senju, Hinata, and Kaguya still had no need to fight back and forth in the Land of Fire? 2. Is Shiro's mother from the Land of Snow? Just because Ice Release has a bit of snow, it means it belongs to the Land of Snow? I'm afraid the author doesn't know that Kirigakure has a family called Minazuki. Here is a little common sense. The Uchiha clan is suitable for Kirigakure to be a Mizukage family (pretending not to know that the most popular one in Kirigakure is Fire Release). This is also what the author said. 3. Uchiha Kage has to call Sarutobi Hiruzen uncle? The author also clarifies the relationship between the two seriously below. Hiruzen: Mirror, your dad and I are old classmates, you have to call me uncle. Uchiha Mirror and Sarutobi Hiruzen's old teammates looked confused. We carried the knife for the second generation together, but now you want to be their father🌚. By the way, Shisui is not Kagami's son. Thank you. There is a generation between them. If two people have the same hairstyle, they must be father and son. Look at Madara and Sasuke. Finally, let me tell you a secret. Before Sarutobi Hiruzen, the Sarutobi family was nothing. It was all led by Sarutobi Hiruzen (pretending not to know Sasuke's name seems to be Fugaku hoping that Sasuke would become a ninja like Sarutobi Sasuke when he grew up. Could this be the reason why the third generation defaulted to Danzo's annihilation of the clan (?6?1?0?7?6?0?6?1?0?6)) The above is just my personal opinion. If you don't have any requirements for details, you can still read it. Hiss~ (The necessary modal particles after each sentence of Uncle Snake in this book are circled and will be tested) Why five stars? I saw no one in the book review section who questioned the low star rating. I was afraid that if the star rating was low, the sexy author would delete the book review online.
I'm drunk, and I read another chapter. When I opened the eyes of reincarnation, did I open two eyes of reincarnation? Both are Ben's eyes. It doesn't mean that Ban can't evolve into the Samsara Eye if he uses Izanagi. Six Paths is the reincarnation eye that evolves directly from the Byakugan. The best explanation for the Uzumaki clan is that the second son of Asura Otsutsuki left the family and changed his surname to Uzumaki. The eldest son and the second son separated. The eldest son Senju and the second son Uzumaki are easy to explain. Also, Otsutsuki is an alien whose chakra is from outside and senjutsu is from the earth. You keep saying that the descendants of Otsutsuki are immortal eyes, bones, blood and bodies, which is very annoying. Jugo's power of senjutsu has nothing to do with Otsutsuki? I gave Nagato a reincarnation eye, but Nagato evolved another one himself? Funny me to death hahaha
Particularly poor jonins are ninjas who are jounin in one aspect but chuunin in other aspects. You definitely consider the special jounin to be an elite jounin, right? And Akatsuki, who only let Xiaonan join after Xiaonan defeated Xia, also showed his strength when fighting Obito. If Izanagi Obito hadn't been there, he would have died. You actually said that Konan is a special Jonin template?
:, (?6?1?0?7?6?0?6?1?0?6) I'm sore
[██▓?7?5?7?4]2019 Good Luck Loading
Chapter 8: What kind of thing is this?
The Land of Fire has always been the strongest country, and this comic was drawn by Masashi Kishimoto. Who the hell is Oda?
My eldest brother, Zabuza, was beaten in Wave Country.
To be honest, when I saw the second picture, I didn't want to read it.
Look at a few more pictures. If they don't look good, I'm leaving.
What can I say?
You talk too much nonsense. If you want to write, write about the protagonist. You write a protagonist, and you directly use the reincarnation technique, when, and so on. It's too damn verbose for you to write like this. Can you see how other people write it? I really can't stand it anymore. There are many times that I have to vomit.
Better not to look at it
Sometimes I feel like I can't figure it out at all. Is the author writing a novel, a monologue, a time travel fanfic, or my own imagination? Can you sort out the order, and don't write whatever comes to mind like a primary school student writing a composition, okay?
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Official(19)Scraped 11d ago
Personally considered poisonous point
From the fact that the author has been constantly trolling Boruto, it can be seen that the author is a Naruto fan. Also, if you are not a Naruto fan, you cannot write a Naruto fanfic, but could you please give the author some tips? 1. The author said that there are more than a dozen ninja villages in the richest land of Earth. Although this seems unrealistic to most people, Kishimoto did not describe the country's system in detail, but it just seems a bit laughable. During the Warring States Period, when the Earth Kingdom was the richest, Uchiha, Senju, Hinata, and Kaguya still had no need to fight back and forth in the Land of Fire? 2. Is Shiro's mother from the Land of Snow? Just because Ice Release has a bit of snow, it means it belongs to the Land of Snow? I'm afraid the author doesn't know that Kirigakure has a family called Minazuki. Here is a little common sense. The Uchiha clan is suitable for Kirigakure to be a Mizukage family (pretending not to know that the most popular one in Kirigakure is Fire Release). This is also what the author said. 3. Uchiha Kage has to call Sarutobi Hiruzen uncle? The author also clarifies the relationship between the two seriously below. Hiruzen: Mirror, your dad and I are old classmates, you have to call me uncle. Uchiha Mirror and Sarutobi Hiruzen's old teammates looked confused. We carried the knife for the second generation together, but now you want to be their father🌚. By the way, Shisui is not Kagami's son. Thank you. There is a generation between them. If two people have the same hairstyle, they must be father and son. Look at Madara and Sasuke. Finally, let me tell you a secret. Before Sarutobi Hiruzen, the Sarutobi family was nothing. It was all led by Sarutobi Hiruzen (pretending not to know Sasuke's name seems to be Fugaku hoping that Sasuke would become a ninja like Sarutobi Sasuke when he grew up. Could this be the reason why the third generation defaulted to Danzo's annihilation of the clan (?6?1?0?7?6?0?6?1?0?6)) The above is just my personal opinion. If you don't have any requirements for details, you can still read it. Hiss~ (The necessary modal particles after each sentence of Uncle Snake in this book are circled and will be tested) Why five stars? I saw no one in the book review section who questioned the low star rating. I was afraid that if the star rating was low, the sexy author would delete the book review online.
I'm drunk, and I read another chapter. When I opened the eyes of reincarnation, did I open two eyes of reincarnation? Both are Ben's eyes. It doesn't mean that Ban can't evolve into the Samsara Eye if he uses Izanagi. Six Paths is the reincarnation eye that evolves directly from the Byakugan. The best explanation for the Uzumaki clan is that the second son of Asura Otsutsuki left the family and changed his surname to Uzumaki. The eldest son and the second son separated. The eldest son Senju and the second son Uzumaki are easy to explain. Also, Otsutsuki is an alien whose chakra is from outside and senjutsu is from the earth. You keep saying that the descendants of Otsutsuki are immortal eyes, bones, blood and bodies, which is very annoying. Jugo's power of senjutsu has nothing to do with Otsutsuki? I gave Nagato a reincarnation eye, but Nagato evolved another one himself? Funny me to death hahaha
Particularly poor jonins are ninjas who are jounin in one aspect but chuunin in other aspects. You definitely consider the special jounin to be an elite jounin, right? And Akatsuki, who only let Xiaonan join after Xiaonan defeated Xia, also showed his strength when fighting Obito. If Izanagi Obito hadn't been there, he would have died. You actually said that Konan is a special Jonin template?
:, (?6?1?0?7?6?0?6?1?0?6) I'm sore
[██▓?7?5?7?4]2019 Good Luck Loading
Chapter 8: What kind of thing is this?
The Land of Fire has always been the strongest country, and this comic was drawn by Masashi Kishimoto. Who the hell is Oda?
My eldest brother, Zabuza, was beaten in Wave Country.
To be honest, when I saw the second picture, I didn't want to read it.
Look at a few more pictures. If they don't look good, I'm leaving.
What can I say?
You talk too much nonsense. If you want to write, write about the protagonist. You write a protagonist, and you directly use the reincarnation technique, when, and so on. It's too damn verbose for you to write like this. Can you see how other people write it? I really can't stand it anymore. There are many times that I have to vomit.
Better not to look at it
Sometimes I feel like I can't figure it out at all. Is the author writing a novel, a monologue, a time travel fanfic, or my own imagination? Can you sort out the order, and don't write whatever comes to mind like a primary school student writing a composition, okay?
























