
Perfect World: Shocked, My Wife is Liu Shen
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[New book "Perfect World: Marry Yuechan as a Wife, Have Many Children and Blessings", please collect it, please vote for recommendation, thank you! Reborn in another world, obtained the empress cultivation system, and was bound to a willow tree at the beginning. Ding, you water the willow tree ten times, the intimacy level increases by 10 points, and you obtain the origin of the ancient blue dragon! "Give your wife more water and she will grow taller soon!" Ding, you turned the willow tree land into black soil, the growth rate of the willow tree increased by 10%, and you obtained the Black Emperor Water Emperor Fist! "When my wife transforms, I will no longer be alone. I feel so lonely!" Ding, you water the farmyard manure for the Willow God, and the willow tree grows green branches. You have obtained the Supreme Strength and the Supreme Yang, the Nine Yang Magic! Ding, your supreme Yang Qi nourishes the willow tree, the consciousness of the willow tree begins to awaken, and you obtain the Great Freedom Black Gold Sword Qi! "Haha, I feel like I'm so strong now. I should be able to protect my wife and give her happiness!" Ding, you defended the willow tree from the invasion of ferocious beasts, your blood triggered the willow tree's consciousness, and the willow tree's spiritual consciousness awakened, shocking the wilderness. This... This is actually a perfect world, and my wife is Liu Shen?
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Official(225)Scraped 6d ago
The author is great
I hope that Yu Zimo can be taken away. This Yu Zimo can be said to be a BUG. I feel that many people have not noticed that she has low strength, but she can see the scene in the long river of time. Even if she looks at Shi Hao's future, it is just a little blood between the eyebrows. This is against the sky. It is really a bug. I feel that after a little training, she will at least be a Lu Jin level immortal emperor.
Poor writing style and illogical logic
I traveled here with my friends and found this book. The book exuded a strange light. I said this book is very poisonous and cannot be read. My friend maintains his Mahayana cultivation level and the blood of Shennong, so he pretends to be cool. He said: "Looking at the name of this book, you can tell that it is poison! However, no one in the world has tasted it and does not know its nature. I am a descendant of Shennong and my cultivation is as high as the heavens. What should I fear? Today I will follow the example of my ancestors and taste a hundred herbs." Then I turned over the book. I and a group of friends all admired his courage. There was an immortal who wanted to write a poem about courage. But I never expected that my friend would scream in agony after just looking at one page of the book, and everyone would be horrified! His seven orifices were bleeding, his face was ferocious, he was vomiting blood in his mouth, and his whole body instantly became withered and thin. He quickly took out the elixir and asked him to take it, but before he could save him, he was already helpless. When my friend was dying, he only left one sentence: "This book is a hundred times more poisonous than the poisons in the world." Then he turned into ashes and left. It was only then that I remembered what the ancients said, even the Great Luo Jinxian could not save you. Everyone expressed regret and lamented that the ancients never deceived me. At this point, I would like to advise all fellow Taoists who do not have the Daluo Jinxian cultivation level to not watch and leave quickly, and not to show off forcefully. Those who hope to come after you must remember this!
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Overall, the protagonist is a little too obsessed with Shi Hao, and it would be best to accept all the heroines, except Wang Xi
They often say that Liu Shen lived for ten thousand years, that Liu Shen was the Immortal King, and that he would become an Immortal King in ten thousand years. He must have lived at least hundreds of thousands of years, and the Great Emperor can also live for thirty thousand years.
author
Can you read the original work first and write a fanfic? Shennong was poisoned to death at the beginning.
What you wrote before is pretty good. What did you write next?
If you write it perfectly, it will be perfect. Why the hell did you add Douluo and Dou Po into it? Do you really treat others as fools?
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Official(225)Scraped 6d ago
The author is great
I hope that Yu Zimo can be taken away. This Yu Zimo can be said to be a BUG. I feel that many people have not noticed that she has low strength, but she can see the scene in the long river of time. Even if she looks at Shi Hao's future, it is just a little blood between the eyebrows. This is against the sky. It is really a bug. I feel that after a little training, she will at least be a Lu Jin level immortal emperor.
Poor writing style and illogical logic
I traveled here with my friends and found this book. The book exuded a strange light. I said this book is very poisonous and cannot be read. My friend maintains his Mahayana cultivation level and the blood of Shennong, so he pretends to be cool. He said: "Looking at the name of this book, you can tell that it is poison! However, no one in the world has tasted it and does not know its nature. I am a descendant of Shennong and my cultivation is as high as the heavens. What should I fear? Today I will follow the example of my ancestors and taste a hundred herbs." Then I turned over the book. I and a group of friends all admired his courage. There was an immortal who wanted to write a poem about courage. But I never expected that my friend would scream in agony after just looking at one page of the book, and everyone would be horrified! His seven orifices were bleeding, his face was ferocious, he was vomiting blood in his mouth, and his whole body instantly became withered and thin. He quickly took out the elixir and asked him to take it, but before he could save him, he was already helpless. When my friend was dying, he only left one sentence: "This book is a hundred times more poisonous than the poisons in the world." Then he turned into ashes and left. It was only then that I remembered what the ancients said, even the Great Luo Jinxian could not save you. Everyone expressed regret and lamented that the ancients never deceived me. At this point, I would like to advise all fellow Taoists who do not have the Daluo Jinxian cultivation level to not watch and leave quickly, and not to show off forcefully. Those who hope to come after you must remember this!
Quick update
Overall, the protagonist is a little too obsessed with Shi Hao, and it would be best to accept all the heroines, except Wang Xi
They often say that Liu Shen lived for ten thousand years, that Liu Shen was the Immortal King, and that he would become an Immortal King in ten thousand years. He must have lived at least hundreds of thousands of years, and the Great Emperor can also live for thirty thousand years.
author
Can you read the original work first and write a fanfic? Shennong was poisoned to death at the beginning.
What you wrote before is pretty good. What did you write next?
If you write it perfectly, it will be perfect. Why the hell did you add Douluo and Dou Po into it? Do you really treat others as fools?













