Over Fifty Years Old, He Started Cultivating Immortals by Raising His Children

I was convinced after reading it. It was so awesome. I was very angry after reading it. I never comment on novels. This is the first time I am so angry that I comment. I am so convinced. Abandoned

It's really rubbish. I can't stand more than 50 chapters. If you don't improve yourself and your children, then you can improve your family when you are strong, right? What the hell was drawn in the lottery? I can't stand it at all.

It's not about relying on this or that. Travelers and plug-ins all play this way, so what's the use of plug-ins? Not to mention invincible, at least you have to fly with pleasure, let alone fly with pleasure, fly with torture. So disappointed

What an ancient way of writing. Nowadays, system streams are basically filled with fun articles. Let's not talk about sadistic articles here. They are also suffering. Establishing a family, suddenly there is official exploitation, the youngest son dies in the middle stage of Qi refining, and three foundation-building forces are provoked in the late stage of Qi refining. The family still has no foundation, and it is all supported by one person.

Low-grade spiritual treasure? Fellow Taoist, are you serious? I still believe in low-grade magic weapons, and yet Zhenxian Division is blackmailing you? One hundred spiritual stones per year? Is it possible for a cultivator to live in the mortal world without understanding it? Want to start a family? What can that poor place produce? With these hundred spirit stones, I might as well stay in Xiuxianfang City, right? Can't you just hide in the mountains and meditate? Is the big move leaked? And that female shop owner? There is no one who knows how to leak information about you. After all, you are also a casual cultivator. Are you familiar with others? Just tell me that you brought your son to spend money? Obviously harming you? Just go take care of business? Why are you unwilling to betray you? Will you be followed and then killed again? Will a hero save the beauty when there is injustice on the road? Just take it directly to Xiuxianfang City? Or take it directly to your home for spiritual practice? Your wife has never seen her spiritual practice, how can she bring a stranger in?

Let's change the name to The Passion of the System Protagonist. It's so frustrating to watch.

The things the protagonist gets are all for nurturing his children. He has worked so hard and done so much, but he can't get any benefit from it.

The novel itself is well written, and I have seen more than 50 pieces, but to be honest, I don't understand the author's writing logic. In other words, what is the author's point of writing that makes it interesting for readers to read? A novel must have ups and downs and a main line. The protagonist of your novel is a little guy with a third level of Qi refining, but he wants to train five children in the family to become immortals in the mortal world. It is simply a joke. The most ridiculous thing is that the protagonist himself cannot be improved by the system. If a family wants to develop, it must have a safety guarantee. Can the protagonist's garbage level guarantee the development of the family? What makes your novel attractive to readers? Is it just a matter of improving this child's cultivation a little bit, and then raising another child's spiritual roots a little bit every once in a while? Then the protagonist, an old rookie, was slowly trapped on the third level of Qi Refining waiting to die!

Rubbish, you have to write 1 million words to build your foundation, right?

There are quite a lot of poisonous points in the novel. For example, it is completely counter-logical to leave the good spiritual roots of the second child without upgrading and cultivating them, but to improve the boss and the third child. The second child has high spiritual roots and a tough temperament. Instead of focusing on cultivating and improving his cultivation, he consumes his family essence on the first and third children. It is simply anti-intellectual behavior.