Live Forever by Raising a Dog

I don't know if it's my personal problem. Anyway, I am particularly displeased with the author's description of dogs in his books. The protagonist's impression of dogs is that they are very sinister. Can't it be described as smart? Then the dog's smile, the protagonist here also uses a sinister smile to describe it. And whenever this dog smiles, it is a sinister smile. I have several dogs at home, but I have never seen this dog's sinister smile. What follows is the dog's disdain for the protagonist. Anyway, there are a lot of derogatory words. In my mind, dogs have always been a symbol of loyalty. Every time I come home and my dog ​​recognizes me, I feel happy every time. It's like I am its whole world. Every compliment I give makes it happy. I also like dogs very much. But I am really annoyed by your derogatory words. If you can't describe it, don't describe it. And the author is actually quite curious, what kind of environment do you have to live in for a derogatory term to become a compliment?

This book is not bad, unlike other books where every time he levels up, it feels like the whole world is going to kill him.

He gets jealous at every turn and can't control his emotions. He is like a reckless man who hurts his brother. If it weren't for the pig's feet, he would have died long ago. Not even tactful

In the middle, he was always jealous of his brother and lost his mind, which was completely different from the character at the beginning. Moreover, the protagonist's brothers and colleagues are not described as life-and-death friends, but only relationships of interest.

Oops, don't read it, don't read it. As long as you have read many books, you will probably not be able to stand it anymore after reading a few chapters. It's a waste of time.

Why would someone exchange 4 pounds of rabbit meat for 7 pounds of japonica rice? Can't understand

You can use only one word to modify the word "fight"

The previous writing is pretty good, although it has some flaws, but when I saw the training camp, I couldn't help it, the ink was so stained, and the scenes were switched back and forth, it was uncomfortable and nauseating to watch for a long time. In particular, there are so many useless perspectives that I haven't written anything for a long time. If I hadn't seen a subject I like, I wouldn't be able to stick to it. Moreover, the protagonist's character traits are overwritten, and the loyalty is always emphasized, which is embarrassing. It's okay to give meat to the duck brother in the front. The plot is not cumbersome, just know that this is a foreshadowing, and it can also reflect the personality charm of the protagonist. I can't complain about the training camp. There is this kind of plot later, report + two-star package.

Before the training conflict started, five-star food and grass. After the training conflict, two stars are too many. The key point of this conflict plot is to imitate the water monkey next door. Author, you really have nothing to write.

The plots about controlling beasts and fighting are okay, but sometimes plots about the humanity of the protagonist make me feel a little embarrassed. (What kind of loyalty? You must repay a favor. Although I think this is okay, I still feel awkward)!