Immortality: One Lot for Each Day of Life

Read 14 chapters The writing is too depressing, and I feel like the author put his own lifestyle into it. Just like a beggar, step by step towards the top, I guess the author thinks so, but have you read it yourself? The protagonist has no characteristics at all, his mind is not flexible, and there are many psychological dramas. Being stuck is not a reason to become the strongest. Others are writing about key points, but you are just writing a diary. To be honest, it makes you feel irritated.

Why would a woman who just met her give her house to you if she didn't give it to someone else? Just because you are the protagonist? Poison, and this description of the protagonist at the beginning is like a thing that has never seen a woman, and he has been lusting after it. Now you are a Qi Practicing 3. You have a cheat, don't you think it would be more comfortable to go up early and enjoy it? And then the protagonist's IQ is average, and the plot description is also average. If you want to arrange a heroine, arrange a normal one. The widow will also fall in love with you.

To be honest, I don't know what I wrote

I feel a bit like a holy mother. I always think of my cousin's family. This is not a sign-in document. It is clearly a family cultivation document!

The protagonist has a lot of inner drama :) Very good, good luck to the author.

The writing is very good and the prose flows smoothly, but I felt that the storyline was not engaging enough.

Deadly eyes, so rotten that they are fresh and refined

Yes, there is the taste of cultivating immortality, and there is also the taste of solving emotional needs.

I'm speechless to find a wife even with those conditions.

I just feel that there are more psychological descriptions than reality. The author's psychological descriptions are really too much. The author may not realize it himself, but why don't other readers talk about it? No reminder?