Douluo: the Peerless True Glory

The Noumenon Sect of this book is still bound to the Tianhun Empire. The protagonist is a time traveler. He knows the fate of the original book and helps Tianhun, so he won't trample on it again. The second point is that it is not acceptable to have Wei Na as one of the main heroines. The original book has clearly stated that after Long Aotian sacrificed his life to protect Wei Na, Wei Na turned around and wanted to be with Huo Yuhao. Do you still want to accept the plot even if she is exposed? It wouldn't be that big of a controversy if the protagonist traveled through time to another character and accepted it as Long Aotian, who was cuckolded. Knowing the complete plot of the original work and accepting it as if nothing was wrong would be a bit poisonous. I hope this female protagonist will be deleted.

After reading ten chapters, isn't your Noumenon Sect always using soul skills? Where are the combat skills?

, I hope that the protagonist can obtain the Heavenly Dream Ice Silkworm as soon as possible. With the Heavenly Dream Ice Silkworm, there is a chance to gain the support of the Ice Emperor, the Snow Emperor, and Electrolux as well. It's really frustrating to see Huo's good hand in the original work being played badly. I hope the author can make reasonable use of those resources.

What's going on? Has QQ Reading started using AI to write articles? 1,000 Words expanded to 3,000 words? It's okay for reading, but not for listening. There's so much nonsense and it's so uncomfortable.

I think both Tianmeng Iceworm and Electrolux need to be fished out. He's already traveled through time and space, why don't you care about Huo Gua?

Hello, author, late stage Tianmeng Ice Silkworm and Electrolux, Gold of Living Things, Golden Tortoiseshell (Small Piece of Gold of Living Things), Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Evil Emperor (Evil Eye) Eyes of ice and fire, tunnels of ten thousand years of ice, and all the opportunities that Huo Yuhao has, I hope you can grab them. After all, a dog (Huo Yuhao) does not deserve to have them all. I hope the author will give them some thought.

It's beautiful, well written, and the progress is well controlled. Don't cut it.

What you write makes no sense. The main purpose of the original martial arts is to create combat skills that suit you. After the second awakening of the original martial spirit, you can turn your body into a weapon and use it. You are blessed with buffs, but it is not as thorough as Long Aotian in the original work. It is not a bad review except for showing off.

However, the protagonist has a true martial spirit, and the Ice Emperor is actually not a good match, and even the beast martial spirit is not a good match. I suggested that Electrolux wash away the ice attribute of the martial spirit given by Tianmeng, and then have some adventures. For example, the dragon bones of the Ice and Fire Dragon King were sacrificed and turned into weapons, and finally merged into weapon souls. Spears and halberds are both very good. When a soul master becomes a divine weapon, his martial spirit will become a divine weapon. Together with his original martial spirit, he becomes invincible.

Finally, there is a martial soul written about Long Aotian. The monthly ticket is yours. Come on, author, come on!