People Are Writing Diaries in Doupo, and Xun'er Lives in Bengbu!

Leave a five-star review for your favorite wife below. The author really misses the plot after seeing it!

Please tell me first, why should I give it to Samsung? My reason is that this book did not make me feel bright, highlight his characteristics, or have any attractive features. There are two words below the three stars: OK. I think this book is quite poor to be honest, but if he can write it, it is much better than those of us who read novels. Maybe it's because I read a lot of diary novels, and my vision has been sharpened by them. Let me talk about my personal opinions here. First of all, I think it is outrageous that diary novels will give you some genius treasures when you write a diary. You write novels, but you don't want people to read them, and they don't have any impact or value, so they just give you a bunch of good stuff. Even the system is outrageous. In my opinion, diary novels are more often about writing out one's own voice or inner thoughts, thereby influencing others to become curious about one's own views and ideas, and to develop a relationship with that person. Because the system will distribute diaries to others, it will reward them with something, urging them to write diaries, etc. It fits the plot very well, but I personally think that the things given should be more auxiliary, such as training resources, exercises, elixirs, or money. The system rewards attack pills and the like for keeping a diary, which makes your own cultivation more interesting and interesting to write about. Rewarding some outrageous things, such as magical energy or elixirs, is simply outrageous. Not to mention that the artifact is Guan Yu's Qinglong Yanyue Sword. If you give it to an ordinary person, he can use it? Are those awesome elixirs and the like not afraid of pushing him to death? Moreover, I feel that the description of the emotional scenes in this book is too crude, and there is no sense of immersion. It feels like it just gives you a general idea, and then you can imagine and make up your own imagination. For example, what was written when Xiao Xun'er appeared, it made people feel that the mature and stable Xiao Xun'er in the animation was about six or seven years old, but it turned out that he had just arrived at Xiao's primary school, and he was still doing this. Although he cried loudly at the end, the Xiao Xun'er written in the front made people feel that he was already a teenager in the animation. That's it, three stars is okay (personally, I feel it's the best among the upper, middle, lower, and lower)

The protagonist of the private pig, the diaosi author, what kind of Gou Ba stuff did he write?

It is not recommended to have realistic elements in the world of heavens. For example, if you have perfection, you can have Douluo, etc., But suddenly Yang Mi is a bit outrageous. Don't try to mix entertainment and fantasy. The hodgepodge is really not good-looking. I hope the author can modify it. Thank you.

Emmm, it's actually not bad. The most important thing is probably the two major retreat points, one is the three thousand clones, and the other is the little boy transformed into a puppet. Although you are also aware of lightning protection and emphasize that the clone is only used for practice, the puppet has not started to be used. But the existence of this thing makes it difficult for readers, especially the puppet. If you ask him to go out to inquire about information, he is just using it. It is difficult for you to grasp this thing, and many readers will directly label you with a 🫏 when they see this, and they may even give you a two-star review after it is finished. If you ask me, why don't you just get rid of this incarnation and be done with it? This patch is very easy to apply. This avatar does not have to exist. Delete it. Hello, me, hello everyone🤥🤡

1. After testing the water, the third update! 2. If the monthly ticket is over 20, three updates will be issued, and one update will be added for every 20. 3. Ten five-star reviews, three updates. 4. If the number of recommendation votes exceeds 300, it will be updated three times. //Everyone, the author can't reach even one of the four fligs! ?

Oh my god, everyone from ancient times has come in. You haven't solved the two worlds yet, so you are bragging, and you have brought in a bunch of other worlds. Isn't your world going to collapse? Your novel is about to collapse. Will you come back with integrity?

I'm afraid the author has never read the original work of Doupo, but he can actually say in the comment area that the Soul Heaven Realm is the Imperial Realm, and there are all kinds of unnatural words coming out in an endless stream😕

What is this? There is Dou Qi Continent, and there is Douluo Continent. And what about Wu Dong Qian Kun?

Whether it's a harem or no heroine, this kind of thing about the protagonist PC is really jarring and brings down the perception.