Longevity Begins with Trading in All Realms

Let me talk about the problem I saw. The protagonist is a time traveler who has lived for decades. He is so poor at cultivating Qi that he has no idea of ​​finding a way to make money. What has he been doing for decades? Then after getting the golden finger, he killed an alchemist. It was quite funny to say that it was the first time he killed someone. After decades of living, he went to the frontier to open up wasteland, and that was the first time he killed someone? Then why he offended the alchemist was not explained clearly. The author is really not particular about details, and there are a few typos. I just finished upgrading to the third level of Qi Refining Peak, and when I turned the page, I said that Changchun Palace is rubbish and I can't upgrade to the third level of Qi Refining. If you write like this, you won't be able to write more. Then the gold finger is also very vague. When can it be traded? You can only choose one person, or what? Then in the 15th picture, the main character is reading a book and introducing geography. Then you spent the previous decades lying in bed and doing nothing? You haven't made any money, you haven't learned any skills, you haven't improved your cultivation, and you haven't even read a book? I hope the author can polish more details, otherwise there will be too many loopholes.

It's too rough, the big direction is unclear, and the small details are inconsistent. Either you make an outline, or you divide it into chapters to determine the main line of a paragraph. 1~200, 200~400 Are determined in this way, and then the main connection relationships can be explained and written down.