Mercenary Career after Time Travel
by Farewell From Fallen Leaves
About This Novel
Do you want to understand the meaning of life? What are you doing? This is not infinitely terrifying! Decisive no... Why am I still traveling through time? Do you want to survive in this world where there are only people and monsters? Go fight the monsters! Result......
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Official(2)Scraped 4d ago
What did you write?
The first person is a failure. What does the first chapter look like? Just leave.
Looking a little confused
I feel that the plot of the first chapter is not very complete, the description of the characters is not very complete, and some details are not grasped in place. The origin of the story is not clearly explained, including how the protagonist traveled through time, and there is no detailed explanation. It makes people look confused and confused, and they don't know what they are talking about. The relationship between the characters is also very complicated, and the dialogue part does not explain the speaking character in detail. I hope the author can make some progress.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 4d ago
What did you write?
The first person is a failure. What does the first chapter look like? Just leave.
Looking a little confused
I feel that the plot of the first chapter is not very complete, the description of the characters is not very complete, and some details are not grasped in place. The origin of the story is not clearly explained, including how the protagonist traveled through time, and there is no detailed explanation. It makes people look confused and confused, and they don't know what they are talking about. The relationship between the characters is also very complicated, and the dialogue part does not explain the speaking character in detail. I hope the author can make some progress.
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