The Beginning of Peerless Tang Sect: I Resurrected Qian Renxue

Is Qian Renxue the heroine, more than a friend but not a lover? What kind of god is the protagonist? Is Qian Renxue still an angel god?

Qian Renxue will not hate the other party just because of a rabbit martial spirit. The protagonist clearly doesn't like Jiang Nannan, but he has squandered all the opportunities to conquer Jiang Nannan. How can Yang Lie pursue him? Not only does he have no chance, but he also has a very strong love rival (the protagonist is definitely a mountain in Jiang Nannan's heart. Yang Lie wants to catch up with him, so what should he do with the protagonist) For example, at most, Jiang Nannan couldn't stand it anymore and made do with Yang Lie, just like Wang Yuyan from Tian Long Ba Bu. In the end, she reluctantly stayed with Duan Yu for a few days, and finally left. She didn't create opportunities for Yang Lie and wasted Yang Lie's opportunities. The final outcome can only be that the protagonist forces the person who likes him to someone else.

What was originally a good story was ruined by the heroine. Anyway, I didn't feel the brilliance of this Qian Renxue at all. It was nothing at all. It can be said that this character was very failed in shaping, without any personality charm, which was annoying to watch.

I don't know how to evaluate it. In short, it is macroscopic. Reading novels is mainly about macroscopic goals. Many novels travel through time and ignore most of the microscopic aspects. They just want to become stronger and become gods and unify. Then there is a lot of reality missing. After all, they have traveled through time and space. I have to change something, so this is the reason why I gave it four stars. As for the remaining one star, it is a relationship issue. I can only say that it made me sad to watch it. I don't comment on what kind of person Qian Renxue is, but the character of the protagonist makes me sad. Originally, they were resurrected. He became the escort, but ended up being the escort for Qian Renxue. A person who could bear the humiliation and burden in the enemy's country for more than ten years could not control himself at every turn. This is also very speechless. There is also Hanguang. It's really miserable, but isn't Yu Hao miserable? I mentioned Yu Hao earlier. Yeah, yeah, I will write about Hanguang's pity and all kinds of satisfaction later. Are there few miserable people on the mainland? The miserable people are those who have no soul power, or are born with low soul power. Their parents want their children to go to Shrek. It's true, but there is no school except Shrek? Innate seventh level, except Shrek, which academy doesn't care? So you would rather be a phoenix tail than a chicken head? This is the point I don't understand the most, as well as the various accommodations towards Qian Renxue

Is it the main heroine Qian Renxue? Is it the single heroine Qian Renxue?

The male protagonist licks the dog until there is nothing left. The plot is weird. This is a world of soul masters, but it is not a real world. Being strong is the foundation. It allows the Silver Dragon King to gain memories of the future and cooperate with the male protagonist. It is simply weird, this world. Soul beasts and martial soul masters are fundamentally opposed. Unless the laws of this world change, like other planes, there will no longer be a soul master as a profession. The male protagonist's character is a bit coquettish and not decisive enough.

I hope this book doesn't have a harem or multiple heroines (›´ω`‹)

Not to mention too much, this book is already considered to be the best among fan fictions, it can even surpass the original work. It is very interesting. I hope everyone will read this book more and it will become a god. It can be said that it is already on the ceiling of fantasy.

The writing is okay at the beginning and the plot becomes more abstract as it goes on. The protagonist's action logic and IQ are also a mystery. It feels like it is at the level of a three-year-old child. Qian Renxue is even more stupid and has a negative IQ (the most annoying character). A considerable part of the ink is given to the supporting characters. Apart from the pacing being a bit slow, I quite like it. It's just that you can finish the beginning without ending (Shrek Nationwide Soul) Those on the bench for the Master Competition, Dai Huabin, several key characters in the Ningtian Temple and the elders who were attracted, Princess Jiujiu, the three people in the Star Dou Forest. Secretly watching Qiandao Flow through the Thunder Tribulation, the Titan Giant Ape chasing a pair of soul hunting teams who were transferred by Gu Yuena, etc.) Tang San's sudden arrival in the Soul Master Competition is probably because the previous pace was too slow and he wanted to promote the plot and then build a climax. From this point on, the story begins with pure stupidity. The ninth-level soul master of the Sun and Moon Empire and a group of people are just fucking stupid and have negative IQs. I also said before that I had to go to the empire to work as an undercover agent, otherwise the three empires would join forces to attack the temple. None of this is written, and it feels like it's purely the author's Shrek Academy chapter. It's so exciting to write. I had to realize that more than half of the book had passed, and it was too late to write. In the early stage, the combat power is normal and the cheats are strong, but not outrageous. Later, the protagonist's mental power, which is level 49, has reached the level of a god. A person's mental strength. It can put the entire Shrek Academy's Titled Douluo and a series of powerful people to sleep (including level 99) to destroy Shrek in one night. Inexplicably, the protagonist changes from a 4-winged angel to a 12-winged angel. The protagonist starts out as a two-winged angel, but then becomes four-winged, with his wings turning golden and his bloodline becoming pure. Also, this divine exam was taken once for idiots at level 10. The protagonist took the exam 4 times, and the level 49 divine exam was cancelled. (Then a bunch of plug-ins were added inexplicably, just because the author couldn't figure out what to take the next 6 exams.) In the early stages, the pace was slow and the protagonist's strength improved relatively slowly. Later, the author found that he wrote too much nonsense. The book is almost over, and the main character is still a loser who hasn't reached level 50 yet. Inexplicably, a bunch of plug-ins are given that are far worse than all the plug-ins added at the beginning of the book. Qian Renxue is standing next to me and comparing them, it is really a bit low. To sum up, just read the first few chapters, the rest is too stupid.

1. The protagonist is too NPC. You can try to reduce the description, language or demeanor of the protagonist. Let the protagonist's actions be expressed more by the reader's imagination, let the reader want to think about it, and let the reader take the role of himself 2. The transformation of the protagonist is too sudden. For example, in the opening scene of Kaosha Gray Wolf, we could describe more frightening scenes and focus on the transformation. 3. What year is the book from? Still smiling bitterly every day, it's still the part about Sand Gray Wolf. After killing him, you can simply write about the joy of the rest of your life after the disaster, and the joy of being promoted, instead of smiling bitterly, smiling bitterly... 4. The creativity of the book is quite good. I hope you can write better and better.